Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more coherent and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clearer explanations. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'it is very unnecessary' which is unclear.

Example: The weather in Delhi is usually hot and humid, which makes me sweat a lot. Moreover, pollution worsens the situation, making the air feel heavy and uncomfortable.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for better flow. Also, avoid repeating words like 'fresh' and try to be more concise.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it keeps me calm and refreshed. Additionally, I can stay active without feeling exhausted in cooler temperatures.

Suggestion: Avoid informal contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar mistakes.

Example: I prefer wet weather because I have dry skin. Therefore, dry weather makes my skin even drier, causing discomfort and pain.

Suggestion: Make your sentences clearer and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' properly. Also, try to be more concise and grammatically correct.

Example: Yes, I frequently check the weather forecast because the weather in our city is unpredictable. Therefore, I need to know whether to carry an umbrella or dress accordingly.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar.

Example: There are several negative effects of climate change. Due to pollution from vehicles and industries, temperatures are rising, causing glaciers to melt and harming the environment.

Suggestion: Try to combine your sentences for better flow and avoid vague phrases like 'good weather'. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because many places have more pleasant weather. We live in our city mainly for work, but ideally, I would prefer to settle in a mountainous region with cooler weather.

× And it is very. Unnecessary and because of the pollution it is like this.

✓ And it is very unnecessary, and because of the pollution, it is like this.

The original sentence has a misplaced period and lacks proper punctuation, which disrupts the flow and clarity. Correct punctuation and conjunction use improve readability and meaning.

× I prefer cold weather because cold weather keeps me calm and it makes me fresh feel fresh and on the other hand I can do whatever I want without getting exhausted.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it keeps me calm and makes me feel fresh; on the other hand, I can do whatever I want without getting exhausted.

The phrase 'makes me fresh feel fresh' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'makes me feel fresh.' Also, adding a semicolon and commas improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I prefer wet weatherby 'cause I have a dry skin, so dry weather will make my skin more dry and it will tear off and create some kind of pain.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I have dry skin, so dry weather will make my skin drier and it will crack and cause some kind of pain.

The phrase 'weatherby 'cause' is incorrect; it should be 'because.' Also, 'a dry skin' is incorrect; 'dry skin' is uncountable and does not take 'a.' 'More dry' is better expressed as 'drier.' 'Tear off' is not appropriate for skin; 'crack' is better. 'Create some kind of pain' is better as 'cause some kind of pain.'

× Yes, I frequently check weather forecast becauses in our city the weather is very unpredictable, so you cannot decide what to wear and what weather we have to take umbrella with us or not.

✓ Yes, I frequently check the weather forecast because in our city the weather is very unpredictable, so you cannot decide what to wear and whether we have to take an umbrella with us or not.

The phrase 'check weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the.' 'Becauses' is a typo for 'because.' Also, 'what weather we have to take umbrella' is incorrect; it should be 'whether we have to take an umbrella.' The article 'an' is needed before 'umbrella.'

× The there are various effects, I would say side effects because of climate change, because there's the climate is increasing because of the pollution and the motor vehicles and industrial emissions.

✓ There are various effects, I would say side effects, because of climate change; the climate is warming due to pollution from motor vehicles and industrial emissions.

The original sentence has redundant and awkward phrasing such as 'The there are' and 'there's the climate is increasing.' Correcting to 'There are' and rephrasing for clarity improves the sentence. Also, 'climate is increasing' is incorrect; 'climate is warming' is appropriate.

× The climate is getting hot and humid, which is in turn's melting the glaciers and harming environment.

✓ The climate is getting hot and humid, which in turn is melting the glaciers and harming the environment.

The phrase 'which is in turn's melting' is incorrect; the correct form is 'which in turn is melting.' Also, 'harming environment' needs the definite article 'the' before 'environment.'

× Yes. Because many countries or many places have a good weather.

✓ Yes, because many countries or many places have good weather.

The phrase 'a good weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a.' Removing 'a' is correct.

× In our city, we are living just because we have to work here.

✓ We live in our city just because we have to work here.

The phrase 'we are living' is less natural here; 'we live' is preferred for habitual action. Also, 'in our city' is better placed after the subject for clarity.

× Otherwise, we would have settled down in a mountain region so that we could have all the cold weather with us.

✓ Otherwise, we would have settled down in a mountainous region so that we could enjoy cold weather.

'Mountain region' is better expressed as 'mountainous region.' The phrase 'have all the cold weather with us' is awkward; 'enjoy cold weather' is clearer and more natural.