Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: The weather where I live is mostly sunny, especially in summer. However, during winter, it becomes rainy and cooler.

Suggestion: Improve pronunciation and clarity when mentioning examples. Also, try to explain why you prefer cold weather beyond just food, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to enjoy traditional winter dishes like roti and halvah. Moreover, the cool climate feels refreshing compared to hot weather.

Suggestion: Focus on correct pronunciation and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your reasons clearly and avoid spelling mistakes.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is safer to travel, especially on two-wheelers. When it is wet, roads become slippery, increasing the risk of accidents, so I feel more comfortable and secure in dry conditions.

Suggestion: Try to speak fluently without unnecessary pauses. Use linking words to explain the reason and frequency of checking the forecast.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast regularly because it helps me plan my trips and daily activities better.

Suggestion: Work on sentence completion and clarity. Provide specific examples and use linking words to explain your points logically.

Example: In my opinion, climate change has caused unpredictable weather patterns in recent years. For example, it sometimes rains during the summer, which was uncommon before.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and use appropriate linking words. Also, clarify your reasons for choosing the city with specific details.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Bangalore because it has a pleasant and cooler climate compared to the hot weather where I live.

× Where you live? Mostly the weather where I live is sunny, especially during the summer months and it depends on the season.

✓ Where I live, mostly the weather is sunny, especially during the summer months, and it depends on the season.

The original sentence 'Where you live?' is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence structure error. The corrected sentence properly introduces the location and combines the ideas into a coherent sentence.

× In winter it's. Winter and it's rainy. It rains.

✓ In winter, it is rainy and it rains.

The original sentences are fragmented and repetitive. Combining them into a single coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer cold weather becaused during the winter season I get to enjoy traditional dishes that are special to my culture.

✓ I prefer cold weather because during the winter season I get to enjoy traditional dishes that are special to my culture.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. This correction fixes the conjunction usage error.

× For example, Sir so kasa Gran ma Ki Ki roti gajuwaka halvah and there these are my favorite dishes.

✓ For example, Sirso Kasa, Granma Ki Ki roti, and Gajuwaka Halvah are my favorite dishes.

The original sentence is unclear and improperly structured. Correcting the names and sentence structure clarifies the meaning and improves grammar.

× I prefer drive weather because it is safer to travel especially on 2 Wheelers in wait where does the road becomes slippery which increase the risk of accident.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is safer to travel, especially on two-wheelers in wet conditions where the road becomes slippery, which increases the risk of accidents.

The word 'drive' is incorrect; it should be 'dry'. Also, 'wait' should be 'wet'. The sentence also needed corrections in verb forms and pluralization for clarity and correctness.

× So I feel more comfort table and secure if the weather is try.

✓ So I feel more comfortable and secure if the weather is dry.

The words 'comfort table' and 'try' are incorrect. They should be 'comfortable' and 'dry' respectively to correctly describe feelings and weather.

× I. Usually check it on regular basis becauses it is good to check the weather and then go out and plan your. Trips.

✓ I usually check it on a regular basis because it is good to check the weather before going out and planning your trips.

The original sentence has unnecessary periods and incorrect conjunction 'becauses'. The corrected sentence improves flow and grammar.

× In my opinion effect has took a piece in recent years becauses.

✓ In my opinion, the effect has taken place in recent years because

The phrase 'has took' is incorrect; the past participle 'taken' should be used with 'has'. Also, 'a piece' should be 'place'. This corrects the past tense and word choice errors.

× You can't predict the weather. Anything can happen anytime like.

✓ You can't predict the weather; anything can happen anytime, like

The sentence ends abruptly and the conjunction usage is incorrect. Using a semicolon and comma improves sentence connection and flow.

× In summer season, rains occur in.

✓ In the summer season, rains occur.

The original sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete. The corrected sentence completes the thought properly.

× Yes, of course, if I'll get a chance to visit other city.

✓ Yes, of course, if I get a chance to visit another city.

'I'll' (I will) is incorrect in this conditional clause; 'I get' is appropriate. Also, 'other city' should be 'another city' to refer to a different city.

× It would be Bangalore becauses it has a very good weather, gloomy weather and it is cold there.

✓ It would be Bangalore because it has very good, gloomy weather and it is cold there.

'Becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'a very good weather' should be 'very good weather' without the article.

× But where I live it is very hot.

✓ But where I live, it is very hot.

A comma is needed after 'where I live' to separate the clauses properly for better readability.