Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct topic sentence about the weather, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'humidity' and 'very strong sunshine' separately.

Example: The weather in Taiwan is usually humid, especially during the hot summer months. Because of this, I often feel sweaty and prefer to stay indoors. However, in Taichung, the weather tends to be more pleasant and less humid.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Start with a direct statement of your preference, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and grammatical errors.

Example: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy sunny days. For example, when I lived in Vancouver last year, I found the frequent rainy days quite unpleasant.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and grammatical accuracy. Use complete sentences and avoid filler phrases like 'I don't know.' Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and be more specific about how weather affects you.

Example: I definitely prefer dry weather because my skin is oily, and dry conditions help keep it balanced. In contrast, wet weather makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable, almost as if I'm soaked in water.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve flow and avoid awkward phrasing.

Example: I usually check the weather forecast only when I travel because I want to have good weather during my trips. For daily life, I always carry an umbrella to be prepared for rain.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples or reasons using linking words to support your opinion.

Example: Climate change has caused significant effects in recent years. For instance, summers have become hotter compared to when I was a child, making it difficult to go outside without air conditioning.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more organized and grammatically correct. Use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas logically. Avoid vague phrases like 'I love Thomas so much' without context, and be specific about your preferences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I prefer places with more sunshine and less humidity than Taiwan, which is an important factor for me when choosing a university.

× But in Taichung we usually got pretty good weather.

✓ But in Taichung we usually get pretty good weather.

The sentence describes a habitual action in the present, so the verb should be in the present tense 'get' instead of the past tense 'got'.

× I was in Vancouver like one years ago and I cannot stand the rainy days and.

✓ I was in Vancouver like one year ago and I cannot stand the rainy days.

The phrase 'one years ago' is incorrect because 'one' requires the singular form 'year'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and', which should be removed for clarity.

× I would say definitely a dry weather because it's, I don't know, my skin is pretty oily and if I'm in a more dry weather condition and my skin will be pretty good.

✓ I would definitely say dry weather because, I don't know, my skin is pretty oily and if I'm in a drier weather condition, my skin will be pretty good.

The word 'weather' is uncountable and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'more dry' should be replaced with the comparative adjective 'drier'. The sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary conjunctions.

× But if I'm in a very wet weather that make me feel so sweaty like I'm stripping in the water.

✓ But if I'm in very wet weather, that makes me feel so sweaty like I'm dripping in the water.

'Weather' is uncountable and should not have 'a' before it. The verb should agree with the singular subject 'that' as 'makes'. Also, 'stripping' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'dripping'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× I only check the weather forecast when I'm traveling because if I am traveling I wish I got a really nice day when I'm out of the room and but if just daily life I will always bring an umbrella with me so I wouldn't scared of any.

✓ I only check the weather forecast when I'm traveling because if I am traveling, I wish I have a really nice day when I'm out of the room. But in daily life, I always bring an umbrella with me so I wouldn't be scared of anything.

The sentence has pronoun and verb form errors. 'I wish I got' should be 'I wish I have' or better 'I hope I have'. 'Wouldn't scared' should be 'wouldn't be scared'. Also, 'any' is incomplete and should be 'anything'. The sentence is split for clarity and corrected for pronoun and verb usage.

× It did a really significant change because when I was little I didn't feel like this hot in the summer and umm, one year is hotter than another.

✓ There has been a really significant change because when I was little, I didn't feel it was this hot in the summer and, umm, one year is hotter than another.

The phrase 'It did a really significant change' is incorrect; 'There has been a really significant change' is appropriate to describe ongoing change. Also, 'didn't feel like this hot' should be 'didn't feel it was this hot'. The sentence is corrected for tense and sentence structure.

× Like with your Oh my God, I cannot go out without air conditioner and I don't know.

✓ Like, oh my God, I cannot go out without an air conditioner and I don't know.

The phrase 'without air conditioner' needs the article 'an' before 'air conditioner' because it is a singular countable noun. The sentence is also clarified by removing 'with your' which seems out of place.

× Yeah, like I love Thomas so much, but one reason that I want to go out for a university is definitely weather.

✓ Yeah, like I love Thomas so much, but one reason that I want to go out for university is definitely the weather.

The phrase 'a university' is incorrect here; 'go out for university' is the correct expression meaning to attend university. Also, 'weather' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the weather being referred to.

× I feel like I need to go something that have more sun, but not really humid as here.

✓ I feel like I need to go somewhere that has more sun, but is not as humid as here.

'Go something' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go somewhere'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with 'somewhere'. The comparison 'not really humid as here' should be 'not as humid as here'.

× And weather is definitely a big condition that I'm considering.

✓ And the weather is definitely a big factor that I'm considering.

'Weather' as a general concept should be preceded by 'the' here. Also, 'condition' is not the best word; 'factor' is more appropriate when talking about considerations. The sentence is corrected for article use and word choice.