Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời giới hạn câu trả lời trong 5 câu để tránh dài dòng. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Example: The weather where I live is tropical, so we don't have four distinct seasons like some other countries. Winters are mild and summers are not too hot, which makes it very comfortable. I really enjoy living here because of the pleasant weather.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn, đồng thời dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Example: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy the winter season. It makes me feel relaxed and cozy, especially when I can sit with a hot cup of coffee. The cool air is refreshing and peaceful.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể và rõ ràng hơn cho lựa chọn của bạn.

Example: I don't really like either dry or wet weather, but if I have to choose, I prefer dry weather. Wet weather can be annoying because it makes the floors slippery and the air feels damp, which is uncomfortable for me.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Cố gắng cung cấp thông tin cụ thể về tần suất và lý do kiểm tra dự báo thời tiết.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast every day. However, if I have a special event coming up, I make sure to check it to ensure the weather will be good.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Bạn cần học cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy cung cấp các ví dụ cụ thể về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

Example: Climate change has worsened in recent years, causing serious effects like an increased greenhouse effect. This leads to rising temperatures and threatens many animal species with extinction.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho quan điểm của bạn, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn.

Example: I don't really want to visit cities with different climates because I prefer the tropical weather in my country. It feels comfortable and suits me well, so I would rather stay here permanently.

× Is like the tropical weather when it definitely Four Seasons.

✓ It is like tropical weather without definite Four Seasons.

The sentence lacks the correct form of the verb 'to be' and the article 'the' before 'tropical weather'. Also, 'definitely Four Seasons' is incorrect; it should be 'without definite Four Seasons' to express the intended meaning.

× Is is really not very cold in the winter and not very hot in the summer and I just really enjoy living here with the nice weather.

✓ It is really not very cold in the winter and not very hot in the summer, and I just really enjoy living here with the nice weather.

The subject 'It' requires the verb 'is' in third person singular form. The original sentence repeated 'Is is' which is incorrect. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses.

× Oh well, personally I'll be Fern cold weather because I really enjoy winter.

✓ Oh well, personally I prefer cold weather because I really enjoy winter.

'I'll be Fern cold weather' is incorrect. The modal verb 'will' is not appropriate here. The correct verb is 'prefer' to express preference.

× Maybe I just feel very relaxed and chill in winter where like you can set a hot cup of hot coffee.

✓ Maybe I just feel very relaxed and chill in winter where you can sit with a hot cup of coffee.

The preposition 'set' is incorrect; it should be 'sit with' to indicate holding or being with a cup of coffee. Also, 'hot cup of hot coffee' is redundant; 'a hot cup of coffee' suffices.

× I will say that I don't really like both but if I had to choose then is definitely dry weather because web to me is so annoying sometimes the house like the floor it is so wet in the air it is so airy that.

✓ I will say that I don't really like either, but if I had to choose, then it is definitely dry weather because wet weather to me is so annoying sometimes; the house, like the floor, is so wet and the air is so humid.

The pronoun 'is' is incorrectly used instead of 'it is'. 'Web' is a typo for 'wet'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification with proper pronouns and conjunctions.

× In daily basic life I choose Grayling, check the weather forecast.

✓ In daily life, I rarely check the weather forecast.

'Choose Grayling' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'rarely check' to express infrequency in present tense.

× But if I had like a special occasion the next day or some days after, then I definitely have to check too.

✓ But if I have a special occasion the next day or some days after, then I definitely have to check too.

The conditional 'if I had' suggests past unreal condition, but the context is about future or habitual action, so present tense 'if I have' is appropriate.

× They really make sure that the weather is nice too.

✓ I really make sure that the weather is nice too.

The pronoun 'They' is incorrect; the speaker refers to themselves, so 'I' is correct.

× Well, it has got worse and worse and Tiffany brings many negativities mean effects such as like first can make in the greenhouse effect more escalated and then some animals and we're doing can lead.

✓ Well, it has gotten worse and worse and this brings many negative effects such as escalating the greenhouse effect and leading to the endangerment of some animals.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'Tiffany brings many negativities mean effects' and 'we're doing can lead'. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct vocabulary.

× Well, I don't think so. I believe that the weather in my. Country is the best. I have ever tried because if you like, I like the tropical here and I like the other countries.

✓ Well, I don't think so. I believe that the weather in my country is the best I have ever experienced because I like the tropical climate here and also like other countries.

The sentence has unnecessary periods and unclear pronoun use. 'I have ever tried' should be 'I have ever experienced'. 'If you like' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× It just feels nice and comfortable to read in permanently.

✓ It just feels nice and comfortable to live in permanently.

The verb 'read' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'live' to express residing permanently.