Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct vocabulary like 'hot' instead of 'hard' for weather. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Example: I live in Kerala, where the weather varies throughout the year. For example, summers are quite hot, while the rainy season brings cooler temperatures. Overall, the climate changes depending on the season.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons and examples, using linking words for coherence.

Example: I prefer cold weather because I am allergic to heat, which makes me sweat and affects my makeup. Moreover, cold weather feels more comfortable and easier to manage than hot weather.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples clearly.

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes it difficult to dry clothes. For instance, when I wash clothes and hang them outside, they take much longer to dry during rainy days.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your habits clearly.

Example: I usually don't check the weather forecast and prefer to predict it myself. However, sometimes I use the weather app on my iPhone because it is convenient, although I find it not always accurate.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and provide a complete, coherent response. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words.

Example: I believe climate change has caused significant changes in weather patterns recently. This is mainly due to human activities like deforestation and poor land management, which contribute to global warming.

Suggestion: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Organize your ideas clearly, avoid repetition, and use linking words. Provide specific examples with correct names and descriptions.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to visit Germany and Kashmir, a state in my country, which is known for its cold and beautiful spring weather.

× Here be experienced in different types of weather.

✓ Here we experience different types of weather.

The phrase 'Here be experienced' is incorrect because 'be' is not used properly here. The correct form is 'we experience' to indicate that people living here experience different weather. 'There be' structure is used to indicate existence, but here the subject 'we' is needed.

× Some days it will be really hard and some days it will be really cold but not that freezing cold but.

✓ Some days it is really hot and some days it is really cold but not that freezing cold.

The use of 'will be' suggests future tense, but the student is describing habitual weather conditions, so present simple tense 'is' is appropriate.

× At a bit cold, it depends on the season.

✓ It is a bit cold; it depends on the season.

The phrase 'At a bit cold' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'It is a bit cold.' Also, the sentence needs proper punctuation to separate ideas.

× During the summertime it's really hard and during the rainy season.

✓ During the summertime, it's really hot and during the rainy season, it is cooler.

The word 'hard' is incorrect to describe weather; 'hot' is appropriate. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be completed for clarity.

× I prefer call Better because I'm really allergic to hot weather because it makes me sweat and it will melt my makeup.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I'm really allergic to hot weather as it makes me sweat and melts my makeup.

'Call Better' is incorrect; it should be 'cold weather.' Also, 'will melt' is changed to 'melts' to indicate habitual action.

× I think cold weather is bit more accessible compared to horde bidders during hot weather is there?

✓ I think cold weather is a bit more comfortable compared to hot weather.

The phrase 'horde bidders during hot weather is there?' is unclear and incorrect. It seems the student meant 'hot weather.' Also, 'accessible' is not appropriate here; 'comfortable' fits better.

× Or maybe there will be some current cards which will be really bad and we will be filled?

✓ Or maybe there will be some cold cards which will be really bad and we will be chilled.

The phrase 'current cards' is unclear; possibly meant 'cold cards' or 'cold spells.' 'Filled' is incorrect; 'chilled' fits the context.

× I prefer dry weather because that weather can make things really difficult like washing out, drying our clothes isn't really good.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather can make things really difficult, like washing out; drying our clothes isn't really good.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrect; 'wet' weather is the intended meaning. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Example if when we wash our clothes and put it on this sun to dry, if it's wet climate it will be really difficult to dry up.

✓ For example, when we wash our clothes and put them in the sun to dry, if the climate is wet, it will be really difficult to dry them.

Incorrect prepositions 'on this sun' should be 'in the sun.' Also, 'if it's wet climate' should be 'if the climate is wet.' Pronouns corrected for agreement.

× Usually I don't have a habit of checking whether, uh, I will just predict it my own or in some cases I check in my phone because an iPhone provides weather forecasting so that it's really easy for me to check.

✓ Usually, I don't have a habit of checking the weather; I just predict it myself, or in some cases, I check on my phone because my iPhone provides weather forecasts, so it's really easy for me to check.

'Whether' is incorrect; should be 'the weather.' 'Predict it my own' should be 'predict it myself.' 'Check in my phone' should be 'check on my phone.' Also, sentence structure improved.

× I often check that, but I think it's really, it's really not that accurate or precise.

✓ I often check that, but I think it's not very accurate or precise.

Repetition of 'it's really' is unnecessary. 'Not very' is more natural here.

× The nobody's climate has changed entirely because I think there's a lot of difference in climate.

✓ Nobody's climate has changed entirely, but I think there are many differences in climate.

'The nobody's climate' is incorrect; 'Nobody's climate' is correct. Also, sentence structure improved for clarity.

× Maybe this is due to the overexploitation of conventional fields like fireward Exedra and improper based management and deforestation, which main cause of global warming.

✓ Maybe this is due to the overexploitation of conventional fields like firewood extraction, improper land management, and deforestation, which are the main causes of global warming.

Incorrect words 'fireward Exedra' corrected to 'firewood extraction.' 'Improper based management' corrected to 'improper land management.' Also, 'which main cause' corrected to 'which are the main causes.'

× And there are lots of.

✓ And there are lots of other factors as well.

The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× Yes, I really want to like to visit different cities, different countries.

✓ Yes, I really want to visit different cities and different countries.

'Want to like to visit' is redundant; 'want to visit' is correct.

× I think like countries like Germany an A state called Kashmir, which is in my country itself.

✓ I think of countries like Germany and a state called Kashmir, which is in my country itself.

'An A state' corrected to 'and a state.' 'I think like countries like' corrected to 'I think of countries like.'

× Cashman. Cashman is really cold Kashmir thing during this time of spring.

✓ Kashmir is really cold during this time of spring.

'Cashman' is a mispronunciation of 'Kashmir.' The sentence is corrected for clarity.

× It's really beautiful to visit there and the climate is also big good Cumber till the.

✓ It's really beautiful to visit there, and the climate is also very good during that time.

'Big good Cumber till the' is incorrect; corrected to 'very good during that time.' Sentence structure improved.