Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and complete by using full sentences and linking words. For example, you can say: "I live in Thailand, where the weather is usually hot and sunny. However, during the rainy season, it becomes quite humid. Although we don't have a real winter, there are a few cooler days."

Example: I live in Thailand, where the weather is mostly hot and sunny. During the rainy season, it becomes quite humid, which can be uncomfortable. Although we don't have a true winter, there are a couple of cooler days that feel refreshing.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using clear sentences and linking ideas logically. For example, say: "I prefer hot weather to cold because when it's hot, I can simply stay indoors and use the air conditioner. However, when it's cold, I find it difficult to decide how many clothes to wear to keep warm."

Example: I prefer hot weather to cold because when it's hot, I can just stay inside and turn on the air conditioner. But if it's very cold, I am not sure how many layers of clothes I should wear to stay warm.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unclear words. For example: "I prefer dry weather because when it's dry, I can just drink water to stay hydrated. But when it's wet and humid, I sweat a lot, which is uncomfortable."

Example: I prefer dry weather because if it's dry, I can simply drink water to stay comfortable. However, wet and humid weather makes me sweat a lot, which I don't enjoy.

Suggestion: Make your answer more structured and clear. For example: "Yes, I usually check the weather forecast twice a day because I often go outdoors. If it rains, I prefer to run on a treadmill indoors instead."

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast about twice a day since I like to exercise outside. If it is raining, I switch to running on a treadmill indoors.

Suggestion: Try to use complete sentences and clearer vocabulary. For example: "I think the global temperature has increased recently. Also, some low-lying areas have been flooded because icebergs have melted."

Example: I believe that the Earth's temperature has risen in recent years. Additionally, some low-lying regions have experienced flooding due to melting icebergs.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using full sentences and clearer ideas. For example: "Yes, I would like to visit places like Minnesota, which I heard is very cold. I want to experience what it feels like to be in -30 degrees Celsius, which must be extremely cold."

Example: Yes, I want to visit Minnesota because I heard it is very cold there. I am curious to experience temperatures around -30 degrees Celsius and see how people live in such cold weather.

× I live in Thailand so. It always. Hot and sunny. Anne. On the raining season, it is quite humid. And on winter is not actually winter, but there will be those two day that.

✓ I live in Thailand, so it is always hot and sunny. In the rainy season, it is quite humid. And in winter, it is not really winter, but there are those two days that are colder.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper sentence structure. 'Anne' seems to be a misheard or mistyped word. Also, 'raining season' should be 'rainy season', and 'on winter' should be 'in winter'. The sentence about 'those two day that' is incomplete and unclear, so it was corrected to 'there are those two days that are colder' to make sense.

× I before a hot to cold. Because. Will it hot? We can just. Get in the room and then turn on the AC. But if it's too cold, I don't know how big. The clothes I have to wear in order to prevent me from getting cold.

✓ I prefer hot to cold weather because when it is hot, we can just get in the room and turn on the AC. But if it's too cold, I don't know how many clothes I have to wear to prevent myself from getting cold.

The phrase 'I before a hot to cold' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer hot to cold'. 'Will it hot?' is incorrect modal usage; it should be 'when it is hot'. 'How big the clothes' is incorrect; it should be 'how many clothes'. Also, 'prevent me' should be 'prevent myself' to use the correct reflexive pronoun.

× I prefer. Driver Acer. Because. If it's really dry I just drink water. And he says. Mama nature bro, I just have to buy water. An but if it's red. I would be sweat everywhere. That is not fun at all. These are of the humid.

✓ I prefer dry weather because if it's really dry, I just drink water. And as they say, Mama Nature is kind; I just have to buy water. But if it's wet, I would sweat everywhere. That is not fun at all. These are the effects of humidity.

'Driver Acer' is incorrect; it should be 'dry weather'. 'An but if it's red' is likely 'and but if it's wet'. 'I would be sweat' should be 'I would sweat'. 'These are of the humid' is incorrect; it should be 'these are the effects of humidity'. The sentence also needed restructuring for clarity.

× Yes, I think so. So this day I go round outdoor many time. And if it's raining, I would just switch to run on treadmill instead. So I shake with a lot made maybe every twice a day.

✓ Yes, I think so. These days, I go outdoors many times. And if it's raining, I just switch to running on the treadmill instead. So I exercise a lot, maybe twice a day.

'So this day' should be 'these days' for present habitual action. 'Go round outdoor many time' is incorrect; it should be 'go outdoors many times'. 'Switch to run on treadmill' should be 'switch to running on the treadmill'. 'I shake with a lot made' is unclear and corrected to 'I exercise a lot'. 'Maybe every twice a day' is corrected to 'maybe twice a day'.

× Maybe the temperature around the world? Get higher. Anne. Some places that are really low. Was flooded because the iceberg has resolved.

✓ Maybe the temperature around the world has gotten higher. And some low-lying places have been flooded because the icebergs have melted.

'Get higher' should be in present perfect tense 'has gotten higher' to indicate recent change. 'Anne' is likely 'and'. 'Some places that are really low. Was flooded' is incorrect; it should be 'some low-lying places have been flooded'. 'Iceberg has resolved' is incorrect; it should be 'icebergs have melted'.

× Yes, I would like to see. Mini soda. I heard that there really cold all know how it feels to be like in -30 Celsius. Is might be very very cold that. When we speak, we shake.

✓ Yes, I would like to see Minnesota. I heard that it is really cold there. I want to know how it feels to be at -30 degrees Celsius. It might be very, very cold. When we speak, we might shake.

'Mini soda' is corrected to 'Minnesota'. 'There really cold all know' is corrected to 'it is really cold there. I want to know'. 'Is might be' is incorrect modal usage; corrected to 'It might be'. 'When we speak, we shake' is corrected to 'When we speak, we might shake' to express possibility.