Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문장이 끊어져 있어 자연스럽지 않습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 세부사항을 포함하도록 연습하세요.

Example: Usually, the weather in my city is sunny. However, during the summer, we often experience heavy rain which makes the weather quite wet. I don't like the wet weather very much because it can be inconvenient.

Suggestion: 답변이 반복적이고 문장이 부자연스럽습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 자신의 의견과 이유를 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable and irritable. Cold weather is more pleasant for me and helps me stay calm.

Suggestion: 발음 오류와 문장 구조가 부자연스럽습니다. 정확한 단어 선택과 문장 구성을 연습하여 명확한 의사 전달을 할 수 있도록 하세요.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it makes me feel refreshed and happy. On the other hand, wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable and annoyed.

Suggestion: 과거 시제 사용이 부적절하며 문장이 끊어져 있습니다. 현재 습관을 나타내는 현재 시제를 사용하고, 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before I go out. I do this to decide whether I need to bring an umbrella or wear rain boots.

Suggestion: 내용이 중복되고 문장이 불완전합니다. 구체적인 예시를 들고, 문장을 논리적으로 연결하는 연습을 하세요.

Example: I think climate change has many negative effects. For example, it worsens air and water pollution, making these problems more serious.

Suggestion: 문장이 단편적이고 연결이 부족합니다. 이유와 구체적인 설명을 포함하여 자연스럽게 문장을 연결하는 연습을 하세요.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially cold places like Iceland. I want to experience the snowy scenery there because it looks beautiful.

× Usually it's sunny, but. But every summer? Really like it has or heavy rain and it's really. Wet weather so I don't like to wet better but. I think my city.

✓ Usually it's sunny, but every summer, it really has heavy rain and wet weather, so I don't like the wet weather in my city.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. Combining the fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and coherence.

× I prefer the cold weather because I don't like. Hot weather so much and. Hot weather makes me feel like uncomfortable and really angry so I prefer cold better because it will be better than hot weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I don't like hot weather so much. Hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable and really angry, so I prefer cold weather because it is better than hot weather.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'like uncomfortable' instead of 'uncomfortable' and 'prefer cold better' which is redundant. Correcting adjective usage and sentence flow improves grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer dry brother. Because a dry weather makes me feel like refresh and makes me happy, but what better feels like uncomfortable and so angry so I think. I think I prefer job better.

✓ I prefer dry weather because dry weather makes me feel refreshed and happy, but wet weather feels uncomfortable and makes me angry, so I think I prefer dry weather better.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and words like 'brother' instead of 'weather' and 'job' instead of 'dry'. Correcting these pronouns and word choices clarifies meaning.

× Yes, I had a habit of checking the weather. Before I go, before I go out. And I checked the weather because bring the umbrella or. Where this where are rain shoes is important too.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather before I go out. I check the weather because bringing an umbrella or rain shoes is important too.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'had' for a current habit and has fragmented sentences. Using present perfect 'have' and combining sentences improves tense consistency and clarity.

× I think climate change has a lot of negative effects, for example. The climate change. Makes the situation about air pollution or water pollution. Like, more serious serious SO.

✓ I think climate change has a lot of negative effects. For example, climate change makes air pollution and water pollution more serious.

The original sentence has fragmented structure and redundant words. Correcting sentence structure and verb usage improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I want to visit other cities that have different climates. Especially. The has the cold weather like Iceland. Because I want to see a lot of snow scenery.

✓ Yes, I want to visit other cities that have different climates, especially those with cold weather like Iceland because I want to see a lot of snowy scenery.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'The has the cold weather' which is ungrammatical. Replacing with 'those with cold weather' and correcting 'snow scenery' to 'snowy scenery' improves grammar and clarity.