Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and unclear phrases, and give one or two specific examples of what you write (e.g. essays, notes, forms). Use linking words if adding details.

Example: Yes, I write quite a lot. As a student I regularly write essays and reports for my courses, and I also complete administrative forms like tax documents. Because of this, I try to improve my writing skills by practicing every week.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear statement of what you like to write, then give specific reasons and an example. Avoid vague phrases and finish your sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: I enjoy writing personal reflections and short stories because they help me express emotions and explore ideas. For example, when I feel inspired I write a short scene to capture the mood and practice using descriptive language.

Suggestion: Answer directly and explain clearly how your writing changes with emotions. Give a specific contrast (e.g. longer vs shorter sentences) and an example of when this happened. Reduce hesitations and unclear words.

Example: Yes, my writing changes depending on my mood. When I'm happy I write longer, more detailed sentences, but when I'm upset I use shorter, sharper sentences; for example, after a stressful exam I wrote a short angry paragraph instead of a long reflection.

Suggestion: State your general preference and then explain with specific situations where you choose one method over the other. Use clear linking words like 'however' and 'when'. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: It depends on the situation: for lectures I prefer handwriting notes because it helps me remember, but for assignments and emails I usually type because it's easier to edit and organize. For instance, I handwrite during class but type essays on my laptop.

Suggestion: This answer is good but can be tightened. Keep the clear topic sentence, then give concise supporting details with linking words. Correct minor grammar and avoid repetition.

Example: I keep a diary every day. In middle school I wrote for my teacher, and now in college I write in English daily to practice the language and reflect on my experiences. I plan to continue this habit in the future.

Suggestion: Be specific about the methods you use (e.g. social media posts, photos, voice memos) and give one clear reason why you use them. Avoid fillers and vague phrases like 'moments' without explanation.

Example: I use several methods to record my life. For example, I post short updates and photos on social media to capture fun moments, and I also use my phone's voice memo app to record thoughts when I'm busy because it's quick and convenient.

× Yes, I do as a student, I, uh, often need to make a compensation to finish my tax uh, you know, as a middle journey and college student rather competence is a important skills.

✓ Yes, I do. As a student, I often need to complete my tax forms; as a middle school and college student, writing competence is an important skill.

The original sentence has unclear structure, run-on clauses, wrong word choices and article errors. 'Make a compensation to finish my tax' is incorrect; use 'complete my tax forms' or 'finish my taxes.' 'Middle journey' is not a correct phrase; likely 'middle school.' 'Rather competence is a important skills' has article and number errors; correct to 'writing competence is an important skill.' Split into two sentences for clarity and flow.

× Let me think how an interesting question and I think right can explain my emotion and ideas.

✓ Let me think; that's an interesting question. I think writing can express my emotions and ideas.

The original mixes clauses and uses incorrect determiner and verb forms ('an interesting question' needs to be separate; 'right' is wrong word; 'explain my emotion' should be 'express my emotions'). Rephrase into two clear sentences and use plural 'emotions' and 'writing can express' for correct meaning.

× You can use gentle words to write some sentence.

✓ You can use gentle words to write some sentences.

'Some sentence' is singular while 'some' requires plural; change to 'some sentences.' Also 'gentle words' is acceptable but pluralizing 'sentence' fixes the noun-adjective agreement.

× It's very.

✓ It's very effective.

Original is a sentence fragment lacking a noun or adjective to complete 'very.' Add an adjective such as 'effective' to complete the thought.

× Yes, I think my reading does change when I get funny, angry or uh, which one emotion one night upsetting my toy usually become heirsher and my sentence are shorter because I want to 1.

✓ Yes, I think my writing changes when I feel happy, angry or upset; my tone usually becomes harsher and my sentences are shorter because I want to be direct.

Multiple issues: 'reading does change' should be 'writing changes' to match context; 'funny' misused for 'happy'; 'which one emotion one night upsetting my toy' is unclear and likely 'upset'; 'heirsher' is misspelling of 'harsher'; subject-verb agreement 'my sentence are' should be 'my sentences are.' Also sentence was incomplete; completed with 'because I want to be direct.'

× I think it's much better to judge case by case.

✓ I think it's much better to judge on a case-by-case basis.

Idiomatic expression is 'judge on a case-by-case basis.' Original misses prepositions and hyphenation; corrected phrase improves idiomatic and grammatical accuracy.

× If you take class, you need to handwriting notice on your paper that you can use your phone or computer to type in your notice and fix your and fixed.

✓ If you are in class, you need to handwrite notes on your paper, but you can use your phone or computer to type and edit your notes later.

Several problems: 'take class' should be 'are in class' or 'take a class'; 'handwriting notice' incorrect—use 'handwrite notes'; 'type in your notice and fix your and fixed' unclear—use 'type and edit your notes.' Prepositions and verb forms fixed and sentence split for clarity.

× So I'm often.

✓ So I often handwrite in class and type notes when preparing later.

Original is a fragment. Provide a complete sentence explaining the intended habit: 'I often handwrite in class...' This fixes sentence structure and clarifies meaning.

× I keep a diary every day.

✓ I keep a diary every day.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. It is included for completeness because it matches allowed types; singular 'a diary' is appropriate for a daily habit.

× When I was in middle school, I had to bring it to my teacher, and in college I used to write in English everyday to practice my language skill and reflect on my experience.

✓ When I was in middle school, I had to bring it to my teacher, and in college I used to write in English every day to practice my language skills and reflect on my experiences.

Minor issues: 'everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'; the correct adverb is 'every day.' 'language skill' should be plural 'language skills' and 'experience' better as plural 'experiences' in this context.

× Uh, in the future, I think I will umm, use English to write my diary every day.

✓ In the future, I think I will write my diary in English every day.

Simplify wording and place 'in English' after 'write my diary' for natural word order. Tense 'will write' is correct; cleanup removes filler words.

× Uh, let me think. I, uh, I have many methods to record my life.

✓ Let me think. I have many ways to record my life.

Small stylistic cleanup: 'methods' is acceptable but 'ways' is more natural in spoken English. Remove filler words for clarity.

× Umm, as a college student, I need to stick to my strict daily life to improve my ability.

✓ As a college student, I need to stick to a strict daily routine to improve my abilities.

'Strict daily life' is awkward; 'strict daily routine' is natural. 'Ability' is vague and should be plural 'abilities' or specify which ability.

× So I just, uh, record my funny part on my moments.

✓ So I just post my funny moments on Moments (my social feed).

'Record my funny part on my moments' is ungrammatical. If referring to social media 'Moments,' use 'post my funny moments on Moments.' Adjust preposition and noun usage for clarity.

× Uh, you know, it's a very convenient and effective way.

✓ It's a very convenient and effective way to record my life.

Original fragment 'it's a very' was previously fixed; here extend to state purpose: 'to record my life.' This completes the thought and clarifies what is convenient and effective.