Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence fluency. For example, 'hot and humid' is contradictory for a desert climate, which is usually dry. Also, avoid sentence fragments like 'extreme. Sunlight.' Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I live in a desert climate, which means we usually have hot and dry days with cool nights. Because of the intense sunlight, people often wear hats and sunglasses to protect themselves.

Suggestion: Clarify unclear phrases like 'often sealed chili' and correct vocabulary errors such as 'comfort, rible'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep sentences concise.

Example: I prefer hot weather because I usually feel cold. Living in a warm climate makes me feel more comfortable and energetic, so I can be more productive when it's sunny and warm.

Suggestion: Avoid unclear and incorrect phrases like 'now but weather' and improve grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet weather is uncomfortable. When it rains, you cannot go outside easily and have to cover up every time you go out.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Correct phrases like 'hot and humid' for desert climate and 'outburst of ring'. Use linking words to explain your habits clearly.

Example: I rarely check the weather forecast because the weather is usually hot and dry here. However, I check it when the weather is about to change so I can prepare for any sudden rain.

Suggestion: Correct spelling errors like 'Moran' to 'more' and improve grammar such as 'have became' to 'have become'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific examples.

Example: Over the years, I think climate change has made weather patterns more unpredictable. For example, in the Philippines, we used to expect rainy or hot days during certain months, but now these patterns have become irregular, making it difficult to know when to plant crops.

Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments like 'covering up with a huge. Come forward dresses'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clear, natural descriptions.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit other cities, such as Switzerland, to experience the winter season. I think playing in the snow and wearing warm clothes would be a wonderful experience.

× people usually wear glasses and hats to protect them from extreme. Sunlight.

✓ people usually wear glasses and hats to protect themselves from extreme sunlight.

The preposition 'from' is correctly used, but the pronoun 'them' should be reflexive 'themselves' because the subject and object refer to the same people. Also, 'Sunlight' should not be capitalized and the period is misplaced.

× I prefer hot weather because I am naturally a cold person and often sealed chili.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I am naturally a cold person and often eat chili.

The word 'sealed' is incorrect here; the intended verb is likely 'eat'. 'Sealed' is an adjective or past participle unrelated to the context.

× Living in a warm climate helps me to feel more comfort, rible, and energetic.

✓ Living in a warm climate helps me to feel more comfortable, reliable, and energetic.

The word 'comfort' should be the adjective 'comfortable'. 'Rible' is a misspelling; likely intended 'reliable'. Adjectives are needed to describe feelings.

× I prefer dry weather because I think being in now but weather is extremely unconfortable.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I think being in wet weather is extremely uncomfortable.

The phrase 'now but weather' is incorrect; it should be 'wet weather'. Also, 'unconfortable' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'uncomfortable'.

× You cannot go anywhere you wanted to, you cannot just stay under the sun.

✓ You cannot go anywhere you want to, you cannot just stay under the sun.

The verb tense should be present 'want' to match the modal 'cannot'. 'Wanted' is past tense and incorrect here.

× Just need to cover up every time you go outside.

✓ You just need to cover up every time you go outside.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'You' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I rarely check weather forecast since I live in a desert climate so most of the time it is hot and humid.

✓ I rarely check the weather forecast since I live in a desert climate, so most of the time it is hot and humid.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'weather forecast'. Also, a comma before 'so' improves sentence clarity.

× I just checked weather when. The change of weather is getting nearer so I could prepare for any outburst of ring.

✓ I just check the weather when the change of weather is getting nearer so I can prepare for any outburst of rain.

The sentence has several errors: 'checked' should be 'check' to match habitual action; 'weather' needs 'the'; 'when.' should be connected to the next clause; 'could' should be 'can' for present ability; 'ring' is a typo for 'rain'.

× Over the years, I think climate change has made weather patterns Moran predictable.

✓ Over the years, I think climate change has made weather patterns more predictable.

The word 'Moran' is a typo; the correct word is 'more' to form the comparative adjective 'more predictable'.

× But now these patterns have became irregular and because of this, we no longer know when to plant our food for agricultural purposes.

✓ But now these patterns have become irregular, and because of this, we no longer know when to plant our food for agricultural purposes.

The verb 'became' is simple past tense; after 'have' the past participle 'become' is required.

× Yes, I do really like to visit other cities, for example Switzerland, where we can experience winter season.

✓ Yes, I really do like to visit other cities, for example Switzerland, where we can experience the winter season.

The adverb 'really' is better placed before 'do' for emphasis. Also, 'winter season' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I think playing in the snow and covering up with a huge. Come forward dresses would be a nice experience.

✓ I think playing in the snow and covering up with huge, comfortable clothes would be a nice experience.

The phrase 'Come forward dresses' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'comfortable clothes'. Also, the period after 'huge' is misplaced and should be a comma.