Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by directly describing the weather without unnecessary details. Also, avoid awkward phrasing like "used to be hot" when you mean the usual weather. For example, say "The weather in Karachi is usually hot."

Example: The weather in Karachi is usually hot, especially during the summer months.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say "I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable and I don't sweat or feel tired as much as in hot weather."

Example: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable, and I don't sweat or feel tired as much as I do in hot weather.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more specific details and linking words. For example, "I prefer wet weather because I love the rain; it makes the environment fresh and lively."

Example: I prefer wet weather because I love the rain; it makes the environment fresh and lively.

Suggestion: Try to avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Be clear and concise. For example, "I don't check the weather forecast daily, but I do check it sometimes when rain is expected."

Example: I don't check the weather forecast daily, but I do check it sometimes when rain is expected.

Suggestion: Use clearer and more precise language. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. For example, "In recent years, global warming has caused temperatures to rise, leading to hotter weather and climate changes."

Example: In recent years, global warming has caused temperatures to rise, leading to hotter weather and climate changes.

Suggestion: Make your answer more structured and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy traveling, and experiencing new climates is very appealing to me."

Example: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy traveling, and experiencing new climates is very appealing to me.

× Well, right now I'm residing in Karachi city which is located in Pakistan and here usually the weather used to be hot.

✓ Well, right now I'm residing in Karachi city which is located in Pakistan and here usually the weather is hot.

The phrase 'used to be' indicates a past habit or state, but the student is describing the usual current weather. Therefore, the present tense 'is' should be used instead of 'used to be' to correctly express the current usual condition.

× Uh, if you ask about my, my likings.

✓ Uh, if you ask about my preferences.

The word 'likings' is not commonly used in English; 'preferences' is the correct noun to express what someone likes. Also, the repetition of 'my' is unnecessary and should be avoided for clarity.

× there is no sweating and no much tiredness instead of if you uh, talk about the hot weathers.

✓ there is no sweating and not much tiredness compared to when you talk about hot weather.

The phrase 'no much tiredness' is incorrect; 'not much tiredness' is the correct form. Also, 'hot weathers' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. The sentence structure is improved by using 'compared to' instead of 'instead of if you'.

× I like wet weather because it's is associated with rain and I love rain.

✓ I like wet weather because it is associated with rain and I love rain.

The phrase 'it's is' is redundant; only one form of the verb 'to be' is needed. Also, 'weather' is uncountable and singular, so 'is' is correct here.

× Well, usually I'm not habitual to check the weather on daily basis, but yeah, sometimes I check it because of, uh, rainy, uh, weather when it is about to have a a lot of lean and.

✓ Well, usually I'm not in the habit of checking the weather on a daily basis, but yeah, sometimes I check it because of rainy weather when it is about to rain a lot.

The phrase 'not habitual to check' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'not in the habit of checking.' Also, 'on daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis.' The phrase 'about to have a a lot of lean and' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; it should be 'about to rain a lot.'

× Well, in the recent times, I think global warming is really affecting worse on the climate, right, because it is getting more hot rather than having cold weather.

✓ Well, in recent times, I think global warming is really affecting the climate worse, right, because it is getting hotter rather than colder.

The phrase 'affecting worse on the climate' is incorrect; the correct form is 'affecting the climate worse.' Also, 'more hot' should be 'hotter' and 'having cold weather' should be 'colder' to use correct comparative forms.

× Oh yeah, definitely, yes. I would love to visit a different type of countries and cities because I also love traveling a lot.

✓ Oh yeah, definitely, yes. I would love to visit different types of countries and cities because I also love traveling a lot.

The phrase 'a different type of countries and cities' is incorrect because 'countries and cities' are plural and cannot be preceded by 'a.' The correct phrase is 'different types of countries and cities.'

× And climate is the most probably the main thing which attracts the people and it attracts me a lot.

✓ And climate is probably the main thing that attracts people, and it attracts me a lot.

The phrase 'the most probably' is incorrect; 'probably' alone is sufficient. Also, 'the people' is unnecessary; 'people' without 'the' is more natural here. 'Which' can be replaced with 'that' for defining clauses.