Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Try to make your sentences complete and coherent, and avoid unnecessary pauses. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "The weather where I live is mostly sunny for about eight months of the year. We have a short winter lasting around two months, and it rains occasionally during some months."

Example: The weather where I live is mostly sunny for about eight months of the year. We have a short winter lasting around two months, and it rains occasionally during some months.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your preferences clearly. For example, you can say: "I usually prefer cold winter weather because it allows me to be cozy at home. Also, I only need to wear a jacket when going out. On the other hand, hot weather makes me feel low and decreases my energy."

Example: I usually prefer cold winter weather because it allows me to be cozy at home. Also, I only need to wear a jacket when going out. On the other hand, hot weather makes me feel low and decreases my energy.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to connect your ideas. For example: "I love dry weather because it makes me feel energetic and comfortable when I go outside. However, wet weather is usually cloudy and dark, which can be a bit depressing for me."

Example: I love dry weather because it makes me feel energetic and comfortable when I go outside. However, wet weather is usually cloudy and dark, which can be a bit depressing for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and avoiding repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example: "Yes, I have a daily habit of checking the weather forecast in the morning after breakfast so I can plan my day accordingly. Additionally, I check it again before going out to be on the safe side."

Example: Yes, I have a daily habit of checking the weather forecast in the morning after breakfast so I can plan my day accordingly. Additionally, I check it again before going out to be on the safe side.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. For example: "I believe climate change has had detrimental effects in recent years due to pollution and increased population congestion. The primary impact is on the weather, which has become hotter than usual."

Example: I believe climate change has had detrimental effects in recent years due to pollution and increased population congestion. The primary impact is on the weather, which has become hotter than usual.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but fragmented. Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas smoothly. For example: "Yes, definitely. Since the climate where I live is mostly hot, I would love to visit a city with a cold climate. Experiencing cold weather and going out in such conditions is on my bucket list."

Example: Yes, definitely. Since the climate where I live is mostly hot, I would love to visit a city with a cold climate. Experiencing cold weather and going out in such conditions is on my bucket list.

× The weather where I live is mostly sunny, especially during. Major. Part of the year like 8 months and only two months is winter and it sometimes rains in few months.

✓ The weather where I live is mostly sunny, especially during the major part of the year, like 8 months, and only two months are winter, and it sometimes rains in a few months.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure with unnecessary periods and missing articles. 'Major part' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Only two months is winter' has subject-verb agreement error; 'months' is plural so verb should be 'are'. Also, 'in few months' needs the article 'a' to become 'in a few months'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I usually prefer. Winter cold. But simply because we can be cozy at in our house as well as there is no need to worry except to wear just one jacket and go out.

✓ Well, I usually prefer winter cold simply because we can be cozy in our house, and there is no need to worry except to wear just one jacket and go out.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect preposition usage ('at in'). Combining the fragments into one sentence improves flow. 'At in' is incorrect; 'in' is the correct preposition for 'our house'. Also, 'except to wear' is better expressed as 'except wearing' or 'except to wear' but here 'except to wear' is acceptable. Overall, restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× On the other hand, hot weather I find with. Low as well as my energy also decreases.

✓ On the other hand, I find hot weather low, and my energy also decreases.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. 'Hot weather I find with low' is incorrect; the correct order is 'I find hot weather low'. Also, 'as well as' is used incorrectly; 'and' is more appropriate here to connect the two ideas. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and grammar.

× I love dry weather because. It is more energetic and I feel comfortable whenever I go out in that kind of weather, only other hand wet in a during bad days it's usually cloudy or dark outside which is bit depressing for me.

✓ I love dry weather because it is more energetic, and I feel comfortable whenever I go out in that kind of weather. On the other hand, wet weather during bad days is usually cloudy or dark outside, which is a bit depressing for me.

The original sentence has improper punctuation and sentence fragments. 'Because.' should not have a period. 'Only other hand wet in a during bad days' is incorrect; it should be 'On the other hand, wet weather during bad days'. Also, 'which is bit depressing' needs the article 'a' before 'bit'. These corrections improve sentence structure and clarity.

× Oh yes, definitely I. Have everyday habit to check weather in the morning so that I can prepare my day on the basis of what's the degree outside.

✓ Oh yes, definitely I have an everyday habit of checking the weather in the morning so that I can prepare my day based on the temperature outside.

The original sentence has fragmented structure and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. 'Have everyday habit' needs the article 'an' before 'everyday habit'. Also, 'check weather' should be 'checking the weather'. 'On the basis of what's the degree outside' is awkward; 'based on the temperature outside' is clearer and grammatically correct. These changes improve sentence fluency and correctness.

× And as well as I also checked before going out for safe side.

✓ And I also check before going out for safety's sake.

The original sentence uses past tense 'checked' inconsistently with the habitual action context. Since the habit is ongoing, present tense 'check' is appropriate. Also, 'for safe side' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'for safety's sake'. These corrections align tense and idiomatic usage properly.

× Well, I believe that there has been detrimental effect due to climate change in recent years because of pollution and increase congestion Zypper in populations there mean the primary impact has.

✓ Well, I believe that there has been a detrimental effect due to climate change in recent years because of pollution and increased congestion in populations. The primary impact has been on the weather.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'increase congestion Zypper in populations there mean'. Correcting to 'increased congestion in populations' and completing the sentence with 'The primary impact has been on the weather' improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'detrimental effect' needs the article 'a' before it.

× because it has become more hotter than usually it chappie.

✓ because it has become hotter than usual, it is chappie.

'More hotter' is incorrect because 'hotter' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is unnecessary. 'Usually' should be 'usual' as an adjective. The word 'chappie' is unclear; if it is a local term, it should be clarified or replaced. The sentence is corrected to proper comparative form and adjective usage.

× Oh yes, definitely. The climate where I live is much hotter on most of the days, so I would love to visit a country or city which is really code so that I can also. See and feel. A cold, especially. Going out in that kind of weather is in my bucket list.

✓ Oh yes, definitely. The climate where I live is much hotter on most days, so I would love to visit a country or city which is really cold so that I can also see and feel the cold. Especially, going out in that kind of weather is on my bucket list.

The original sentence has multiple sentence fragments and spelling errors ('code' instead of 'cold'). 'Most of the days' is better as 'most days'. 'See and feel a cold' is awkward; 'see and feel the cold' is correct. 'In my bucket list' should be 'on my bucket list'. These corrections improve sentence structure, spelling, and idiomatic expressions.