Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about the weather patterns.

Example: I live in the southern part of Bangladesh, which faces the sea. Bangladesh experiences six seasons, but mostly it rains for six months, followed by a few sunny days and the monsoon season.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and more natural expressions. Also, try to avoid redundancy and make your reasons more specific.

Example: I mostly prefer cold weather because it reduces sweating, so I can comfortably go out and stay outside for longer periods, whether for work or study.

Suggestion: Avoid vague expressions like 'another love' and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Example: I mostly prefer dry weather because I have outdoor jobs during the day. Although I like wet weather sometimes, dry weather is more practical for my daily activities.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be more specific about how often you check the forecast.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly. However, when unusual events like tsunamis, tornadoes, or cyclones occur, I make sure to check the updates.

Suggestion: Work on grammar and sentence completeness. Use linking words and provide clearer, more detailed explanations about the effects of climate change.

Example: Climate has changed a lot in recent years, especially in my country. We used to have six seasons, but now we mainly experience only three: the rainy season, summer, and the monsoon.

Suggestion: Improve sentence flow and clarity by using linking words. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'live for a certain moment' and be more natural in your expression.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit a city in India where winter lasts for nine months. As a fan of cold weather, I would enjoy living there for some time and appreciating the winter scenery.

× Actually I live in in the southern part of Bangladesh so it's the sea facing area.

✓ Actually I live in the southern part of Bangladesh, so it's the sea-facing area.

The phrase 'in in' is a repetition error; only one 'in' is needed. Also, 'sea facing' should be hyphenated as 'sea-facing' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence clarity.

× But Bangladesh has six season but mostly there is rain for six month and after that a few sunny days and monsoon.

✓ But Bangladesh has six seasons, and mostly there is rain for six months; after that, a few sunny days and monsoon.

'Season' and 'month' should be plural as they refer to multiple periods. Also, the sentence needs conjunctions and punctuation for clarity. 'A few sunny days and monsoon' is incomplete; adding punctuation separates ideas clearly.

× I mostly prefer cold weather because in this weather we get less sweating and we can go out and stay out for a long period for job or study purpose.

✓ I mostly prefer cold weather because in this weather we sweat less and can go out and stay out for a long period for job or study purposes.

'Get less sweating' is incorrect; 'sweat less' is the proper expression. Also, 'for job or study purpose' should be pluralized to 'purposes' to indicate general use.

× I mostly prefer dry weather because we have some jobs to do outside in the day, but wet weather is another love but for the real reason dry weather is better.

✓ I mostly prefer dry weather because we have some jobs to do outside during the day. Wet weather is another love, but for the real reason, dry weather is better.

The sentence is run-on with multiple 'but's. Splitting into two sentences and adding commas improves clarity and correctness.

× Actually, I don't have that such kind of habit, but when something different happened like the tsunami or the tornado, then cyclone, then I checked the weather update.

✓ Actually, I don't have that kind of habit, but when something different happens, like a tsunami, a tornado, or a cyclone, I check the weather update.

'That such kind of habit' is incorrect; 'that kind of habit' is correct. Also, tense consistency requires present tense 'happens' and 'check' since the habit is general. Articles 'a' are needed before 'tsunami', 'tornado', and 'cyclone'.

× Climate change a lot in recent years, especially in my country.

✓ Climate has changed a lot in recent years, especially in my country.

The original sentence lacks a verb; 'Climate change a lot' is incomplete. Adding 'has changed' forms the present perfect tense, indicating an action over recent years.

× Used to have six season in a year, but nowadays we got only three of them, the rainy season and the summer and the monsoon.

✓ We used to have six seasons in a year, but nowadays we have only three of them: the rainy season, the summer, and the monsoon.

'Season' should be plural 'seasons'. The sentence needs a subject 'We' and past tense 'used to have'. Also, 'got' is informal; 'have' is better here. Colons and commas improve list clarity.

× Yes, there is a city in India where winter is for nine months in a year.

✓ Yes, there is a city in India where winter lasts for nine months in a year.

'Winter is for nine months' is awkward; 'winter lasts for nine months' is the correct expression to indicate duration.

× So as a winter fan, I like to visit this place and live for a certain moment and enjoy the winter view.

✓ So, as a winter fan, I would like to visit this place, live there for a certain time, and enjoy the winter view.

'Live for a certain moment' is incorrect; 'live there for a certain time' is better. Also, 'would like' expresses desire more politely. Adding commas improves readability.