Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly describe the weather with clear sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: The weather where I live is usually very hot and humid during the summer. Because of this, people prefer to stay indoors rather than go outside.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear words and sentence structure. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it makes traveling more comfortable. In cold weather, the scenery like trees, rivers, and mountains is clearer and more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Express your preference clearly and support it with specific reasons using proper linking words.

Example: I prefer wet weather because it makes the environment look fresh and beautiful. Also, dry weather can be uncomfortable due to sweating.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Clearly state your habit and frequency of checking the weather forecast with logical linking.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my phone several times a day, especially before going to bed and after waking up. This helps me plan my daily activities.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to explain the effects of climate change clearly with specific examples and use linking words to organize your ideas.

Example: Climate change has caused the air to become more polluted in recent years. This affects the environment negatively, for example, birds suffer because their habitats are damaged, which reduces their energy and survival chances.

Suggestion: Your answer is partially understandable but contains unclear phrases and repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it allows me to gain new knowledge and experience different weather for the first time.

× Where I live, nobody there is a very summer weather.

✓ Where I live, there is no very summer weather.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'nobody there is' which is not appropriate for describing weather. The correct structure is 'there is' or 'there are' to indicate existence. Here, 'there is no very summer weather' correctly expresses the absence of such weather.

× Weather is very hot and humid so it throws people there that they are living prefer less likely to go outside.

✓ The weather is very hot and humid, so people living there prefer to go outside less.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The phrase 'it throws people there that they are living prefer less likely to go outside' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper sentence structure and word order.

× Graphite folder or gather be 'cause I love travel and travel was travel seems very easy in cold weather.

✓ I prefer colder weather because I love to travel, and traveling seems very easy in cold weather.

The original sentence contains nonsensical phrases like 'Graphite folder or gather be' and incorrect verb forms. The correction replaces these with appropriate pronouns and verb forms to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× In cold weather, there is very. Clearview of nature or like trees, rivers and mountains, oceans.

✓ In cold weather, there is a very clear view of nature, like trees, rivers, mountains, and oceans.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper articles and conjunctions. The correction adds 'a' before 'very clear view' and connects the list of natural elements properly.

× I prefer wet weather because it seems very beautiful with eyes.

✓ I prefer wet weather because it seems very beautiful to the eyes.

The phrase 'beautiful with eyes' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'beautiful to the eyes' to indicate visual appeal.

× Also drive. Others seemed very dating with sweat.

✓ Also, dry weather seems very uncomfortable because of sweat.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence, using appropriate vocabulary and structure.

× Phones I have a habit of checking whether believe many times while.

✓ I have a habit of checking the weather forecast many times on my phone.

The original sentence misuses 'Phones' and 'whether believe'. The correction clarifies the subject and object, and uses the correct term 'weather forecast'.

× Sleeping at night and waking up 1 morning.

✓ I check the weather while sleeping at night and when waking up in the morning.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. The correction adds the subject and connects the actions properly.

× So I decided my daily tasks God into it.

✓ So I plan my daily tasks according to it.

The original sentence is unclear and contains 'God into it' which is incorrect. The correction uses 'plan my daily tasks according to it' to express the intended meaning.

× Yes, I read this number of climate change in recent years.

✓ Yes, I have read about the number of climate changes in recent years.

The original sentence uses 'this number of climate change' incorrectly. The correction uses 'the number of climate changes' and proper tense.

× The prime 1 is that the air gets more order sold.

✓ The main issue is that the air becomes more polluted.

The original sentence contains 'prime 1' and 'order sold' which are incorrect. The correction uses 'main issue' and 'air becomes more polluted' to convey the meaning.

× Effects vary. Every dance in our environment mainly the worst 'cause the birds have to suffer from or where horde errors which.

✓ The effects vary. Changes in our environment are mainly the worst because birds have to suffer from various hazards which reduce their energy.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains nonsensical phrases like 'Every dance' and 'or where horde errors'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× Reduce their energy.

✓ These hazards reduce their energy.

The original sentence is a fragment. Adding 'These hazards' makes it a complete sentence.

× Yes, I like to visit different nations where there's different weather and climate than where I live.

✓ Yes, I like to visit different countries where the weather and climate are different from where I live.

The original sentence uses 'nations' and 'there's different weather' incorrectly. The correction uses 'countries' and correct verb agreement.

× Divorce I wear like very much when when when I.

✓ I really like it when I visit those places.

The original sentence is nonsensical and incomplete. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× There's knowledge and experience. Another weather for the first time.

✓ I gain knowledge and experience of different weather for the first time.

The original sentences are fragmented. The correction combines them into a complete sentence with proper structure.