Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免断断续续的句子，保持语言流畅自然。可以用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。同时，注意语法错误，如“it would rains”应为“it sometimes rains”。

Example: I live in Qingdao, a beautiful seaside city. The weather is usually sunny, but sometimes it becomes very cloudy. One important feature is that it sometimes rains for a couple of days.

Suggestion: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“for my for myself”应简化。可以增加一些原因或感受，使内容更丰富。

Example: I definitely prefer hot weather because I enjoy buying ice cream to cool down. My favorite flavor is strawberry, which tastes really refreshing on a hot day.

Suggestion: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复“ice cream”的表达。

Example: I definitely prefer dry weather because it allows me to enjoy my favorite treat, ice cream. For instance, I love the refreshing taste of chocolate ice cream, especially on sunny summer days.

Suggestion: 回答中应避免重复和不自然的表达，如“wouldn't even care about that”。可以更自然地表达习惯和例外情况。

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I don't pay much attention to it. However, when it looks like it might rain for several days, I do check it to prepare accordingly.

Suggestion: 回答内容具体且相关，但语法需改进，如“is significant”应为“are significant”，并且“by the increasing temperature”表达不自然。

Example: I think the effects of climate change in recent years are significant. For example, a small forest near my house has disappeared because rising temperatures have stopped the trees and plants from growing.

Suggestion: 回答中应避免语法错误，如“despite from”应为“apart from”或“besides”。可以用更自然的表达方式描述愿望。

Example: Besides my own city, I would like to visit other cities in Iceland because the climate there is chilly, and I could enjoy the beautiful glacial scenery.

× The weather there is usually. Sunny.

✓ The weather there is usually sunny.

句子中“usually”和“Sunny”之间不应有句号，应该连成一句，表示天气通常是晴朗的。句号导致句子结构不完整。

× sometimes it would rains for a couple of days.

✓ sometimes it would rain for a couple of days.

情态动词would后面应接动词原形，不能加s。这里“rains”应改为“rain”。

× I would definitely go for the hot weather because when the weather is hot I would always like to buy an ice cream for my for myself.

✓ I would definitely go for the hot weather because when the weather is hot I would always like to buy an ice cream for myself.

“for my for myself”中“for my”多余，应删除，保持表达简洁正确。

× I think the effects of climate change in recent years is significant.

✓ I think the effects of climate change in recent years are significant.

主语“effects”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。

× I think despite from my own city, I would like to experience another different climate in other cities of Iceland because it's always chilly around there and I could enjoy the beautiful glacial sceneries there.

✓ I think despite my own city, I would like to experience another different climate in other cities of Iceland because it's always chilly around there and I could enjoy the beautiful glacial sceneries there.

“despite”后面不需要介词“from”，直接接名词短语即可。

× there was a little wood forest near my house.

✓ there was a little wooded forest near my house.

“wood forest”表达不自然，应该用形容词“wooded”修饰“forest”，表示有树木的森林。