Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence about the weather, then add specific details without repetition. Avoid filler words and correct grammar mistakes for better clarity.

Example: The weather in Dubai is very hot from March to October. Currently, it is summer, so the temperature is quite high these days.

Suggestion: Focus on making your answer coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear phrases. Provide clear reasons why you prefer cold weather.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel more energetic. During cold days, I find it easier to stay active and focused on my work.

Suggestion: Clarify your answer by directly stating your preference first. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition. Improve sentence structure for better understanding.

Example: Although I like cold weather, I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes it hard to dry clothes and can cause health problems like fever.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by using correct vocabulary and grammar. Clearly state your habit and explain how you prepare for weather changes using linking words.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly, but before going outside, I like to check the weather conditions to take necessary precautions.

Suggestion: Provide a clear and structured answer. Start with your opinion, then explain causes and effects using linking words. Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

Example: Climate change is very noticeable recently. I learned from a newspaper article that global warming, caused by increased greenhouse gases, is the main reason. We need to take action to reduce these emissions.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and natural by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and clearly express your feelings and concerns.

Example: Of course, I would like to experience different climates and cultures in other cities. However, I sometimes worry about health issues caused by sudden climate changes.

× Currently I'm in Dubai, the weather here is some more, it start from it started from March until until October I think.

✓ Currently I'm in Dubai, the weather here is somewhat more; it started from March until October, I think.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'start' instead of the past tense 'started' to describe a past action. Also, 'some more' is incorrect; 'somewhat more' or 'a bit more' is appropriate. The correction uses the past tense 'started' to indicate the beginning of the period and improves clarity.

× And the weather outside is very hot nowadays and the summer vacation started.

✓ And the weather outside is very hot nowadays, and the summer vacation has started.

The sentence mixes present tense 'is' with simple past 'started' without proper connection. Using present perfect 'has started' indicates the recent start of summer vacation, fitting the present context.

× I prefer cold weather because it will.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it is better for me.

The phrase 'because it will' is incomplete and unclear. Modal verb 'will' needs a main verb to complete the meaning. The correction clarifies the reason for preference.

× During cold weather our body will be so energetic and know the water will not closing the former sweet and we would be so energetic and ready to do work during cold days.

✓ During cold weather, our body is more energetic, and the water does not close the former sweat glands, so we are energetic and ready to work during cold days.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect verb forms like 'know the water will not closing the former sweet'. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses correct verb forms and tenses.

× That's why I like pie, prefer cold more than hot.

✓ That's why I prefer cold weather more than hot weather.

The phrase 'I like pie' is likely a mishearing or typo. Also, 'prefer cold more than hot' lacks clarity and proper object. The correction clarifies the preference and corrects pronoun use.

× Even though I like cold weather, I don't prefer which weather because during which weather is very difficult to dry our clothes and is very difficult.

✓ Even though I like cold weather, I don't prefer wet weather because during wet weather it is very difficult to dry our clothes.

The word 'which' is incorrectly used instead of 'wet'. Pronouns must correctly refer to the intended noun. The correction replaces 'which' with 'wet' and clarifies the sentence.

× There is a during wet weather, there is a chance of lot of health issues.

✓ During wet weather, there is a chance of many health issues.

The phrase 'There is a during wet weather' is ungrammatical. The correction removes unnecessary words and improves sentence structure.

× Is that like fever that kind of diseases are spread over it made with that that's why I prefer dry weather.

✓ Diseases like fever spread during wet weather; that's why I prefer dry weather.

The original sentence is confusing with incorrect pronouns and structure. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× Actually I don't have a habit of checking weather broadcast, but whenever I go outside I like to or shipped out with her or the climate condition of that area to take precaution before going there.

✓ Actually, I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast, but whenever I go outside, I like to check the climate condition of that area to take precautions before going there.

The sentence contains unclear phrases like 'or shipped out with her'. Pronouns and verbs are misused. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects pronoun and verb usage.

× The climate change is very apparent but I didn't know the reason behind it.

✓ Climate change is very apparent, but I don't know the reason behind it.

The sentence mixes present tense 'is' with past tense 'didn't know'. Since the speaker is currently unaware, present tense 'don't know' is appropriate.

× Recently I have read one of the articles from the popular newspaper here where I could understand that the climate change.

✓ Recently, I read an article in a popular newspaper here where I understood the causes of climate change.

The sentence uses 'have read' which is acceptable, but 'could understand' is awkward. Using simple past 'read' and 'understood' fits better. Also, the sentence is incomplete; the correction completes the thought.

× The reason behind the climate change and change is global warming and global warming is because of the increasing the amount of greenhouse gases and we have to do a lot of activities to do.

✓ The reason behind climate change is global warming, which is caused by the increasing amount of greenhouse gases. We need to take many actions to address this.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. The correction improves sentence structure, removes redundancy, and clarifies meaning.

× Is of course I like to experience the climate, weather and the culture of other countries and cities, but sometimes I'm afraid of it because of some health issues are associated with that.

✓ Of course, I like to experience the climate, weather, and culture of other countries and cities, but sometimes I'm afraid because some health issues are associated with that.

The sentence starts with 'Is of course' which is incorrect. The correction fixes sentence structure and improves clarity.

× When there is a sudden climate change, maybe ever body will not balance with it.

✓ When there is a sudden climate change, maybe everybody will not adapt well to it.

The phrase 'will not balance with it' is incorrect. The pronoun 'it' refers to climate change, but the verb 'balance' is misused. The correction uses 'adapt well to it' to convey the intended meaning.