Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan ejaan, serta buat kalimat lebih alami dan efektif. Misalnya, gunakan 'two main seasons' bukan 'two men seasons', dan hindari kalimat yang terputus seperti 'while in the rainy season is.'

Example: I live in a country with two main seasons: summer and the rainy season. During summer, the weather is usually hot and sunny, while in the rainy season, it often rains heavily and the temperature becomes cooler.

Suggestion: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it helps me feel more relaxed and comfortable. For example, when it's cold, I enjoy activities like reading a book or drinking hot tea. This kind of weather often boosts my energy and motivation to be active.

Suggestion: Jawaban sudah cukup baik, namun gunakan kata kerja yang tepat seperti 'relaxed' bukan 'relax' dan tambahkan linking words untuk kelancaran.

Example: I prefer wet weather because I find it cooler and more refreshing than dry weather. Moreover, I enjoy the gloomy atmosphere it creates, which makes me feel calm and relaxed. For example, I love listening to the sound of rain while reading a book indoors.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat lengkap serta jelas. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before starting my activities. It helps me to prepare for the day.

Suggestion: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak lengkap. Perlu menjawab langsung dengan kalimat lengkap dan memberikan contoh spesifik.

Example: I think the effects of climate change in recent years include unpredictable weather patterns, such as sudden storms and extreme temperatures.

Suggestion: Jawaban tidak sesuai dengan pertanyaan. Fokus pada menjawab apakah ingin mengunjungi kota dengan iklim berbeda dan berikan alasan.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather conditions and cultures.

× I live in a country that has two men seasons, summer and the rainy season.

✓ I live in a country that has two main seasons, summer and the rainy season.

The word 'men' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'main' to describe the primary seasons. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects clarity.

× During summer, the weather is usually hot and sunny, while in the rainy season is.

✓ During summer, the weather is usually hot and sunny, while in the rainy season, it is rainy.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject in the second clause. Adding 'it is rainy' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Often rains heavily and the temperature becomes cooler.

✓ It often rains heavily and the temperature becomes cooler.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' as the subject corrects the sentence structure.

× I prefer cold weather because it helps me more. Relax and comfort table.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it helps me relax and feel comfortable.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into one sentence with proper verbs improves clarity and grammar.

× For example, when the weather is cold, I can enjoy 'cause activities like reading a book or drinking hot tea, also called weather, often boots my energy and motivation to be active.

✓ For example, when the weather is cold, I can enjoy activities like reading a book or drinking hot tea. Also, cold weather often boosts my energy and motivation to be active.

The sentence has incorrect conjunctions and unclear phrases ('cause activities', 'also called weather'). Separating into two sentences and correcting vocabulary improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I usually checking the weather forecast.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast.

The verb 'checking' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the simple present 'check' after 'usually'.

× Every morning when I before. Starting my activities. Anne.

✓ Every morning before I start my activities.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Combining into one complete sentence corrects the structure.

× It can help me because I can get prepared for that.

✓ It can help me because I can prepare for that.

The phrase 'get prepared' is less natural here; 'prepare' is the correct verb form. Also, 'that' is vague but acceptable in context.

× I think the effects of climate change in recent years is the weathers.

✓ I think the effects of climate change in recent years are the weather patterns.

'Effects' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. 'Weathers' is incorrect; the correct term is 'weather patterns' or simply 'weather'.

× Sometimes cannot be predictable. Ann. Uh. It's.

✓ Sometimes, the weather cannot be predicted.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting into a complete sentence corrects the structure.

× I believe the effects of climate change interest in years are evident through increasingly unpredictable weather patterns, including sudden storm prologue drought, an intense had heat waves.

✓ I believe the effects of climate change in recent years are evident through increasingly unpredictable weather patterns, including sudden storms, prolonged droughts, and intense heat waves.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'interest in years' should be 'in recent years'; 'storm prologue drought' is incorrect and should be 'storms, prolonged droughts'; 'an intense had heat waves' should be 'intense heat waves'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.