Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy by grouping similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: The weather where I live changes throughout the year, with four distinct seasons: summer, winter, autumn, and spring. In winter, we often see snow covering the area, while autumn and spring bring beautiful scenery with colorful leaves and blooming flowers. During the warm summer months, people enjoy outdoor activities like picnics and barbecues.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more specific reasons and linking words to make it more engaging and complete.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time outdoors. For example, I enjoy going on picnics and having barbecues with my friends and family, which is much more enjoyable when the weather is warm.

Suggestion: Focus on correcting grammar mistakes and clarify your preferences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific examples.

Example: I usually prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside. However, sometimes I enjoy wet weather, especially when I am free. For instance, I love sitting indoors with a cup of tea and reading a book while it rains outside.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and clarity by combining short sentences and using appropriate tenses. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day before I go out, usually in the morning or at night. When I used to go to work, I would open my weather app to see the forecast so that I could dress appropriately.

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid vague phrases and provide specific effects of climate change with correct grammar and vocabulary.

Example: Climate change has caused several serious effects in recent years. For example, global warming has led to the melting of glaciers, which contributes to rising sea levels. Additionally, pollution has worsened environmental problems, affecting ecosystems and human health.

Suggestion: Work on pronunciation and clarity of place names, and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to express contrast and provide clear reasons for your preferences.

Example: To be honest, I prefer not to visit cities with very different climates from where I live. For example, I wouldn't want to go to Winnipeg or some other places with extreme winter and heavy snow. However, I would consider visiting cities with climates similar to mine because I feel more comfortable there.

× Well, we experienced for weather.

✓ Well, we experience four types of weather.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'for' instead of 'four' and 'experienced' which is past tense; 'experience' is more appropriate here to describe habitual weather types. Also, 'weather' is uncountable, so 'types of weather' clarifies the meaning.

× Summer, Winter, Autumn and rainy and cold weather.

✓ Summer, winter, autumn, and rainy and cold weather.

Seasons should be in lowercase unless at the beginning of a sentence. Also, 'rainy and cold weather' is uncountable and correctly singular here.

× We see snow all over the area an in autumn and spring we sort different beautiful sceneries throughout the area and in warm weather we will go outside for picnic and BBQ's.

✓ We see snow all over the area, and in autumn and spring we see different beautiful sceneries throughout the area. In warm weather, we go outside for picnics and BBQs.

The sentence had missing commas and conjunctions. 'Sort' is incorrect; 'see' fits better. 'Picnic' should be plural 'picnics' to match the context. Also, 'BBQ's' should be 'BBQs' as it is plural, not possessive.

× Well, I prefer drive either, but.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather either, but.

The word 'drive' is a typo; it should be 'dry' to refer to weather. The sentence is incomplete and awkward; it should be 'I prefer dry weather either, but sometimes I prefer wet weather.'

× Whenever I am free and there is raining outside and having a cup of tea with the reading books, I love that weather.

✓ Whenever I am free and it is raining outside, having a cup of tea and reading books, I love that weather.

'There is raining' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it is raining'. 'With the reading books' is awkward; 'reading books' is better. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, I have a habit of checking forecast every day before I go out every night.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the forecast every day before I go out at night.

'Checking forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Every day before I go out every night' is redundant; 'before I go out at night' is clearer.

× I used to go to work, that time I just opened my app.

✓ When I used to go to work, I would open my app.

The original sentence is fragmented. 'That time' is awkward; 'When I used to go to work' is better. 'I just opened' should be 'I would open' to indicate habitual past action.

× And check the today's forecast so that I can wear clothes accordingly.

✓ And check today's forecast so that I can wear clothes accordingly.

'The today's forecast' is incorrect; 'today's forecast' does not need 'the' because 'today's' already specifies the forecast.

× Well there are a lot of reasons, for example is increasing of global warming and melting the glacier that affect the environment a lot due to pollution?

✓ Well, there are a lot of reasons. For example, the increase of global warming and the melting of glaciers affect the environment a lot due to pollution.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. 'Increasing of global warming' should be 'the increase of global warming'. 'Melting the glacier' should be 'the melting of glaciers'. The question mark is incorrect as this is a statement.

× To be very honest, I do not want to go any other city that have different environment where I live right now.

✓ To be very honest, I do not want to go to any other city that has a different environment from where I live right now.

'Any other city that have' is incorrect; 'city' is singular so the verb should be 'has'. Also, 'different environment' needs the article 'a'. Preposition 'from' is used to compare environments.

× For example Winnie Peg or Am so sketch one.

✓ For example, Winnipeg or some such place.

'Winnie Peg' is a misspelling of 'Winnipeg'. 'Am so sketch one' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'some such place' fits the intended meaning.

× It has extreme winter, extreme snowy weather.

✓ It has extreme winters and extremely snowy weather.

'Winter' should be plural 'winters' to indicate repeated seasons. 'Extreme snowy' should be 'extremely snowy' to use the adverb form modifying 'weather'.

× But yes I can go somewhere which is which Wear lab where temperature is similar to mine.

✓ But yes, I can go somewhere like Whistler where the temperature is similar to mine.

'Which is which Wear lab' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'like Whistler' fits the context. 'Where temperature' needs the definite article 'the' before 'temperature'.