Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has many grammar and vocabulary errors which make it hard to understand. Try to use clear and correct sentences, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about the weather types and avoid unclear words like 'orders' or 'Dorothy multiple'.

Example: I live in Bangladesh, where the weather changes a lot. In summer, it is very hot and humid, while in winter, it becomes quite cold. During the rainy season, we often experience strong thunderstorms. Because of this, I get to enjoy different kinds of weather throughout the year.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to explain reasons for your preference and avoid confusing phrases like 'wire baby clothes' or 'prefer cold mode'.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable to me. Although I used to like hot weather since we could wear light clothes and go outside easily, recently the heat has become unbearable. Therefore, I now enjoy cold weather more.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to incorrect words and grammar. Please use correct vocabulary like 'dry' and 'wet' and explain your preference clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is better for hanging out with friends and doing outdoor activities. When it rains, I usually stay indoors, which I find boring. So, dry weather suits me more.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrases. Try to use complete sentences and correct expressions like 'check the weather forecast' and 'carry an umbrella'. Also, avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: I usually do not check the weather forecast regularly. However, during the monsoon season, I check it before going outside so that I can carry an umbrella if needed.

Suggestion: Your answer is very unclear and contains many errors. Please try to organize your ideas logically, use correct vocabulary related to climate change, and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect your points.

Example: Climate change has caused noticeable effects in recent years. Summers have become unbearably hot, and winters are extremely cold. Additionally, there are more frequent heavy rains and storms, which affect daily life.

Suggestion: Your answer has many grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to go to Russia to experience snowfall and very cold weather. I also want to visit Iceland to enjoy its beautiful scenery and cooler summers.

× I live in Bangladesh so all kind of orders are visible in her.

✓ I live in Bangladesh so all kinds of weather are visible here.

The phrase 'all kind of orders' should be 'all kinds of weather' to correctly use the plural form 'kinds' with 'all' and the correct noun 'weather' instead of 'orders'. Also, 'her' is incorrect and should be 'here' to indicate location.

× Like in summer there is unbearable hot, in winter there is unbearable cold but in rainy weather there is Thunder strong now and then.

✓ Like in summer there is unbearable heat, in winter there is unbearable cold but in rainy weather there is strong thunder now and then.

The word 'hot' should be replaced with the noun 'heat' to describe the weather condition. 'Thunder strong' is incorrect word order; it should be 'strong thunder' to correctly use the adjective before the noun.

× And there is a short Dorothy multiple also.

✓ And there is a short dry spell also.

The phrase 'short Dorothy multiple' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misspelling. It should be 'short dry spell' to describe a brief period of dry weather. 'Multiple' is unnecessary here.

× I honestly know prefer cold weather but once I loved hot weather cause there we don't have to wire baby clothes or we can go outside whenever want.

✓ I honestly now prefer cold weather but once I loved hot weather because there we don't have to wear heavy clothes and we can go outside whenever we want.

'know' should be 'now' to indicate current preference. 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness. 'wire baby clothes' is incorrect; it should be 'wear heavy clothes'. Also, 'whenever want' needs the subject 'we' to be 'whenever we want'.

× Pat recently because of the unbearable cold, unbearable heart and everything I prefer cold mode.

✓ But recently because of the unbearable cold, unbearable heat and everything, I prefer cold mode.

'Pat' should be 'But' to indicate contrast. 'heart' is a misspelling of 'heat'. The phrase 'prefer cold mode' is unclear; it might mean 'prefer cold weather' or 'prefer the cold mode' but kept as is for context.

× I honestly kinda hate order so I preferred driver then it's suitable for hanging out with friends.

✓ I honestly kinda hate order so I prefer dry weather because it's suitable for hanging out with friends.

'order' should be 'weather'. 'preferred driver' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer dry weather'. 'then' should be 'because' to explain reason.

× I gaining and do outdoor activities.

✓ I go out and do outdoor activities.

'I gaining' is incorrect; it should be 'I go out' or 'I enjoy'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear, so corrected to a logical phrase.

× Whenever it's raining outside I preferred to stay inside so it kind of boring for me an so I prefer driveway there mode.

✓ Whenever it's raining outside I prefer to stay inside because it is kind of boring for me, and so I prefer dry weather there.

'preferred' should be 'prefer' to maintain present tense. 'an' should be 'and'. 'driveway there mode' is incorrect; it should be 'dry weather there'.

× Otherwise I. I'm not that person who takes weather focus in a few minutes, so no.

✓ Otherwise, I'm not the person who pays attention to the weather forecast for a few minutes, so no.

Fragment 'Otherwise I.' is incomplete and corrected to 'Otherwise, I'm'. 'takes weather focus' is incorrect; it should be 'pays attention to the weather forecast'.

× The climate change in the nice interior clearly visible in my childhood Daddies subtle apart weather in saddle cold weather, but recently there in summer there is unbearable.

✓ The effects of climate change are clearly visible compared to my childhood; the weather was subtle and cold, but recently in summer there is unbearable heat.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Corrected to a clear sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and logical structure.

× What an in winter season there is unbearable cold and more scission.

✓ And in winter season there is unbearable cold and more pollution.

'What an' is incorrect; replaced with 'And'. 'scission' is likely a mishearing or misspelling; replaced with 'pollution' for logical meaning.

× Garry's heavy rain everywhere. So.

✓ There is heavy rain everywhere.

'Garry's' is incorrect; it should be 'There is' to indicate existence of heavy rain.

× Is I like to experience other cities different from my country's weather.

✓ I would like to experience other cities with different weather from my country.

'Is I like' is incorrect; corrected to 'I would like'. Added 'with' to connect 'cities' and 'different weather'.

× For example, I want to go to Russia to experience the snowfall, an unbearable cold and I kinda on to go to the Iceland source to see scenic beauty of hot summer an SO.

✓ For example, I want to go to Russia to experience the snowfall and unbearable cold, and I kind of want to go to Iceland to see the scenic beauty of hot summer and so on.

'an unbearable cold' corrected to 'and unbearable cold'. 'kinda on to go' corrected to 'kind of want to go'. 'the Iceland source' corrected to 'Iceland'. 'an SO' corrected to 'and so on'.