Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the weather.

Example: I live in Canada, where the weather is mostly cold. We have hot summers that last about three to four months, but for the rest of the year, it's usually snowy and chilly.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making your reasons clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples of activities you enjoy in cold weather.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable than hot weather. For example, I enjoy outdoor activities like skiing and hiking when it's cold.

Suggestion: Clarify your answer by correcting grammar and explaining your reasons more clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific effects of dry weather.

Example: I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because in dry conditions, I don't experience body itching or loss of appetite, which sometimes happens in wet weather.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and concise by reducing filler words and repeating ideas. Use linking words to explain when and why you check the weather forecast.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going on a trip or whenever I plan to go outside. This helps me pack appropriately for the weather conditions.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and grammar in your answer. Provide specific effects of climate change and explain your opinion clearly with linking words.

Example: In recent years, climate change has caused many problems, such as deforestation because people are cutting down more trees. Therefore, I believe we should plant more trees to improve the environment and create a healthier atmosphere.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to explain your reasons and mention specific places you want to visit.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit other countries with different climates because it is interesting to experience new weather and cultures. For example, I would like to visit Korea to explore its unique climate and traditions.

× So like 3 or 4 months there will be a hot summers.

✓ So like 3 or 4 months there will be hot summers.

The word 'summers' is plural, but 'a' is singular. The article 'a' should be removed to correctly refer to multiple summers. This is a singular and plural issue.

× After that all the time there is like a snowy or the cold weather.

✓ After that, all the time there is snowy or cold weather.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'cold weather' and 'a' before 'snowy'. Weather types generally do not require articles here. Removing them corrects the sentence.

× I prefer to cold weather instead of hot weather because in cold we cold weather is like more comfortable than the hot hot weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather instead of hot weather because cold weather is more comfortable than hot weather.

The phrase 'prefer to cold weather' is incorrect; 'prefer' is followed directly by the noun without 'to'. Also, 'in cold we cold weather' is redundant and incorrect. The sentence is corrected by removing unnecessary prepositions and repetitions.

× We can do lot of the activities in hot cold weather.

✓ We can do a lot of activities in cold weather.

'Lot' requires an article 'a' before it. Also, 'hot cold weather' is contradictory and confusing; likely intended 'cold weather'. The definite article 'the' before 'activities' is unnecessary here.

× I prefer to try weather rather than the wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather.

'Try weather' is a mishearing or typo for 'dry weather'. Also, 'prefer to' is incorrect; 'prefer' is followed directly by the noun. The definite article 'the' before 'wet weather' is unnecessary.

× In dry weather we feel we don't feel like eating or any kind of body itching.

✓ In dry weather, we don't feel like eating or experiencing any kind of body itching.

The phrase 'we feel we don't feel' is redundant and confusing. Also, 'any kind of body itching' needs a verb like 'experiencing' to be correct.

× So first I check the weather. How is the weather outside? So I do my packing according to the weather.

✓ So first, I check the weather to see how it is outside. Then, I pack according to the weather.

The original sentences are fragmented and the adverb 'first' should be followed by a comma. Also, combining the questions and statements improves clarity and flow.

× So I check it when every day when I have to go out.

✓ So I check it every day when I have to go out.

The phrase 'when every day' is incorrect; 'every day' should come directly after the verb. The sentence is corrected for proper adverb placement and tense consistency.

× There's a lot of climate change in the past, the past year the people are cutting more trays.

✓ There's a lot of climate change in the past; in the past year, people are cutting more trees.

'Trays' is a wrong word here; it should be 'trees'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding punctuation and removing unnecessary articles.

× So that's why it affect the environment, environment.

✓ So that's why it affects the environment.

The verb 'affect' should be in third person singular present tense 'affects' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The repeated word 'environment' is removed.

× So I think they should plant more trees instead of cutting it California.

✓ So I think they should plant more trees instead of cutting them in California.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'trees'; it should be 'them'. Also, 'in California' is added for clarity.

× It will be create a good atmosphere for the people.

✓ It will create a good atmosphere for the people.

The phrase 'will be create' is incorrect; the correct future tense form is 'will create' without 'be'.

× I think I will visit another country because I think we should explore the other countries also like the weathers or their cultures also.

✓ I think I will visit another country because I believe we should explore other countries, including their weather and cultures.

The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper use of future tense and articles. 'Weathers' is uncountable and should be 'weather'.

× So I think I I visit maybe I visit Korea to the Korea to.

✓ So I think I might visit Korea too.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'I visit' should be 'I might visit' to express possibility. 'To the Korea to' is incorrect; 'Korea too' is correct.