Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific details. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

Example: The weather where I live is hot and humid, especially during the summer and monsoon seasons. During the monsoon, heavy rains occur frequently, which makes the summer quite uncomfortable. However, winters are mild and more pleasant to live in.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unclear words.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable and I don't sweat as much. Also, I avoid the hot winds called 'loo' that blow during summer. Therefore, cold weather suits me better.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and clearer expressions. Avoid fragmented sentences and explain your feelings with specific reasons.

Example: I prefer wet weather, especially during the rainy season, because it lifts my mood and makes me feel more enthusiastic. Moreover, I enjoy the fresh smell of the first rain, which is very refreshing.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and clearly explain when and why you check the weather forecast. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: I usually check the weather forecast on my phone every morning after I wake up. This helps me prepare for the day, especially if I have special plans or need to dress according to the temperature or humidity.

Suggestion: Your answer has many unclear words and grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your opinion with specific examples and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Climate change has caused global warming, which is affecting human life negatively. For example, glaciers are melting due to rising temperatures. I believe humans are responsible for this problem because of pollution and deforestation.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains incomplete sentences. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, every summer, my family and I go to our village, which has a cooler and quieter climate. We enjoy the peaceful weather and many activities there.

× The place I live his hot and humid weather in the summer time and specially in a rainy season, in monsoon season, there is a dream, a course in a very huge scale, so it makes.

✓ The place I live has hot and humid weather in the summertime, especially in the rainy season, the monsoon season, there is a dream, a course on a very huge scale, so it makes.

The verb 'his' is incorrect for third person singular; it should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'The place I live'. This is a common third person singular verb form error.

× The place I live his hot and humid weather in the summer time and specially in a rainy season, in monsoon season, there is a dream, a course in a very huge scale, so it makes.

✓ The place I live has hot and humid weather in the summertime, especially in the rainy season, during the monsoon season, there is a dream, a course on a very huge scale, so it makes.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'monsoon season'; the correct preposition is 'during' to indicate the time period. Also, 'in a very huge scale' should be 'on a very huge scale' as 'on' is used with scales or levels.

× The place I live his hot and humid weather in the summer time and specially in a rainy season, in monsoon season, there is a dream, a course in a very huge scale, so it makes.

✓ The place I live has hot and humid weather in the summertime, especially in the rainy season. During the monsoon season, there is a dream, a course on a very huge scale, so it makes.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. Breaking it into two sentences improves clarity and sentence structure.

× The summer more. Reliable to live here and in winter sometime.

✓ The summer is more bearable to live here, and in winter sometimes.

The word 'reliable' is incorrectly used; the intended meaning is likely 'bearable' or 'comfortable'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate occasional occurrence.

× I love. Cold weather because just because it doesn't get sweat, we do not get more strings because of this summer.

✓ I love cold weather because we don't sweat, and we do not get more heat stress because of this summer.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Removing unnecessary words and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And I don't get the loo which occurs during their summer season.

✓ And I don't get the heatstroke which occurs during the summer season.

The pronoun 'loo' is incorrectly used; 'loo' is a noun meaning toilet in British English, but here it likely refers to 'heatstroke' or 'heatwave'. Also, 'their' is incorrect; it should be 'the' referring to the summer season.

× I love wet weather, specially in the rainy season because. It swings my mood and I feel more enthusiastic during the rainfall season or during the waiting area.

✓ I love wet weather, especially in the rainy season because it lifts my mood and I feel more enthusiastic during the rainfall season or during the wet period.

The phrase 'swings my mood' is incorrect; 'lifts my mood' or 'improves my mood' is appropriate. Also, 'waiting area' is incorrect; likely intended 'wet area' or 'wet period'. Prepositions and word choice need correction.

× Whenever I wake up early in the morning, I consistently because my phone and check the today's weather, the 'cause it it's convenient when we prepared earlier by the. Johnson soft green or the humidity? According to whenever I get a special day.

✓ Whenever I wake up early in the morning, I consistently check the weather on my phone because it's convenient to prepare earlier according to the temperature or the humidity, especially when I have a special day.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases. 'Check the today's weather' should be 'check the weather'. 'Prepared earlier by the Johnson soft green' is unclear and likely incorrect; replaced with 'prepare earlier according to the temperature or humidity'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× The ziet of global warming is continuously engaging just because of climate change it compact.

✓ The effect of global warming is continuously increasing because of climate change; it impacts.

'Ziet' is a misspelling of 'effect'. 'Engaging' is incorrect; 'increasing' fits the context. 'Compact' is incorrect; likely intended 'impacts' or 'affects'. Adjective and verb usage corrected.

× Putting the human life the glaciers are melting because of the Horton humid or the increasing rate of global warming.

✓ Threatening human life, the glaciers are melting because of the hot and humid conditions and the increasing rate of global warming.

'Putting the human life' is incorrect; 'threatening human life' is appropriate. 'Horton humid' is incorrect; corrected to 'hot and humid'. Prepositions and word choice corrected.

× You live. Yeah, indeed in summer season our whole family members including me used to go our village which is in a dragon and it is very it has very quiet in town weather.

✓ Yes, indeed in the summer season, our whole family, including me, used to go to our village which is in a region and it has very quiet town weather.

'You live' is unclear and likely a mishearing. 'Go our village' should be 'go to our village'. 'Dragon' is likely 'region'. 'Very quiet in town weather' is awkward; corrected to 'very quiet town weather'. Pronouns and prepositions corrected.

× So we enjoyed that weather there and we had we enjoy a lot of things that gold.

✓ So we enjoyed that weather there and we enjoyed a lot of things there.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repetition and unclear words like 'that gold'. Simplifying and correcting verb tense improves clarity.