Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more coherent and natural by using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. For example, use 'sometimes it is too cold, sometimes too hot, and sometimes it rains a lot' to describe mixed weather clearly.

Example: The weather where I live is quite mixed. Sometimes it is very cold, other times it gets really hot, and occasionally there is heavy rain.

Suggestion: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid unnecessary repetition and unclear words. Use linking words to connect ideas, for example, 'I prefer cold weather because hot weather is very uncomfortable in my country. However, I also enjoy rainy and mild days.'

Example: I prefer cold weather because hot weather is very uncomfortable in my country. However, I also enjoy rainy and mild days as they are refreshing.

Suggestion: Improve clarity by using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily. For example, say 'I prefer dry weather because wet weather is very uncomfortable for us.'

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet weather is very uncomfortable for us in my country.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain when and why you check the forecast. For example, 'I check the weather forecast almost every day to prepare for extreme temperatures.'

Example: I check the weather forecast almost every day so I can prepare for very hot or cold weather.

Suggestion: Expand your answer with specific effects and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, 'Climate change has caused extreme weather and affected agriculture, which impacts our society negatively.'

Example: Climate change has caused extreme weather events and affected agriculture, which has had a negative impact on our society and country.

Suggestion: Clarify your answer and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I enjoy visiting other cities because I can experience different cultures and climates.'

Example: I enjoy visiting other cities because I can experience different cultures and climates, which I find very interesting.

× Sometime is too cold, sometime is.

✓ Sometimes it is too cold, sometimes it is.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, the subject 'it' is missing before the verb 'is'. This corrects the singular/plural and sentence structure issues.

× Too much heart and some time is.

✓ Too much heat and sometimes it is.

The word 'heart' is a misspelling of 'heat'. 'Some time' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, the subject 'it' is missing before the verb 'is'.

× Too much rain and rain.

✓ Too much rain.

The phrase 'and rain' is redundant and incorrect. 'Too much rain' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× So. Yeah, this mixed.

✓ So, yeah, it is mixed.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'it is' corrects the sentence structure.

× I prefer cold weather because I don't like hot weather is too much hard in our country and.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I don't like hot weather; it is too harsh in our country.

The phrase 'hot weather is too much hard' is incorrect. 'Too much hard' should be 'too harsh'. Also, the sentence needs proper punctuation and subject-verb agreement.

× Is really really really very. Heart So I don't like hot weather, but I also like rainy day, the temperate weather, notes Thomas.

✓ It is really, really, really very hot. So I don't like hot weather, but I also like rainy days and temperate weather.

'Heart' is a misspelling of 'hot'. 'Rainy day' should be plural 'rainy days'. The phrase 'notes Thomas' is unclear and likely incorrect, so it is omitted for clarity.

× Coldness too much hurt.

✓ Coldness hurts too much.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Coldness' is a noun, so the verb 'hurts' should be used to express the idea properly.

× I prefer dry dry weather because whenever it. Wait in our county is really too much unconfortable for us and also whenever it wait.

✓ I prefer dry weather because whenever it rains in our country, it is really too uncomfortable for us, and also whenever it rains.

'Wait' is a misspelling of 'rains'. 'County' should be 'country'. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× Is it really too much? Uncomfortable.

✓ It is really too uncomfortable.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. Adding the subject 'It' and correcting the structure improves clarity.

× Almost every day I check the weather because whenever it's too much hurt.

✓ Almost every day I check the weather because whenever it's too hot.

'Too much hurt' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'too hot'. Correcting the adjective improves the sentence.

× Aye. Try to check the weather forecast so I can sure which. Number it is.

✓ I try to check the weather forecast so I can be sure of the temperature.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Aye' is likely a mishearing of 'I'. 'Can sure which number it is' is unclear; replacing with 'be sure of the temperature' clarifies meaning.

× Climate change is really pretty bad for our society and our country, so it can affect us.

✓ Climate change is really bad for our society and country, so it affects us.

'Pretty bad' is informal; 'really bad' is clearer. 'Can affect' is less certain; 'affects' is more direct and appropriate here.

× Well. To be honest, I met our labor person.

✓ Well, to be honest, I am a hardworking person.

'Met our labor person' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended to say 'I am a hardworking person'.

× Whenever I get some time to travel, I love to visit other cities because the culture, the climate change, I can see the different 1.

✓ Whenever I get some time to travel, I love to visit other cities because of the culture and the different climate; I can see the differences.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Climate change' should be 'different climate'. 'Different 1' is unclear and corrected to 'differences'.

× So I really like it to visit other cities.

✓ So I really like visiting other cities.

The phrase 'like it to visit' is incorrect. The correct form is 'like visiting'.