Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details. Also, focus on correct grammar and pronunciation, for example, 'cold' instead of 'cord'. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Example: The weather where I live changes with the seasons. In winter, it is very cold, often below freezing, while summers are mild and pleasant.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by correcting grammar, such as 'I prefer hot weather' instead of 'them hot weather'.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities like going to the beach or having picnics. For example, last year I attended a beach party with my husband, which was very enjoyable.

Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct word choice, such as 'dry' instead of 'drive' and 'rather than wet weather'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid unclear phrases.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is easier and more convenient to go out anytime. In contrast, wet weather can make it difficult to travel or enjoy outdoor activities.

Suggestion: Try to answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, clarify your points with specific examples and use linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for work because the weather in Canada can change suddenly.

Suggestion: Avoid unclear or incorrect words like 'Boom' and 'summary like more hold'. Use precise vocabulary and structure your answer with linking words to explain your opinion clearly.

Example: I believe climate change is caused by global warming. For example, recent summers have been hotter than usual, and winters have become colder.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence structure, such as 'I like to visit cities with different climates'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Example: Yes, I like to visit cities with different climates because it broadens my knowledge and helps me relax from my busy schedule.

× Actually it depends on the season, but as we know like the Canada is the most cold, coldest country in the world.

✓ Actually, it depends on the season, but as we know, Canada is the coldest country in the world.

The definite article 'the' is not used before country names like 'Canada'. Also, 'most cold' is incorrect; the superlative form is 'coldest'. The sentence also needs commas for clarity.

× So the where I live that weather is also very. Cord.

✓ So, the weather where I live is also very cold.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and a typo ('Cord' instead of 'cold'). The corrected sentence places words in the proper order and corrects spelling.

× Actually, I prefer them hot weather.

✓ Actually, I prefer hot weather.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used before 'hot weather'. 'Hot weather' is uncountable and does not require a pronoun here.

× Because in the hot weather, we can go for the beach, we can go for the vacation, for the picnic.

✓ Because in hot weather, we can go to the beach, go on vacation, or have a picnic.

The phrase 'go for the beach' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to the beach'. Also, 'go for the vacation' should be 'go on vacation'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and parallelism.

× And I remember last year I went for a Palm Beach party with my husband.

✓ And I remember last year I went to a Palm Beach party with my husband.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'went to' is the correct phrase when referring to attending an event.

× Actually prefer the drive weather because it will be easy and convenient for a person to go up anywhere and at any time, even here, rather than innovate.

✓ Actually, I prefer dry weather because it is easy and convenient for a person to go anywhere at any time, even here, rather than in wet weather.

'Drive weather' is a typo for 'dry weather'. 'Go up anywhere' is incorrect; 'go anywhere' is correct. 'Innovate' is incorrect and replaced with 'in wet weather' to contrast dry and wet weather.

× Whether you know right in the wet weather, it's very hard for the people to still go out.

✓ You know, in wet weather, it's very hard for people to go out.

'Whether' is a typo for 'weather'. 'The people' is incorrect; 'people' without 'the' is appropriate here. 'Still go out' is awkward; 'go out' suffices.

× When and how often? Yes I do. I always check the weather when I come. Al ready whenever I leave my home for the work.

✓ When and how often? Yes, I do. I always check the weather whenever I leave my home for work.

The phrase 'when I come. Al ready' is fragmented and unclear. 'For the work' should be 'for work'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and fluency.

× Because, you know, like we can't trust the weather in the Canada.

✓ Because, you know, we can't trust the weather in Canada.

The definite article 'the' is not used before country names like 'Canada'.

× It can change sudden here rather than cheese at sudden here.

✓ It can change suddenly here rather than stay the same suddenly here.

'Change sudden' should be 'change suddenly' (adverb form). 'Cheese at sudden' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended to contrast with 'change suddenly', so replaced with 'stay the same suddenly' for clarity.

× Boom. Climate change is going naturally these days.

✓ Well, climate change is happening naturally these days.

'Boom' is an interjection that does not fit here. 'Is going naturally' is incorrect; 'is happening naturally' is correct.

× And I think this is happened just because of the global warming we had.

✓ And I think this has happened just because of the global warming we have had.

'Is happened' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has happened' is appropriate. 'We had' should be 'we have had' to indicate ongoing relevance.

× This summer is more summary like more hold and the winter is too cold more called these days.

✓ This summer is more summery and hotter, and the winter is colder these days.

'Summary like more hold' is incorrect; 'more summery and hotter' is correct. 'More called' should be 'colder'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× Yes, I prefer to visit different cities. We have the different climate and different environment.

✓ Yes, I prefer to visit different cities. They have different climates and environments.

'We have the different climate' is incorrect; 'They have different climates' is correct to refer to the cities. Also, 'climate' and 'environment' should be plural to match 'different'.

× I think it enhanced my knowledge is and also it gives me relax from my hectic schedule.

✓ I think it enhances my knowledge and also gives me relaxation from my hectic schedule.

'Enhanced' should be present tense 'enhances' to match the context. 'My knowledge is' is incorrect; 'my knowledge' suffices. 'Gives me relax' should be 'gives me relaxation'.