Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid repetition. Use complete sentences and clarify your points clearly. For example, mention how often it rains and how the weather affects your activities, using linking words to connect ideas.

Example: The weather where I live is mostly sunny, although it can sometimes be cloudy. Rain is quite rare, which makes it perfect for outdoor training and activities.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and repetition. Complete your sentences fully and explain your preferences clearly with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: From my perspective, I prefer hot weather because it gives me a nice tan. I usually go to the beach when it's sunny, and I feel more comfortable in warm weather than in cold.

Suggestion: Try to avoid repeating words and provide more specific reasons for your preference. Also, explain how the weather affects your mood or activities, using linking words for coherence.

Example: I prefer dry weather like in the desert because I find it more comfortable and relaxing. The dry climate suits my lifestyle and helps me feel more energetic.

Suggestion: Try to speak more fluently without repeating words. Use complete sentences and explain clearly when and why you check the weather forecast, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but sometimes I do before going out to do activities. This helps me decide if the weather is suitable for training or practicing sports.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide clear and specific ideas about the effects of climate change and what actions should be taken, using linking words to organize your answer.

Example: If we don't reduce pollution and switch to renewable energy instead of fossil fuels, there could be huge disasters. Therefore, the whole world should work together to protect the environment.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and complete your sentences clearly. Explain why you want to visit such places and what interests you about the different climate, using linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Canada because the climate there is cold and there is ice, which I have never experienced before. It would be exciting to try something new.

× The rain is quite.

✓ The rain is quite rare.

The sentence 'The rain is quite.' is incomplete and lacks an adjective to describe 'rain'. Adding 'rare' completes the sentence and correctly uses an adjective to describe the noun 'rain'.

× The rain is quite rare and some which which which which it makes which it makes it perfect to to train outdoor and.

✓ The rain is quite rare, which makes it perfect to train outdoors.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words making it unclear. Correcting the sentence structure and removing repetitions clarifies the meaning. 'Outdoors' is the correct adverb form here, and 'to train' is the correct infinitive verb form.

× And my perspective I I prefer sun 'cause it give give me a tall color and I I used to go to the beach when when it's sunny.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer the sun because it gives me a tan color, and I used to go to the beach when it's sunny.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect verb forms. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with the third person singular subject 'sun'. Also, 'a tall color' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a tan color'. Removing repetitions and adding proper articles improves clarity.

× Also I feel comfortable in the sun compared to the.

✓ Also, I feel more comfortable in the sun compared to the cold.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a comparison object after 'compared to the'. Adding 'cold' completes the comparison. Also, 'more comfortable' is the correct comparative form here.

× I prefer dry weather, such as the weather in the desert because I am an Arabic man so I love these conditions and I I really feel comfortable and relaxed with this.

✓ I prefer dry weather, such as the weather in the desert, because I am an Arabic man, so I love these conditions and really feel comfortable and relaxed with them.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect when referring to plural 'conditions'; it should be 'them'. Also, adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× I really don't, but sometimes when I want to go out for doing some activities I check the the weather forecast to to see if I can train or practice my activity or no.

✓ I really don't, but sometimes when I want to go out to do some activities, I check the weather forecast to see if I can train or practice my activity.

The phrase 'go out for doing' is incorrect; it should be 'go out to do'. Also, 'or no' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. Removing repeated words and correcting prepositions improves the sentence.

× There would be a huge disaster if we don't reduce pollution and use an renewable energy energy instead of the fuel energy.

✓ There will be a huge disaster if we don't reduce pollution and use renewable energy instead of fuel energy.

'Would be' is conditional and less certain; 'will be' is more appropriate for a likely future event. 'An renewable' is incorrect; 'renewable' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a renewable' or just 'renewable' is correct. Also, 'energy energy' is repetitive and should be 'energy' only.

× All all of the world should contribute by saying.

✓ All of the world should contribute by acting.

The phrase 'contribute by saying' is unclear and incomplete. It is better to say 'contribute by acting' to imply taking action. Also, removing repeated 'all' improves clarity.

× Yes, I would, maybe I would visit Canada because because the the climate there is is cold and there is ice that I didn't try any any chance in my life.

✓ Yes, I would. Maybe I would visit Canada because the climate there is cold, and there is ice, which I have never experienced in my life.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect tense usage. 'Didn't try any chance' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have never experienced'. Adding commas and correcting tense improves clarity and grammar.