Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to speak more clearly and avoid redundancy. Use simple, correct sentences to describe the weather naturally.

Example: I live in Kathmandu Valley, and right now it is the monsoon season. It rains a lot, but the weather feels pleasant because it is neither too hot nor too cold.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has many errors. Try to directly state your preference and explain why, using simple and correct sentences.

Example: To be honest, I don't like very cold or very hot weather. I prefer mild weather like during the monsoon season because it is comfortable.

Suggestion: Your answer has pronunciation and grammar mistakes. Speak clearly and use correct words. Explain your preference with reasons in simple sentences.

Example: I prefer wet weather because it feels refreshing and pleasant. It is not too cold or too hot, which I like very much.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and does not answer the question. Try to directly say if you check the weather forecast and how often, using simple sentences.

Example: I used to check the weather forecast when I was a child, but now I don't check it often because I stay indoors most of the time.

Suggestion: Your answer is fragmented and lacks clear structure. Try to form complete sentences and explain the effects with examples.

Example: Because of climate change, many houses in my hometown have been damaged by landslides and floods in recent years.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes. Use correct sentence structure and explain your reason clearly.

Example: I would love to visit other cities because I want to experience different climates from where I live.

× I'm currently residing in Kathmandu Valley oil.

✓ I'm currently residing in Kathmandu Valley.

The word 'oil' is incorrectly used here; it seems to be a typographical error or misplaced word. The correct preposition 'in' is already used before 'Kathmandu Valley', so 'oil' should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× It is monsoon season here almost in every part of the the valley.

✓ It is monsoon season here in almost every part of the valley.

The phrase 'the the valley' contains a repeated definite article 'the'. Also, the placement of 'almost' is better before 'in every part' to improve clarity. Removing the duplicate article and adjusting word order corrects the sentence.

× It rains a lot and it is so it feels so good and.

✓ It rains a lot and it feels so good.

The sentence is fragmented and contains redundant words like 'it is so' and an unnecessary conjunction 'and' at the end. Simplifying the sentence by removing extra words improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× We can enjoy ring it gives neither cold nor hot.

✓ We can enjoy it as it is neither cold nor hot.

The word 'ring' is incorrect here, likely a typo for 'rain' or misplaced word. Also, the sentence structure is awkward. Replacing 'ring' with 'it' and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the prepositional use.

× Will do be honest I don't prefer both weather actually preform once anyway.

✓ To be honest, I don't prefer either type of weather; I actually prefer one anyway.

The phrase 'Will do be honest' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'To be honest'. Also, 'both weather' should be 'either type of weather' since the speaker is expressing a preference between two options. 'Preform once' seems to be a typo for 'prefer one'.

× There is extreme razor is in Madrid neither Cole neither hot so I enjoy Munson.

✓ There is extreme weather in Madrid, neither cold nor hot, so I enjoy the monsoon.

The phrase 'extreme razor is' is incorrect; likely intended as 'extreme weather'. 'Cole' should be 'cold'. 'Munson' should be 'monsoon'. Also, 'neither Cole neither hot' should be 'neither cold nor hot' to correctly use correlative conjunctions.

× Season What do we?

✓ What do we do during the season?

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'What do we do during the season?' forms a complete question, improving sentence structure.

× I actually prefer wait weather is it, it feels so refreshing and have a pleasant day and it is neither cold nor too hard, which I find very. Repressing.

✓ I actually prefer wet weather; it feels so refreshing and makes the day pleasant. It is neither cold nor too hot, which I find very refreshing.

'Wait weather' should be 'wet weather'. 'Have a pleasant day' should be 'makes the day pleasant' for subject-verb agreement. 'Too hard' should be 'too hot'. 'Repressing' is a typo for 'refreshing'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× Well, I used to drink when I was child, but now there is a I don't take much is I don't walk out of my room that much so. Yes, I don't.

✓ Well, I used to check the weather when I was a child, but now I don't pay much attention as I don't walk out of my room that much. So, no, I don't.

'Used to drink' is incorrect in context; likely meant 'used to check'. Missing article 'a' before 'child'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring improves clarity. 'I don't take much is' is incorrect; replaced with 'I don't pay much attention'.

× Due to climate change and many houses and hitters are suffering from. Landslide. Earthquake. Floor in my hometown.

✓ Due to climate change, many houses and people are suffering from landslides, earthquakes, and floods in my hometown.

The sentence is fragmented with periods separating related ideas. 'Hitters' is likely a typo for 'people' or 'residents'. 'Floor' should be 'flood'. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves readability and correctness.

× I love to visit other cities is I want to have that experience which is different from here. Is this it?

✓ I would love to visit other cities because I want to have experiences different from here. Is that correct?

'Is I want' is incorrect; 'because I want' is appropriate. 'That experience which is different from here' should be plural 'experiences different from here' for natural expression. 'Is this it?' is unclear; 'Is that correct?' is a better question tag.