Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
Yes, I read. I write a lot, every day. You know, because I'm a high school student, so I need to do many homeworks in schools or writing some note in the class. So instead of articles, I always write a note.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
Wow, I prefer writing, uh, writing articles about some, you know, science fiction. Same. Because I can fully imagine the future scenarios in my mind and write them down. It's quite funny.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Well, in my childhood I always write down an article just a just about record, the daily routine in my daily routine. But now I always write some deep and meaningful items and things such as some scissors.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
Well, I like typing more because handwriting. I mess and mess in handwriting, so typing always is a quickly and efficient way to write down things. So I always type to write.
Examiner
How often do you keep diaries?
Candidate
You know, I don't like to keep and write some Diaries because I don't have that habit. But my classmates and my friend always have a diary book. They always write themes and record their daily life in it. But I think it is so difficult.
Examiner
What other methods do you use to record your life?
Candidate
As for me, I prefer take some pictures for beautiful items and record your daily routine by picking a picture in your photograph and you can record them by watching your photographs.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: 回答要更直接并保持句子简洁，避免重复（如多次使用“you know”或“so”）。注意时态和名词单复数（homework 不可数）。可以用一两句概括原因，再用一两句举例支持。
Example: Yes, I write every day because I'm a high school student and often have homework. For example, I regularly take notes during lessons and write short summaries after class to review.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: 减少填充词（uh, you know, same），直接给出主题句并提供具体细节说明为什么喜欢科幻，例如想象力、构建世界或人物。
Example: I enjoy writing science fiction because it lets me imagine future worlds and technologies. For instance, I like creating stories about space travel and how people adapt to new planets.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答不清晰且有逻辑与词汇错误（如重复、'items such as some scissors' 无意义）。先回答是否会改变，然后具体比较过去与现在的写作内容，提供明确例子。
Example: Yes, my writing has changed. As a child I wrote simple daily diaries about my routines, but now I focus on deeper topics like characters' emotions and moral dilemmas in my stories.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 66.0Suggestion: 句子结构需更自然，避免重复（'mess and mess'）。先给出偏好并解释原因，使用连接词使句子流畅。
Example: I prefer typing because my handwriting is messy and slower. Typing is faster and easier to edit, so I usually type my notes and stories.
How often do you keep diaries?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 直接回答频率（e.g., never, rarely）并说明原因，避免模糊词。可以比较自己和朋友的习惯并给出具体例子。
Example: I rarely keep a diary because I don't have the habit of writing every day. My friends often write daily entries to record their thoughts, but I prefer taking photos instead.
What other methods do you use to record your life?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 表达要更准确，主语一致（不要从 'I' 突然变成 'you'）。先陈述偏好，再说明如何使用照片记录并举一两个具体例子。
Example: I prefer taking photos to record my life. For example, I photograph special meals or places I visit and later browse the pictures to remember events and write short captions.
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