Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a direct and clear answer first, then add specific details about the weather. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, mention the main seasons clearly and their timing without repeating similar ideas.

Example: I live in India, where we experience five main seasons: winter, spring, summer, autumn, and monsoon. Each season has its own unique weather patterns and timings throughout the year.

Suggestion: Focus on giving a clear preference with reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and mention specific festivals correctly.

Example: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy the winter season. Also, my birthday falls in winter, which makes it special. Moreover, many festivals like Diwali and Christmas happen during this time, making it more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference and explain reasons logically using linking words. Avoid grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Be specific about how dry weather suits your routine.

Example: I prefer dry weather because rainy days can disrupt my busy academic schedule. Therefore, dry weather helps me stay focused and manage my daily routine effectively.

Suggestion: Provide a clear and complete answer. Mention how often and why you check the forecast. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often check the weather forecast on my phone, especially when my father asks me to. This helps me plan my activities better over the coming days.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion with specific reasons and examples. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Example: I believe climate change has caused many problems recently. For example, increased pollution from traffic jams and more cars has raised pollution levels, which contributes to global warming.

Suggestion: Answer directly whether you want to visit such cities and give reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid irrelevant details. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

Example: I have not yet visited cities with different climates, but I would like to. For instance, when I was in 12th grade, my friends and I often visited Shimla, which has a cooler climate than my hometown.

× Well, as I'm living in India, so there are five season winter, spring, autumn, summer and so on.

✓ Well, as I'm living in India, there are five seasons: winter, spring, autumn, summer, and so on.

The use of both 'as' and 'so' together is redundant. Also, 'season' should be plural as there are multiple seasons. Use a colon to introduce the list of seasons.

× Well, as I'm living in India, so there are five season winter, spring, autumn, summer and so on.

✓ Well, as I'm living in India, there are five seasons: winter, spring, autumn, summer, and so on.

The word 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to multiple seasons.

× So there are a different sort of timing of these different weathers.

✓ So there is a different sort of timing for these different weathers.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'timing for' is the correct phrase to indicate the schedule or occurrence of weather.

× So there are a different sort of timing of these different weathers.

✓ So there is a different sort of timing for these different weathers.

The phrase 'a different sort' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'.

× Well, I mostly prefer the cold weather because it is my favorite weather and inventors, it's also my birthday.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer the cold weather because it is my favorite weather and in winter, it's also my birthday.

The word 'inventors' is incorrect; it should be 'in winter' to indicate the season.

× So it also called my favorite birthday because I'm fond of winter weather because there are some sort of festivals in vendors like Diwali, Christmas Day, Unholy, so on.

✓ So it is also called my favorite birthday because I'm fond of winter weather as there are some sorts of festivals in winter like Diwali, Christmas Day, Lohri, and so on.

'Called' needs 'is' to form passive voice. 'Vendors' is incorrect; it should be 'winter'. Also, 'some sort' should be plural 'some sorts' when referring to multiple festivals. 'Unholy' is likely a misspelling of 'Lohri' or another festival.

× So it also called my favorite birthday because I'm fond of winter weather because there are some sort of festivals in vendors like Diwali, Christmas Day, Unholy, so on.

✓ So it is also called my favorite birthday because I'm fond of winter weather as there are some sorts of festivals in winter like Diwali, Christmas Day, Lohri, and so on.

The phrase 'some sort' should be plural 'some sorts' when referring to multiple festivals.

× Well I mostly prefer the dry weather because I don't like the wet weather as the rainy days are good for some times but these are not good as I'm very busy in my academic studies so I think there drive one weather is the best for me to being busy in my schedule an in my daily routine.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer the dry weather because I don't like the wet weather. Rainy days are good sometimes, but they are not good for me as I'm very busy with my academic studies. So I think dry weather is the best for me to stay busy in my schedule and daily routine.

Incorrect prepositions like 'in my academic studies' should be 'with my academic studies'. 'Drive one weather' is incorrect; it should be 'dry weather'. 'Being busy in my schedule an in my daily routine' is awkward; better phrased as 'stay busy in my schedule and daily routine'.

× I think, uh, according to whether I oftenly prefer to check the weather forecast on my cell phone and this is because whenever my father told tell me or ask me to check the weather condition for a long period of time, so it.

✓ I think, uh, depending on the weather, I often prefer to check the weather forecast on my cell phone because whenever my father tells or asks me to check the weather condition for a long period of time, I do so.

'According to whether' is incorrect; 'depending on the weather' is better. 'Oftenly' is not a word; use 'often'. 'Told tell' is incorrect; use 'tells'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× Well, I think there are so many changes in climate in this modern era, like there are increasing the pollution as there are so many traffic jams and there are so many cars owned by the owners which are laid to increase the pollution level.

✓ Well, I think there are many changes in the climate in this modern era, like increasing pollution due to many traffic jams and many cars owned by people which lead to increased pollution levels.

The phrase 'there are increasing the pollution' is incorrect; it should be 'increasing pollution'. 'Laid to increase' is incorrect; it should be 'lead to increased'. Also, 'so many' is better replaced with 'many' for formal speech.

× So the climate change is increasingly day by day.

✓ So climate change is increasing day by day.

'Increasingly' is an adverb and incorrect here; the verb 'increasing' should be used to indicate the ongoing action.

× Well till now I haven't visit any other city that have different climates from my hometown but I remember when I was in my 12 to standard my me and my friends usually prefer to go to see a Shim land.

✓ Well, till now I haven't visited any other city that has different climates from my hometown, but I remember when I was in my 12th standard, my friends and I usually preferred to go to see Shimla.

'Haven't visit' should be 'haven't visited' (past participle). 'That have' should be 'that has' to agree with singular 'city'. 'My me and my friends' is incorrect; 'my friends and I' is correct. 'Prefer' should be past tense 'preferred' to match past time. 'Shim land' should be 'Shimla'.

× Well till now I haven't visit any other city that have different climates from my hometown but I remember when I was in my 12 to standard my me and my friends usually prefer to go to see a Shim land. So that was the time and it was oftenly.

✓ Well, till now I haven't visited any other city that has different climates from my hometown, but I remember when I was in my 12th standard, my friends and I usually preferred to go to see Shimla. That was the time, and we went there often.

'Oftenly' is not a word; the correct adverb is 'often'. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct adverb placement.