Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammar errors (e.g. use "it takes a long time", "a little bit").

Example: Not really. I don't write much because it takes a long time and I'm a bit lazy about it, so I usually prefer talking or sending quick voice messages.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer then provide two specific details. Use linking phrases like "for example" or "for instance" and correct grammar: "the only time I write is when I need to" and past tense consistency.

Example: I don't usually like writing; the only time I write is when it's necessary. For example, at university I ran a sports club blog where I wrote articles about MBA events and Formula One races.

Suggestion: Answer directly and politely ask for clarification if needed. Use one conditional sentence to explain reasoning, avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like "step down from that". Use linking words like "because" or "since".

Example: If you mean whether I would revise my past writings today, probably not. I wouldn't change them because they reflected my ideas at the time and I stand by those opinions.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference and give two concise reasons using linking words such as "because" and "also". Correct comparative grammar: "easier", "old-fashioned", and say "I prefer modern methods" rather than "I am more like modern type."

Example: I prefer typing because it's easier and much faster than handwriting. Also, I find handwriting quite old-fashioned and I like using modern tools like laptops or phones.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer in one sentence, then add one clear reason with linking words. Fix grammar: "I have never kept a diary", "my mum" (UK) and avoid extra filler words. Be specific about frequency or reasons.

Example: I've never kept a diary. My mum encouraged me to when I was young because it helps you remember the past, but I found it boring so I never persisted.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give one or two specific examples with linking words like "for example" and correct grammar: "I generally take photos" and "they help me remember moments". Avoid vague phrases like "it's enough from my side."

Example: I usually take photos to record my life because, for example, looking back at pictures helps me remember places and feelings. I also save posts on social media or keep a phone album for important events.

× No, I don't write a lot because it takes long time and I am little bit lazy about these things.

✓ No, I don't write a lot because it takes a long time and I am a little bit lazy about these things.

Missing article 'a' before 'long time' and missing article 'a' before 'little bit'. Use 'takes a long time' and 'a little bit lazy' for correct English. Use: 'it takes a long time' and 'I am a little bit lazy'.

× I generally talk.

✓ I generally talk more than I write.

The original is grammatically correct but unclear and incomplete in context. Adding 'more than I write' clarifies the contrast with writing mentioned in the question.

× I don't like writing the only time that I write only when I need.

✓ I don't like writing; I only write when I need to.

Redundant and awkward word order. Use a semicolon or full stop to separate ideas and place 'only' before the verb phrase: 'I only write when I need to.' Also include 'to' after 'need' when followed by a verb.

× In my university times I was working in a Sports Club, so I was writing blog for MBA and Formula One.

✓ When I was at university I worked in a sports club, and I wrote a blog about MBA and Formula One.

Use simple past for completed past actions ('worked', 'wrote') rather than past continuous. Use 'When I was at university' or 'during university' for natural phrasing. Use 'a blog about' instead of 'writing blog for'.

× I remember that specifically that times I was writing something about.

✓ I specifically remember those times when I was writing about various topics.

Original sentence is incomplete and has wrong demonstratives. Use 'those times' not 'that times' and complete the clause with the object of 'writing'.

× I don't understand your question whether very clearly, but if you ask me, would I change anything that I wrote in the past if I wrote right now?

✓ I don't understand your question very clearly, but if you ask me whether I would change anything I wrote in the past if I were writing now,

Awkward word order and tense. Place 'very clearly' after 'understand'. Use 'whether' with the reported question form. Use subjunctive 'if I were writing now' for hypothetical present; or 'if I were to write now'. Also remove duplicated 'would'.

× Probably not. I wouldn't change it because all all the things that I wrote in the past, it was my idea.

✓ Probably not. I wouldn't change them because everything I wrote in the past was my idea.

Number agreement and redundancy errors. 'Things' plural requires 'them' not 'it'. Remove duplicated 'all'. Use 'everything' or 'all the things' with consistent pronouns and simple past 'was' for completed past.

× So I wouldn't step down from that.

✓ So I wouldn't back down from that.

'Step down' means resign; 'back down' means withdraw an opinion. Use 'back down' to express not changing an opinion.

× I would prefer typing because typing is more easier than handwriting and handwriting takes long time.

✓ I prefer typing because typing is easier than handwriting and handwriting takes a long time.

'Would prefer' is acceptable but 'prefer' is more natural for general preference. 'More easier' is incorrect (double comparative); use 'easier'. Add article 'a' in 'a long time'.

× Besides, handwriting is very old fashion and I am more like modern type.

✓ Besides, handwriting is very old-fashioned and I prefer a more modern style.

Use hyphenated adjective 'old-fashioned'. 'I am more like modern type' is ungrammatical; use 'I prefer a more modern style' or 'I am more of a modern type'.

× I have never keep Diaries, when I was young my mom was always telling me to keep Diaries because it's always good for future.

✓ I have never kept a diary; when I was young my mum was always telling me to keep a diary because it's always good for the future.

Use past participle 'kept' with present perfect. 'Diaries' should be singular 'a diary' as a habit; 'mum' is British English; add article 'the' before 'future'.

× You will remember these days and enjoy but and at times it was very boring for my side so I didn't do it.

✓ You will remember those days and enjoy them, but at times it was very boring for me, so I didn't do it.

Use 'those' not 'these' when referring to past days. Add object 'them' after 'enjoy'. 'For my side' is incorrect; use 'for me'. Clean up conjunctions and comma placement.

× I do generally take photo because it's enough from my side when I look them in the future I will remember these days and how I enjoy and that thought in that photos.

✓ I generally take photos because that's enough for me; when I look at them in the future I will remember those days and how I enjoyed them and the memories in those photos.

Word order and form issues: 'do generally take' -> 'generally take'. Use plural 'photos'. 'It's enough from my side' -> 'that's enough for me'. Add 'look at them'. Use past 'enjoyed' for past recollection and 'memories' rather than 'thought'. 'In that photos' -> 'in those photos'.

× I it's very modern methods to record for your life.

✓ It's a very modern method to record your life.

Incorrect subject 'I it's' and plural 'methods' disagree with context. Use singular 'method' and correct word order: 'It's a very modern method to record your life.'