Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Améliorez la fluidité et la clarté de votre réponse en évitant les hésitations et en structurant mieux vos phrases. Utilisez des phrases complètes et évitez les répétitions inutiles pour rendre votre réponse plus naturelle.

Example: I live in a tropical country where the weather is typically hot and humid throughout the year. There is not much rain, so it stays mostly dry.

Suggestion: Faites attention à la prononciation et à la grammaire, notamment l'utilisation correcte des adjectifs et des noms. Essayez d'utiliser des mots plus précis et évitez les répétitions pour améliorer la qualité de votre réponse.

Example: Personally, I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing layers of cozy clothes. I also like drinking warm beverages during the cold season.

Suggestion: Travaillez sur la structure de vos phrases et évitez les erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus cohérente et fluide.

Example: Of course, I prefer dry weather because I can be more active when I know it won't rain. It's also easier to plan outdoor activities in dry weather.

Suggestion: Améliorez la fluidité en évitant les pauses inutiles et en utilisant des phrases complètes. Soyez plus précis dans vos explications pour enrichir votre réponse.

Example: Yes, checking the weather forecast is part of my daily routine. I usually check the weather app on my phone every morning to decide if I need to bring an umbrella or wear a jacket.

Suggestion: Améliorez la grammaire et la précision de vos phrases. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées et donnez des exemples spécifiques pour renforcer votre réponse.

Example: I think climate change is a serious problem that causes many environmental impacts. For example, it has led to rising sea levels, hotter weather, and an increase in natural disasters.

Suggestion: Travaillez sur la complétude et la cohérence de votre réponse. Évitez les hésitations et terminez vos phrases pour que votre réponse soit claire et complète.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience various types of weather. For example, I am currently studying abroad in a country with a different climate from my tropical home.

× I live in a country weather.

✓ I live in a country with a certain type of weather.

The phrase 'a country weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and cannot be directly preceded by 'a'. The sentence needs a preposition and a clearer structure to express the idea.

× Weather is.

✓ The weather is

The sentence 'Weather is.' is incomplete and lacks an object or complement. It should be 'The weather is' followed by a description.

× There is. No. A lot of rained during. Or year.

✓ There is not a lot of rain during the year.

The phrase 'a lot of rained' is incorrect because 'rain' is a noun here, not a verb. Also, 'during. Or year' is fragmented and should be 'during the year'.

× I like wearing layers and cozy weather at cozy clothes.

✓ I like wearing layers and cozy clothes in cozy weather.

The phrase 'cozy weather at cozy clothes' is incorrect. The preposition 'at' is wrong here, and the sentence structure is confusing. It should clearly state liking cozy clothes in cozy weather.

× And I also enjoy drinking something worm in the cold season.

✓ And I also enjoy drinking something warm in the cold season.

The word 'worm' is a misspelling of 'warm'. This is a spelling error affecting the adjective describing the drink.

× I'll be more active when I know it's not gonna be rain.

✓ I'll be more active when I know it's not going to rain.

The phrase 'gonna be rain' is informal and grammatically incorrect. 'Going to rain' is the correct form, and 'gonna' should be avoided in formal speech.

× It's easy to meet to plan the activities when the weather is dry.

✓ It's easy to meet and plan activities when the weather is dry.

The phrase 'meet to plan' is awkward and incorrect. The correct conjunction is 'and' to connect the two activities.

× I always check the weather forecast in the application on my phone to see.

✓ I always check the weather forecast on the application on my phone to see.

The correct preposition for using an app is 'on', not 'in'.

× If I need to bring an umbrella or wear jacket.

✓ If I need to bring an umbrella or wear a jacket.

The noun 'jacket' requires an article 'a' before it.

× It caused the environmental impacts.

✓ It causes environmental impacts.

The sentence refers to an ongoing issue, so present tense 'causes' is appropriate rather than past tense 'caused'.

× It rise the sea levels.

✓ It raises the sea levels.

The verb 'rise' should be in third person singular present tense 'raises' to agree with the subject 'It'.

× The weather is much hotter than before and also it cause a lot of disaster.

✓ The weather is much hotter than before and also it causes a lot of disasters.

The verb 'cause' should be 'causes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'disaster' should be plural 'disasters'.

× Yes, actually I want to experience all the different types of weather and actually I'm.

✓ Yes, actually I want to experience all the different types of weather and actually I'm...

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly, making it unclear.

× Uh, studying abroad. So basically I'm. In a tropical country an now I'm studying in a.

✓ I'm studying abroad. So basically, I'm in a tropical country and now I'm studying in a...

The sentences are fragmented and incomplete, lacking proper structure and ending abruptly.