Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

Example: The weather where I live is typically tropical, with only two seasons: the hot season and the rainy season. During the rainy season, it is usually hot and humid.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Example: I prefer hot weather because I am used to living in a tropical country, and I find it easier to do outdoor activities when it is warm.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời còn lặp từ và chưa mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Example: I prefer wet weather because I feel more comfortable in it. Since we live in a tropical country, dry weather can sometimes harm our skin.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn về thói quen của mình.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast daily. However, I check it before going on a long trip to prepare everything I need.

Suggestion: Bạn đã đưa ra ý kiến nhưng câu trả lời còn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, liên từ và từ vựng phù hợp để làm rõ ý hơn.

Example: I believe the effects of climate change are visible every day. For instance, the weather has become more extreme, and air pollution has increased, which is harmful to our health.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do muốn đến những nơi có khí hậu khác.

Example: Yes, I would love to visit countries with different climates, especially places with snow, because I have never seen snow before and I want to experience it.

× Is kinda hard. Well where I live because we live in a tropical country, we only have two seasons in a year.

✓ It's kind of hard to explain. Well, where I live, because we live in a tropical country, we only have two seasons in a year.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb, making it incomplete. 'Is kinda hard' should be 'It's kind of hard to explain' to form a complete sentence. Also, adding commas improves clarity.

× Which is are the weather hot in the rainy day?

✓ The weather is hot even on rainy days.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Which is are the weather hot in the rainy day?' is incorrect structure. The corrected sentence clearly states the intended meaning with proper subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× I prefer hot weather because I'm a few of you comfortable in tropical country and not easy for me to do the activity outside.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I'm more comfortable in a tropical country, and it's not easy for me to do activities outside.

'I'm a few of you comfortable' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I'm more comfortable'. Also, 'do the activity outside' should be plural 'do activities outside' to match general meaning.

× In my opinion I feel comfortable in a wet weather because we live in a tropical country so dry dry climate maybe not good for our skin.

✓ In my opinion, I feel comfortable in wet weather because we live in a tropical country, so a dry climate may not be good for our skin.

'a wet weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'dry dry climate' is repetitive and should be 'a dry climate'. Commas improve sentence clarity.

× I often that I only do that when I have a long trip to somewhere else and I want to make sure that I have repair essential enough to go to display.

✓ I often only do that when I have a long trip somewhere else, and I want to make sure that I have enough essential items to go on the trip.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and awkward phrasing. 'I often that I only do that' is incorrect; it should be 'I often only do that'. 'Repair essential' is incorrect; it should be 'enough essential items'. 'Go to display' is unclear and replaced with 'go on the trip'.

× For example, we can see that the weather is getting harder and harder every day.

✓ For example, we can see that the weather is getting harsher and harsher every day.

'Harder' is not the correct adjective to describe weather conditions becoming more severe. 'Harsher' is the appropriate adjective here.

× And also there's a lot of air is polluted and is not good forever.

✓ Also, there is a lot of air pollution, and it is not good for us.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb usage. 'There's a lot of air is polluted' is ungrammatical. It should be 'there is a lot of air pollution'. 'Is not good forever' is unclear and corrected to 'it is not good for us'.

× All the country beside draft traffical country.

✓ I would like to visit countries other than tropical countries.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'All the country beside draft traffical country' is ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.

× Because I yeah, I never like, I never seen. I never seen snow before so I would love to go to not country to see it.

✓ Because, yeah, I have never seen snow before, so I would love to go to a cold country to see it.

The original sentence has incorrect verb tense and pronoun use. 'I never seen' should be 'I have never seen'. 'Not country' is unclear and corrected to 'a cold country'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.