Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地描述天气状况，避免重复和语法错误。

Example: It's summer now, and the temperature is usually between 30 and 35 degrees Celsius. I find it quite hot and uncomfortable because I don't like sweating.

Suggestion: 表达不完整且语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子直接表达偏好，并说明原因。

Example: I definitely prefer cold weather because I don't like sweating. When it's hot, I feel tired and have less energy.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且重复，表达不清晰。建议简洁说明偏好并给出具体原因和例子。

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable. For example, it's hard to dry my laundry when it's rainy.

Suggestion: 表达不流畅且句子不完整。建议清晰说明习惯形成的时间、原因和频率。

Example: Yes, I started checking the weather forecast when I went to college because I ride a scooter to school. I check it every morning before I leave.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议明确表达观点并提供具体细节或例子。

Example: I think climate change has become more serious recently. My biology teacher said this problem has existed for many years, but little progress has been made to solve it.

Suggestion: 表达不够连贯且语法错误较多。建议简洁说明想去不同气候城市的原因，并举例说明。

Example: Yes, definitely. Taiwan doesn't have snow except on high mountains, so I want to visit places like Iceland to experience snowy weather.

× I think the degree is over 30 to 35 every day so.

✓ I think the temperature is over 30 to 35 degrees every day.

这里“degree”应使用复数形式“degrees”，因为温度通常用复数形式表示。

× And because I'm afraid of sweat and I'm. I don't like to get sweat so I really went out and really.

✓ And because I'm afraid of sweating. I don't like to sweat, so I don't go out much.

“afraid of sweat”应改为“afraid of sweating”，动名词形式更合适；“get sweat”应改为“sweat”，动词原形；句子结构不完整，需调整使其通顺。

× I definitely prefer to cold weather because I'm afraid I don't like sweating so and I think if the weather is too hot my energy and I don't feel lots of energy when it's summer so I.

✓ I definitely prefer cold weather because I don't like sweating, and I think if the weather is too hot, I don't have much energy in summer.

“prefer to cold weather”应为“prefer cold weather”，动词“prefer”后直接接名词；句子结构混乱，需简化并调整连接词。

× I prefer dry weather because I I don't like I definitely don't like wet weather because it makes me feel feeling sweet, sweet and for example, if I do some laundry and I have to and the.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I definitely don't like wet weather; it makes me feel sweaty. For example, if I do some laundry...

重复使用“I I don't like”不正确，应简化；“feeling sweet”应为“feel sweaty”，形容词形式；句子未完成，需补充完整。

× Yes, I think this habit habit just happened since I study in the college from I study in another studies, so I learned how to I learned to check the weather because I have to ride a scooter to school every day and I I check the weather forecast every.

✓ Yes, I think this habit started when I studied in college. I learned to check the weather because I have to ride a scooter to school every day, so I check the weather forecast regularly.

“happened since I study in the college from I study in another studies”表达混乱，应改为“started when I studied in college”；“study”时态应为过去式“studied”；句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× I think it's more serious. Recently, however, one of my biology teachers said this issue has been dividing for tons of for lots of years and nothing is changing. So maybe they.

✓ I think it's more serious recently. However, one of my biology teachers said this issue has been developing for many years and nothing is changing.

“has been dividing”用词错误，应为“has been developing”；“tons of for lots of years”表达重复且错误，应为“many years”；句子未完成，需补充。

× Yes, definitely, because Taiwan don't have any snows. You have to see snows if you you have to go on the top, the tall mountains and little air out a little bit lucky. So I really want to go to Iceland some ice.

✓ Yes, definitely, because Taiwan doesn't have any snow. You have to go to the top of tall mountains to see snow, and the air is a bit lucky. So I really want to go to Iceland to see some ice.

“Taiwan don't have”主谓不一致，应为“Taiwan doesn't have”；“snows”应为不可数名词“snow”；句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。