Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免重复表达，语言更自然流畅。可以简洁描述天气特点，并用具体例子支持。

Example: The weather in my city is usually hot and humid, especially during summer when people often sweat a lot due to the high temperatures.

Suggestion: 注意双重否定的使用，表达应更准确自然。可以直接表达喜好并给出原因。

Example: I prefer cool weather because it's comfortable and I don't like sweating in hot weather.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复，应简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词连接句子。

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions make my shoes and clothes damp, which is uncomfortable for me.

Suggestion: 回答应更连贯，避免断句错误。可以说明不看天气预报的原因并描述如何判断天气。

Example: I usually don't check the weather forecast; instead, I look at the sky to decide what the weather is like.

Suggestion: 表达应更准确，避免语法错误。可以具体说明气候变化带来的影响并用连接词组织句子。

Example: I believe one major effect of climate change is the rising temperatures, which increase the risk of extreme weather events.

Suggestion: 表达应更自然，避免用词错误。可以更清晰地说明旅行目的和具体例子。

Example: I definitely enjoy visiting cities with different climates. For instance, during summer, I often travel to countries experiencing autumn or winter to escape the heat.

× sometimes in summer everyone is very hot and sweat like water

✓ sometimes in summer everyone is very hot and sweats like water

主语everyone是单数，谓语动词sweat应使用第三人称单数形式sweats。

× I don't prefer neither of them

✓ I don't prefer either of them

双重否定错误，'don't prefer neither'应改为'prefer either'，避免语义混乱。

× I do prefer dry weather because wet weather can.

✓ I do prefer dry weather because wet weather can make me uncomfortable.

句子不完整，'wet weather can'后缺少谓语，需补充完整表达。

× I prefer dry weather because makes me feel comfortable and cool

✓ I prefer dry weather because it makes me feel comfortable and cool

缺少主语，'because makes me'应为'because it makes me'。

× I always look. At the sky outside and decide what is what weather is it?

✓ I always look at the sky outside and decide what the weather is like.

句子断裂且语序错误，应连贯表达并调整疑问句结构。

× The temperature are going high, more high risk

✓ The temperature is going higher, with more high risk

temperature为单数，谓语动词应用is；形容词比较级用higher。

× I definitely like to face other cities that have different climates from where I live

✓ I definitely like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live

动词face用法不当，应使用visit表示“访问”。

× I will always go to other country that is autumn or in winter

✓ I will always go to other countries that are in autumn or winter

country应为复数countries，谓语动词用are，且in autumn或in winter前不需冠词。