Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then give one or two specific examples. Reduce fillers (uh, umm, like) and correct word choice (e.g., 'reports' not 'rapport').

Example: Yes, I write a lot for university because I have many essays and research reports to complete. For example, last semester I wrote three major essays and a research report for my final project.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer then one reason and one brief example. Avoid repetition and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'stories' and 'diaries' or 'journal writing'). Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: I enjoy writing journals and short stories because journaling helps me reflect on my day and short stories let me be creative. For example, I often write a brief journal entry about my travel experiences to reflect on what I learned.

Suggestion: Answer directly (Yes/No/It depends) and explain clearly. Use linking words ('because', 'so') and precise phrases ('organize my thoughts', 'clarify my plans'). Avoid unclear words like 'virtually' and fragmented sentences.

Example: I don't think the content changes much because I mainly write to organize and clarify my thoughts. For instance, when I plan a project I write steps down so my ideas become clearer and more structured.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words ('because', 'so'). Correct grammar (e.g., 'it takes time', 'handwriting is tiring') and avoid repetitions and fillers.

Example: I definitely prefer typing because it's faster and less tiring, so I can write more without worrying about running out of paper or pens. For example, when I write essays I type them because I can edit quickly and save time.

Suggestion: Give a clear frequency statement first, then specify situations and give an example. Use numbers and time phrases to be specific and reduce fillers and repetition.

Example: I don't keep a daily diary, but when I travel I usually write almost every day. For example, during a recent three-country trip I wrote daily entries about what I did, how I felt, and interesting experiences.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a topic sentence listing main methods, then briefly give specific examples. Use correct phrases ('save tickets', 'collect postcards') and avoid unclear words. Use linking words like 'for example' to clarify.

Example: I mostly take photos and collect small mementos to record my life. For example, I save train tickets and postcards from trips and keep printed photos in a scrapbook to remember special moments.

× Uh, When it comes to like academic writing as an assignment of the university, I, I've been writing a lot like for my essays or like some status of study, umm, rapport research people like, but I'm not writing, uh, journal or something like that.

✓ When it comes to academic writing for university assignments, I have been writing a lot for my essays and research reports, but I am not writing journals or academic papers.

The original mixes present simple and present perfect incorrectly and uses informal fillers and incorrect noun forms ('status of study', 'rapport research people'). Use present perfect 'have been writing' to show continuing activity and present continuous or present simple for current state. Replace incorrect nouns with 'research reports' and 'journals or academic papers' for clarity. Remove filler words. Grammar problem type id: 6

× Uh, writing what I like to do, like writing a stories or day Diaries and Jo journals is not regular things to do, but umm, I like to write journals 'cause I want to re I want to do reflection.

✓ Writing stories or keeping a daily diary and journals is not something I do regularly, but I like to write journals because I want to reflect.

Errors: incorrect article 'a stories', incorrect pluralization 'Diaries' capitalization, and awkward phrase 're I want to do reflection'. Use 'a daily diary' or 'keeping a daily diary'; 'is not something I do regularly' corrects noun phrase agreement. Use 'reflect' (verb) instead of 'do reflection'. Grammar problem type id: 22

× Umm not change, uh, virtually or when I write, I wanna dis. I write to help uh, organize and design my thoughts and to clear what I wanted to do all my, uh, thoughts.

✓ Not really; when I write, I want to organize my thoughts. I write to clarify what I want to do and to sort out my ideas.

The original is fragmented and contains unclear words ('virtually', 'wanna dis'). Rephrase into complete sentences and use present simple/present infinitive for purpose: 'I write to organize my thoughts' and 'to clarify what I want to do'. Correct tense 'wanted' to 'want' to match present intention. Grammar problem type id: 26

× Definitely I prefer, uh, typing because just, it's easier for me to, uh, writing a lot and it's take a time and it's bit, uh, exhausted, exhausting to write, to buy handwriting and I, I don't have much, uh, materials.

✓ I definitely prefer typing because it is easier for me to write a lot; handwriting takes more time and is exhausting, and I don't have many materials for it.

Use infinitive 'to write' after 'easier for me' rather than gerund 'writing'. Correct 'it's take a time' to 'handwriting takes more time'. Use 'exhausting' as adjective for handwriting. 'Much materials' should be 'many materials'. Also simplify redundant fillers. Grammar problem type id: 8

× It's not regular things to do in my daily life, but when I, whenever I go to umm, 3 countries, like for travels or for short trip like study everywhere I write uh, almost every day what I did and what I experienced and what, what I my thoughts or feelings or.

✓ It is not a regular thing in my daily life, but whenever I travel to three countries for trips or short study visits, I write almost every day about what I did, what I experienced, and my thoughts and feelings.

Use singular 'a regular thing' instead of plural 'regular things'. Use 'travel' rather than 'go to 3 countries' and 'trips' plural. Simplify and correct noun phrases: 'short study visits'. Use parallel structure 'what I did, what I experienced, and my thoughts and feelings'. Grammar problem type id: 1

× For me, I'm taking a lot of pictures or collecting what I got or what I experience throughout the daily life or like schools, Hun Hun hand paper or what I got tickets or postcard.

✓ I take a lot of pictures and collect things I get or experience in daily life or at school, such as handwritten notes, tickets, or postcards.

Use simple present 'I take' for habitual actions. Replace 'throughout the daily life or like schools' with 'in daily life or at school'. 'Hun Hun hand paper' is unclear; assume 'handwritten notes'. Use plural 'tickets' and 'postcards' and correct prepositions: 'at school' and 'in daily life'. Grammar problem type id: 11