Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer deerhee todorhoi, oilgomjtoi baidal heregtei. Helnii aldaa, utga buruu hereglel baigaa tul, iluu todorhoi, zuv helbertei hariu ogoh heregtei.

Example: I live in Mongolia, which has four distinct seasons. The weather varies a lot, with cold winters and warm summers. It often rains during spring and autumn.

Suggestion: Utga oilgomjtoi, helnii aldaag zohitsuulj, utga buruu ug helj baina. Todorhoi, oilgomjtoi, neg helbertei ug songoh heregtei.

Example: I prefer hot weather because cold weather makes me feel uncomfortable and increases the chance of catching a cold or flu.

Suggestion: Utga oilgomjgui, helnii aldaa ihtei. Todorhoi, oilgomjtoi, zuv ug songoj, helbertei hariu ogoh heregtei.

Example: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes me feel uncomfortable and dizzy due to the strong sun heat.

Suggestion: Sain baina. Gantsaaraa helbertei, todorhoi hariu ogson baina. Link hiih ug heregleh, iluu todorhoi jishig oruulah heregtei.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going out. This helps me decide what to wear and plan my day accordingly.

Suggestion: Utga oilgomjgui, helnii aldaa ihtei. Todorhoi, oilgomjtoi, zuv ug songoj, helbertei, jishig oruulah heregtei.

Example: Climate change is very serious. It affects the environment and animals, and I am worried about the future. I think we all need to take action to protect our planet.

Suggestion: Utga oilgomjtoi, helnii aldaa zohitsuulj, todorhoi, oilgomjtoi hariu ogoh heregtei.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to travel to India because it is usually hot there, unlike my cold country. I want to experience the warm sun.

× Bird oftenly.

✓ Birds often.

The word 'oftenly' is not a correct adverb form; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, 'Bird' should be plural 'Birds' to match the context. Use 'Birds often' to express frequency correctly.

× It rains here, so the winter is like always, wet and sneaky.

✓ It rains here, so the winter is always wet and snowy.

The phrase 'like always' is incorrect; 'always' should be used directly. Also, 'sneaky' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'snowy' to describe winter. The conjunction 'so' is used correctly here.

× I prefer hot bitter because the cold weather is just not for me.

✓ I prefer hot weather because cold weather is just not for me.

The word 'bitter' is incorrectly used here; 'hot weather' is the correct phrase. 'Bitter' is usually used with 'cold' as 'bitter cold'. The sentence should be clear and concise.

× I don't like to feel so-called and. Just cool feelings. Because. Is it is so many higher percent of getting cough the flu in cold.

✓ I don't like to feel cold. I prefer just cool feelings because there is a much higher chance of catching a cough or the flu in cold weather.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'So-called and' is incorrect. The sentence needs to be combined and clarified to express the idea properly. Use 'there is' for existence and 'higher chance' instead of 'higher percent'.

× I actually preferred with with Twitter because when it is dry it kind of filters uncomfortable to me.

✓ I actually prefer wet weather because when it is dry, it feels uncomfortable to me.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but the context is present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. 'With with Twitter' is likely a mishearing of 'wet weather'. 'Filters uncomfortable' is incorrect; 'feels uncomfortable' is correct.

× I don't like getting the sun heat and just that those dizzy feelings.

✓ I don't like getting sun heat and those dizzy feelings.

The phrase 'just that those' is redundant and incorrect. Simplify to 'and those dizzy feelings' for clarity.

× Especially in the morning when I had to go out somewhere.

✓ Especially in the morning when I have to go out somewhere.

The phrase 'had to' is past tense, but the context is habitual action, so present tense 'have to' is appropriate.

× I usually check the weather forecast and I manage my outfits and where shall I go.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast and manage my outfits and decide where to go.

The phrase 'where shall I go' is a question form and incorrect here. It should be a statement 'decide where to go' to fit the sentence structure.

× My whole world is being affected by the climate change and those animals are surfing in our future is in danger.

✓ My whole world is being affected by climate change, and those animals are suffering; our future is in danger.

'Surfing' is incorrect; the intended word is 'suffering'. Also, the sentence is run-on and needs punctuation and conjunctions to separate ideas properly.

× Is just affects me a lot in scare me.

✓ It just affects me a lot and scares me.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. 'Is just affects' is incorrect; 'It just affects' is correct. 'In scare me' should be 'and scares me'.

× So there I have to do something to change the climate change. Morris lover.

✓ So I have to do something to change climate change. I am a nature lover.

'So there I have to do something' is awkward; 'So I have to do something' is better. 'Morris lover' is likely a mishearing of 'nature lover' or similar; corrected accordingly.

× Yes, I love to visit other cities that have different claimants from my country, the place where I live.

✓ Yes, I love to visit other cities that have different climates from my country, the place where I live.

The word 'claimants' is incorrect; the correct word is 'climates' to refer to weather conditions.

× Especially I want to travel to India because there's like always hot feeder.

✓ Especially, I want to travel to India because it is almost always hot there.

'Hot feeder' is incorrect; likely meant 'hot weather'. The phrase 'there's like always' is informal and incorrect; 'it is almost always' is better.

× And my country is kind of called and of it.

✓ And my country is kind of cold and dry.

'Called and of it' is incorrect; likely meant 'cold and dry'. Correct adjectives should be used to describe the weather.

× So in the future I would like to travel to India to feel the sun.

✓ So in the future, I would like to travel to India to feel the sun.

This sentence is correct in future tense and needs only a comma after 'future' for clarity.