Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and redundancies. Try to give a clear, concise description of the weather using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences and avoid repeating ideas.

Example: The weather in my hometown is mild throughout the year. It is neither too hot nor too cold, which makes it comfortable to live in. I really enjoy the climate because it allows me to spend time outdoors.

Suggestion: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Provide a complete sentence stating your preference and explain why you like that weather. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing warm clothes like jackets and trousers. Also, the shorter days in winter make the season feel cozy and relaxing.

Suggestion: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrases. Try to express your preference clearly and explain your reasons with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to plan outdoor activities without worrying about rain. Also, I don't have to check the weather forecast constantly, which makes going outside more convenient.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear statement about your habit and specify when and how often you check the forecast. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: I usually don't check the weather forecast, except during the rainy season. At that time, I check the forecast on my mobile phone regularly to avoid any problems caused by bad weather.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear content. Try to directly address the effects of climate change with specific examples. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to make your point clear.

Example: Climate change has caused many problems in recent years, such as extreme weather events. For example, in my country, unusual rainfall patterns have led to floods during seasons that are usually dry.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Clearly state your interest in visiting cities with different climates and explain why, using linking words and complete sentences.

Example: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my hometown. I enjoy learning about different cultures and experiencing new environments, which makes traveling exciting for me.

× My hometown has a places later throughout the year.

✓ My hometown has places later throughout the year.

The article 'a' should not be used before the plural noun 'places'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× So it is mile.

✓ So it is mild.

The word 'mile' is incorrect here; the intended adjective is 'mild' to describe the weather.

× Neither. Too hard, not too cool.

✓ Neither too hot nor too cool.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Using 'Neither too hot nor too cool' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× Wish make it compatible to live in.

✓ I wish it were comfortable to live in.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Using 'I wish it were comfortable to live in' correctly expresses the desire for comfortable living conditions.

× Which make it very convertible to live in.

✓ Which makes it very comfortable to live in.

The sentence lacks a subject and uses 'convertible' incorrectly. Adding 'which makes' and replacing 'convertible' with 'comfortable' corrects the sentence.

× I really enjoy my time maybe 'cause it is because.

✓ I really enjoy my time here because of the weather.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding a clear reason improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like cold weather the most because.

✓ I like cold weather the most because it is refreshing.

The sentence is incomplete; adding a reason completes the thought.

× Then day is too short.

✓ The days are too short.

'Then' is incorrect; 'The' is correct. Also, 'day' should be plural 'days' to match the context.

× NI find it interesting an ally to wear jackets and trousers in winter.

✓ I find it interesting and enjoyable to wear jackets and trousers in winter.

The phrase 'an ally' is incorrect; replacing it with 'and enjoyable' corrects the meaning.

× you don't need to look at where the forecasting forecasting.

✓ you don't need to look at the weather forecast.

The phrase 'forecasting forecasting' is redundant and incorrect; 'weather forecast' is the correct term.

× You don't need to worry about whether when you go outside.

✓ You don't need to worry about the weather when you go outside.

The phrase 'whether when' is incorrect; 'the weather' is the intended meaning.

× An I find it is more easy to more easy to go.

✓ And I find it easier to go out.

'More easy' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'easier'. Also, the sentence is repetitive and unclear.

× Actually I'm not used to check the weather forecasting.

✓ Actually, I'm not used to checking the weather forecast.

After 'used to', the verb should be in the '-ing' form. Also, 'weather forecasting' should be 'weather forecast'.

× Bed during rainy seasons.

✓ But during rainy seasons.

'Bed' is a typo; it should be 'But' to contrast the previous statement.

× I have two.

✓ I have to.

Likely a typo; 'two' should be 'to' as part of 'have to' meaning necessity.

× Check about about upcoming weather in my phone mobile phone to avoid any.

✓ I check the upcoming weather on my mobile phone to avoid any problems.

The phrase is repetitive and ungrammatical; correcting word order and removing redundancy improves clarity.

× Because of climate change, they are a lot of problems on the arts in recent years, especially drugs.

✓ Because of climate change, there are a lot of problems in recent years, especially droughts.

'They are' is incorrect; 'there are' is correct for existence. 'On the arts' is unclear; likely 'in recent years' is intended. 'Drugs' is a typo for 'droughts'.

× In flight for is a bird in my country in there is rainy and cause the flat in other seasons in heart season.

✓ In my country, there are birds affected by the rainy season, which causes floods in other seasons, especially the hot season.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Rewriting for clarity and correcting plural forms improves understanding.

× Dave definitely I would like to travel to other city which are completely different time.

✓ Yes, definitely I would like to travel to other cities which have completely different climates.

'Dave' is likely 'Yes'. 'City' should be plural 'cities' to match 'other'. 'Time' is incorrect; 'climates' fits the context.

× It's from my hometown.

✓ They are different from my hometown.

'It's' refers to singular; 'they' is needed for plural 'cities'.

× Hometown I like to learn different cultures from.

✓ I like to learn different cultures from other places.

The sentence is awkward; rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× This time it's even do it has have is haha but climate I can read.

✓ This time, even though it has a different climate, I can adapt.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical; rephrasing conveys the intended meaning clearly.