Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免语法错误和不连贯的表达，句子应完整且逻辑清晰。建议用一两句简洁明了地描述天气特点，并用连接词衔接不同季节的天气变化。

Example: Ginger is a city with hot and humid weather. Although the winters are warm, summers are very hot with high temperatures.

Suggestion: 回答应避免语法错误和不完整句子，表达应自然流畅。建议直接说明偏好并给出具体原因，使用连接词使句子连贯。

Example: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy wearing skirts and going to the beach during my holidays, which makes me feel comfortable.

Suggestion: 回答中存在大量语法和表达错误，句子不完整且难以理解。建议用简洁完整的句子表达偏好，并具体说明原因。

Example: I prefer dry weather because I dislike humid weather. It makes my hair frizzy and my clothes feel wet, so I have to wash my hair more often.

Suggestion: 回答应避免断句和语法错误，句子应连贯且表达清晰。建议用完整句子说明习惯和原因，并使用连接词。

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day before going out because I need to choose appropriate clothes. If it is rainy, I always bring an umbrella.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子说明气候变化的具体影响，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Example: Rising global temperatures cause sea levels to rise, which threatens coastal cities. Besides, climate change leads to more frequent extreme weather events like floods that damage our society.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和拼写错误，表达不流畅。建议用完整句子表达愿望，并具体说明原因。

Example: Absolutely yes. I want to experience different kinds of weather, especially cities that have snow in winter because I have never seen snow since I was born.

× Because it is a host to city.

✓ Because it is a host city.

句子结构不完整，缺少必要成分。应将“a host to city”改为“a host city”，使表达完整且符合英语习惯。

× And.

单独使用连词“and”构成不完整句子，应删除或补充完整句子。

× Though in the winter the weather is warm, in the summer the weather is hot and it has high temperature.

✓ Though in the winter the weather is warm, in the summer the weather is hot and it has high temperatures.

temperature为可数名词，表示“温度”，此处应使用复数形式temperatures。

× My try is hot weatherby 'cause I enjoy wearing skirts and going to the beach to spend my holiday.

✓ My preference is hot weather because I enjoy wearing skirts and going to the beach to spend my holiday.

“try”用词错误，应为“preference”表示“偏好”；“weatherby”拼写错误，应为“weather because”。

× Which made me feel comfortable.

✓ This makes me feel comfortable.

句子缺少主语，且时态不符合上下文，应改为完整句子并使用一般现在时。

× Dry weather or trust me more.

✓ I trust dry weather more.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，正确表达应为“I trust dry weather more.”。

× And I dislike the humid weather.

✓ I dislike humid weather.

句首不宜用连词“And”，且“the humid weather”中“the”可省略，更自然。

× It made my here and my. Close, wet and covered boat and.

✓ It makes my hair close, wet and covered with sweat.

句子结构混乱，词语拼写错误，应调整为完整且通顺的句子。

× It made my hair 32 and I need to wear my wash my hair once today.

✓ It makes my hair sticky, so I need to wash my hair once a day.

“32”应为“sticky”，句子结构不完整且语法错误，需调整为正确表达。

× Before I going out.

✓ Before I go out.

“going”形式错误，作为时间状语从句应使用一般现在时“go”。

× Because I should choose work clothes I wear.

✓ Because I should choose the work clothes I wear.

句子缺少连接词，应加上“that”或调整结构使句子完整。

× If it is rainy day, I should bring my umbrella.

✓ If it is a rainy day, I should bring my umbrella.

“rainy day”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× The rising global temperature 'cause the.

✓ The rising global temperature causes the

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，且“'cause”应为“causes”。

× Sea level rise which rest and the coastal city.

✓ Sea level rise which affects the coastal cities.

“city”应为复数“cities”，且“rest”用词错误，应为“affects”。

× Besides, it cause more frequent weather events such as flawed which damage to our society.

✓ Besides, it causes more frequent weather events such as floods which damage our society.

“cause”应为“causes”，“flawed”应为“floods”，且“damage to”应为“damage”。

× I am dry experiencing the various kinds of weather, especially the cities that can snowed in the winter because I have never seen the note since I was born.

✓ I am eager to experience various kinds of weather, especially cities that can snow in the winter because I have never seen snow since I was born.

“dry experiencing”用词错误，应为“eager to experience”；“can snowed”应为“can snow”；“note”应为“snow”。