Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, and then add specific supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, mention the typical weather and why you like it.

Example: The weather where I live is mostly warm, but I like the winter season the most because it is cool and comfortable. Also, my birthday falls during winter, which makes it special for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your reasons. Use relevant vocabulary and avoid unclear phrases like 'horde'.

Example: I prefer cold weather because hot summers can be harsh and may damage the skin. For example, Delhi recorded temperatures as high as 52°C, which is very uncomfortable. On the other hand, cold weather is refreshing and good for the skin.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Start with a clear statement of your preference, then explain why, using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and be specific.

Example: I usually prefer dry weather because it often follows heavy rain, which I enjoy. The fresh air after rain makes dry days pleasant for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is too long and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a concise answer with clear reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day before going to work. If the forecast predicts bad weather, I prefer to stay home; otherwise, I enjoy going to my workplace.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and fragmented. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: In recent years, climate change has caused drastic changes in weather patterns. Summers have become hotter and more severe, while winters have become colder than before.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and adding linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Example: Yes, I would love to visit other cities with different climates because it would help me learn about various weather conditions and how people adapt to them.

× I like the winter weather the most as it provides us cold and my birthday also comes on the in this weather.

✓ I like the winter weather the most as it provides us cold, and my birthday also comes in this weather.

The phrase 'comes on the in this weather' is incorrect. The correct preposition to indicate time or season is 'in' as in 'comes in this weather'. Also, 'on the' is unnecessary here. The sentence should be corrected to 'comes in this weather' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually prefer cold weather as in summers there are very there is very much of horde that can damage our skin.

✓ I usually prefer cold weather as in summers there is a lot of heat that can damage our skin.

The word 'horde' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'heat'. Also, 'there are very there is very much of horde' is grammatically incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'there is a lot of heat' because 'heat' is uncountable and singular.

× Also like in 52°C it was recorded highest in Delhi.

✓ Also, 52°C was recorded as the highest temperature in Delhi.

The sentence structure is awkward and missing articles. 'It was recorded highest' should be 'was recorded as the highest temperature'. Also, 'like in 52°C' is incorrect; it should be '52°C was recorded'.

× It is very high and the cold is also considered as with a skin boosting the weather.

✓ It is very high, and the cold is also considered good for boosting the skin.

The phrase 'considered as with a skin boosting the weather' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'considered good for boosting the skin'. The preposition 'for' is necessary to indicate purpose or benefit.

× Are usually prefer dry weather as it comes after a huge rain and I also love rain.

✓ I usually prefer dry weather as it comes after heavy rain, and I also love rain.

The sentence starts with 'Are' which is incorrect; it should be 'I'. Also, 'a huge rain' is incorrect; 'heavy rain' is the correct expression. Pronoun 'I' should be used to refer to oneself.

× Yes, ideally check weather be 'cause I'm daily go to my work place so if there in the climatic conditions are showing bad on the weather forecast application then I do not go on my workplace and if it is good then I really enjoy to go on my workplace.

✓ Yes, I ideally check the weather because I go to my workplace daily. So, if the climatic conditions shown on the weather forecast application are bad, then I do not go to my workplace, and if it is good, then I really enjoy going to my workplace.

The original sentence has multiple grammatical errors including missing subject 'I', incorrect verb forms, and awkward phrasing. 'Check weather be' should be 'check the weather'. 'I'm daily go' should be 'I go daily'. 'There in the climatic conditions are showing bad' should be 'the climatic conditions shown are bad'. Also, 'go on my workplace' should be 'go to my workplace'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Don't buy few years, climatic conditions as drastically change and. Changed and.

✓ In the past few years, climatic conditions have drastically changed.

The phrase 'Don't buy few years' is incorrect; it should be 'In the past few years'. Also, 'climatic conditions as drastically change and. Changed and.' is ungrammatical and incomplete. The correct present perfect tense 'have drastically changed' is used to indicate changes over recent years.

× It has become more harsh in the summers as well as more cold in the winters.

✓ It has become harsher in the summers as well as colder in the winters.

The adjectives 'harsh' and 'cold' need to be in comparative form 'harsher' and 'colder' to compare the current state with the past. Using comparative adjectives is necessary here.

× Yes, I will really enjoy visiting different cities as that will provide me information about different climatic conditions according to cities.

✓ Yes, I will really enjoy visiting different cities as that will provide me with information about different climatic conditions in those cities.

The phrase 'provide me information' is missing the preposition 'with'. Also, 'according to cities' is awkward; 'in those cities' is more appropriate. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition use and clarity.