Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many unrelated words, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use relevant vocabulary. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: The weather where I live is usually mild and pleasant. After it rains, the air feels fresh and the surroundings look very green, which I really enjoy. I like this kind of weather because it makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. To improve, use clear topic sentences, correct grammar, and linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, provide specific reasons to support your preference.

Example: I prefer cold weather most of the time because it keeps my skin healthy and glowing. However, hot weather makes me sweat a lot, which can be uncomfortable and affect my skin negatively. Therefore, I enjoy cold weather more.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but contains some unclear and incorrect phrases. Improve by using correct vocabulary and grammar, and organize your ideas logically with linking words. Be specific about why you prefer dry weather and avoid contradictions.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to go outside comfortably without worrying about getting wet or slipping. Wet weather can make roads slippery and muddy, which makes it hard to get around. Therefore, dry weather makes outdoor activities easier and more enjoyable for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and organize your answer logically with linking words. Be specific about when and how you check the weather.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going outside. I often use Google to see the latest updates. Depending on the forecast, I choose appropriate clothes, and if it looks like rain, I make sure to bring a jacket and a hat.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but the last sentence is unclear and some grammar needs improvement. To enhance your response, use precise vocabulary, correct grammar, and clear linking words to explain the effects of climate change logically.

Example: I believe climate change has made the weather much hotter in recent years, especially during summer. For example, deforestation reduces the number of trees that cool the air, which leads to higher temperatures. As a result, we are experiencing more extreme weather conditions than before.

Suggestion: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. To improve, respond with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and provide specific details about the climates you want to experience. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, absolutely. I would like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, I used to live in Calgary, which has cold weather and heavy snow, unlike my current city. I would love to visit there again to enjoy the snowy environment.

× Bell currently 11 apples food and there is a beautiful weather which I like alot 'cause most of the time there there is green and as I like green and after a rain it.

✓ Well, currently the weather is beautiful, which I like a lot because most of the time there is greenery, and I like green. After rain, it looks really clear and attractive, so that is why I like it.

The original sentence contains incorrect word choices and awkward phrasing, such as 'Bell currently 11 apples food' which is nonsensical, and 'a beautiful weather' which incorrectly uses 'weather' with an article. The sentence also has repetition and unclear references. The correction replaces these with appropriate expressions and correct article usage, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Bell currently 11 apples food and there is a beautiful weather which I like alot 'cause most of the time there there is green and as I like green and after a rain it.

✓ Well, currently the weather is beautiful, which I like a lot because most of the time there is greenery, and I like green. After rain, it looks really clear and attractive, so that is why I like it.

The phrase 'a beautiful weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. The correction removes the article and uses 'the weather' appropriately.

× Majority of time I like cold weather as compared to what we be 'cause in the cold weather I will my body and skin shine more.

✓ Most of the time, I like cold weather compared to hot weather because in cold weather, my body and skin shine more.

'Majority of time' should be 'Most of the time' to correctly express frequency. Also, 'what we be' is unclear and likely intended to contrast cold weather with hot weather. The correction clarifies this and fixes pluralization and article usage.

× Majority of time I like cold weather as compared to what we be 'cause in the cold weather I will my body and skin shine more.

✓ Most of the time, I like cold weather compared to hot weather because in cold weather, my body and skin shine more.

The phrase 'what we be' is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb forms. It is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction replaces it with 'hot weather' to make the comparison clear and grammatically correct.

× However, if I talk about hot weather in that case that there is a sweat and which also put bad impact on my skin.

✓ However, when I talk about hot weather, there is sweating which also has a bad impact on my skin.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions and relative pronouns, making it confusing. 'If I talk about hot weather in that case that there is a sweat' is awkward and incorrect. The correction uses 'when' and rephrases for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Therefore I like cold.

✓ Therefore, I like cold weather.

The sentence 'Therefore I like cold.' is incomplete and ambiguous. Adding 'weather' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× Well, I prefer dry weather because it allowed me to go outside comfort ubly without worrying about getting wet or slippery.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather because it allows me to go outside comfortably without worrying about getting wet or slipping.

'Allowed' should be present tense 'allows' to match the habitual preference. 'Comfort ubly' is a misspelling of 'comfortably'. 'Slippery' is an adjective; the correct verb form is 'slipping' to describe the action of slipping.

× On Slippery Rd. wet weather can be quite convenient since some streets become flooded or muddy making it difficult to get around.

✓ In wet weather, it can be quite inconvenient since some streets become flooded or muddy, making it difficult to get around.

The phrase 'On Slippery Rd.' is unclear and likely incorrect in context. Also, 'wet weather can be quite convenient' contradicts the following explanation. The correction changes 'on' to 'in' and 'convenient' to 'inconvenient' to match the intended meaning.

× Therefore, I enjoyed drive weather more much more as they make outdoor activities easier and enjoyable.

✓ Therefore, I enjoy dry weather much more as it makes outdoor activities easier and more enjoyable.

'Enjoyed drive weather more much more' contains multiple errors: 'drive' should be 'dry', tense should be present 'enjoy' to match habitual preference, and 'more much more' is redundant. Also, 'they' should be 'it' referring to 'dry weather'. The correction fixes these issues.

× And how often? Definitely, I mostly like to check whether when I want to go outside, In that case I firstly check the weather on the Google and according to the weather I put myself in the clothes as well as if there is a rainy, in that case I carry a jacket with the cap.

✓ How often? Definitely, I usually like to check the weather when I want to go outside. In that case, I first check the weather on Google, and according to the weather, I dress accordingly. If it is rainy, I carry a jacket with a hood.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and articles ('whether' instead of 'weather', 'put myself in the clothes' is incorrect). 'Firstly' is better as 'first'. 'A rainy' is incorrect; 'rainy' is an adjective and needs a noun. 'Cap' is better replaced with 'hood' for rain protection. The correction addresses these issues for clarity and correctness.

× I think climate change has caused the weather to become much hotter in recent years, especially during the summer.

✓ I think climate change has caused the weather to become much hotter in recent years, especially during the summer.

This sentence is grammatically correct with appropriate use of present perfect tense to describe recent changes. No correction needed.

× As a result, we are experiencing more extreme temperature than before.

✓ As a result, we are experiencing more extreme temperatures than before.

'Temperature' should be plural 'temperatures' because it refers to multiple instances or degrees of temperature changes over time.

× So definitely there is a change of heart.

✓ So definitely, there is a change in the climate.

'Change of heart' is an idiom meaning a change in opinion or feeling, which is inappropriate here. The intended meaning is a change in climate or weather patterns. The correction replaces the idiom with a more accurate phrase.

× Yeah, absolutely. I like to go in other countries are like I used to live in Calgary and there is the cold weather and heavy snow which is really available in that place as compared to VC.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I like to go to other countries. For example, I used to live in Calgary where there is cold weather and heavy snow, which is really common there compared to Vancouver.

'Go in other countries are like' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'go to other countries'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So definitely I like to go there to enjoy the snow mode.

✓ So definitely, I like to go there to enjoy the snow more.

'Snow mode' is incorrect; likely intended 'snow more'. The correction fixes this to express the intended meaning.