Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'wear suggested, uh, teachers'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, describe the weather clearly and mention typical clothing without redundancy.

Example: I live in Thailand, where the weather is hot and humid throughout the year. People usually wear light and breathable clothes to stay comfortable in this climate.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and unclear expressions like 'due to windy 5°'. Try to use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Example: If I have to choose, I prefer cold weather, but only the mild cold weather in Thailand, which is around 20 degrees Celsius. I find it more comfortable than hot weather because it is refreshing but not too cold like in other countries.

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide specific feelings or examples.

Example: Honestly, I prefer dry weather because the wet atmosphere makes my skin feel sticky and uncomfortable. Moreover, rainy days often make me feel a bit gloomy during the day.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and improve grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about when and why you check the forecast.

Example: Generally, I don't check the weather forecast often. However, recently I have started checking it before going outside because the weather has been changing frequently.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly and provide specific examples of human activities causing climate change.

Example: I believe human activities have a big impact on climate change. For example, people produce a lot of carbon dioxide and other toxic gases that harm the environment.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and repetition. Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Provide specific reasons why you want to visit places with different climates.

Example: Definitely, I would like to visit other countries with different climates because it would help me learn about how they manage and regulate environmental issues related to their weather.

× As I live in Thailand so the weather condition is really hot and humid, people usually, uh, wear suggested, uh, teachers or something that is not too thick, uh, for almost the whole year.

✓ As I live in Thailand, the weather condition is really hot and humid; people usually wear light clothes or something that is not too thick for almost the whole year.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'As' and 'so' which causes redundancy and sentence structure issues. Also, 'wear suggested, uh, teachers' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misstatement; it should be 'wear light clothes' or similar. The sentence should be split or connected properly to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× If I have to choose one, I will choose cold weather, but it's just the cold weather in Thailand because, uh, the cold weather in Thailand is around umm 20 due to windy 5°.

✓ If I have to choose one, I will choose cold weather, but it's just the cold weather in Thailand because the cold weather in Thailand is around 20 degrees due to a wind of 5 degrees.

The phrase 'due to windy 5°' is incorrect; 'windy' is an adjective and cannot be used directly with a number. It should be 'due to a wind of 5 degrees' or 'due to wind at 5 degrees'. Also, '20' should specify '20 degrees' for clarity.

× It's not just, it's not really, it's not too cold compared to other count.

✓ It's not just, it's not really, it's not too cold compared to other countries.

The word 'count' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'countries' which is plural. This is a singular/plural issue where the plural form is required to match the meaning.

× Honestly, I prefer dry weather. I'm not really into the wet, uh, the wet atmosphere that made me feel really sticky on my skin and it's made me, uh, feel blue, uh, during the day.

✓ Honestly, I prefer dry weather. I'm not really into the wet atmosphere because it makes me feel really sticky on my skin and it makes me feel blue during the day.

The phrase 'that made me feel' should be 'because it makes me feel' to correctly express cause and effect in present tense. Also, 'the wet, uh, the wet atmosphere' is redundant; 'the wet atmosphere' suffices.

× Generally I'm not really checking the weather forecast, but recently I find myself, uh, go to check the weather before I go outside.

✓ Generally, I don't really check the weather forecast, but recently I find myself going to check the weather before I go outside.

The phrase 'I'm not really checking' is awkward; 'I don't really check' is more natural for habitual actions. Also, 'I find myself, uh, go to check' is incorrect; it should be 'I find myself going to check' because 'find oneself' is followed by a gerund (-ing form).

× I think the main reasons is human behavior is, is this a big impact to the climate change people, people create a lot of, uh, carbon dioxide or like the toxic.

✓ I think the main reason is human behavior; it has a big impact on climate change. People create a lot of carbon dioxide and other toxins.

'Reasons is' is incorrect; 'reason is' is correct because 'reason' is singular. Also, 'is this a big impact to the climate change people' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'it has a big impact on climate change.' 'Like the toxic' is vague and should be 'other toxins.' Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure need correction.

× Definitely umm going to other countries that have a different climate can make can lead can lead me to know more about their, uh, their management and the regulation of their country that can deal with the climate and people be.

✓ Definitely, going to other countries that have a different climate can lead me to learn more about their management and regulations that deal with the climate and people.

The original sentence has repeated phrases 'can make can lead can lead' which is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'the regulation of their country that can deal with the climate and people be' is awkward and unclear. The sentence structure should be simplified and clarified for better understanding.