Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and directly answer the question with one clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitations and repetition (e.g., 'plan to plan'). Improve grammar (use 'I' not 'you') and word choice ('keep a notebook' or 'keep a diary').

Example: Yes, I write every day. I keep a diary where I schedule my tasks and reflect on my day, which helps me stay organized and focused.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence naming what you write, then give two specific reasons linked with a connective. Correct nouns and expressions (e.g., 'feelings', 'to-do lists', 'relieve stress'). Reduce repetition and filler words.

Example: I like to write about my feelings and make to-do lists because expressing my emotions helps relieve stress and writing lists helps me organize my daily tasks effectively.

Suggestion: Give a clear, chronological answer: briefly state your opinion and then explain how things changed with specific examples. Use past and present tenses correctly and avoid vague phrases like 'something routine'.

Example: Yes. As a child I only wrote about my daily routine, but over the years I started writing about work tasks and personal goals, such as project deadlines and plans for my career.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give two clear, specific advantages with correct grammar and comparative forms ('faster', 'more convenient'). Avoid filler words and repetition. Use 'typing' without article when referring to the activity.

Example: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient to carry on my phone or laptop. It also makes editing and searching my notes much easier.

Suggestion: Start with a clear frequency statement, then explain a specific benefit. Use correct vocabulary ('diary' not 'diet') and avoid repetition. Keep sentences short and precise.

Example: I write in my diary almost every day. Reviewing my entries lets me reflect on my actions and identify areas to improve, so it has become an important habit.

Suggestion: State one or two methods clearly and give specific details about how you use them. Avoid unclear phrases ('one of the YouTube I usually let go'). Mention realistic details and avoid unnecessary or unrelated information like exact subscriber count unless relevant. Correct grammar and word order.

Example: I also record videos for YouTube to document my daily routine and life events. Posting short vlogs helps me preserve memories and share practical tips with viewers.

× Yes, you do because I every day light a notebook, like a diary, which is really helpful to, uh, schedule my plan to plan, schedule my daily life.

✓ Yes, I do because I write in a notebook every day, like a diary, which is really helpful for planning my daily life.

Pronoun 'you' is incorrect for referring to the speaker; subject should be 'I'. 'Light a notebook' is incorrect verb choice; use 'write in a notebook'. Word order 'every day' should follow the verb. Use 'helpful for planning' not 'helpful to, schedule my plan'. Improve by using correct subject pronoun, appropriate verb collocations, and natural word order. Suggested practice: replace literal word-for-word translations with common English collocations (e.g., 'write in a diary', 'helpful for planning').

× Why I like to write about my feelings or my task to do in my daily life because writing my feeling helps me relieve my stress for stress and also the anxiety and also writing To Do List is is really helpful to organize my plot day day plan.

✓ I like to write about my feelings or the tasks I need to do in my daily life because writing about my feelings helps me relieve stress and anxiety, and writing a to-do list is really helpful to organize my day.

Beginning with 'Why I like' is incorrect structure for answering; use 'I like to...'. 'My task to do' is awkward; use 'the tasks I need to do'. 'Writing my feeling' should be 'writing about my feelings'. Redundant phrase 'relieve my stress for stress' is incorrect; use 'relieve stress'. Duplicate 'is is' and 'day day' are errors. Improve by simplifying sentence structure, using 'writing about' and correct noun phrases, and removing redundancies.

× Yes, I do because, uh, when I was a child, I write about the only about the right daily routine, but also that.

✓ Yes, I do because, when I was a child, I wrote only about my daily routine.

The time marker 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'wrote', not present 'write'. Phrases 'the only about the right' are ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'wrote only about my daily routine'. Use past tense consistently for past time references and simplify the phrase. Suggested practice: identify time markers and match verb tense accordingly.

× But after the over the years, I changed to, uh, right change writing about the task to do like such as the job or something routine.

✓ But over the years, I changed to writing about the tasks I had to do, such as work or routine activities.

Phrase 'after the over the years' is ungrammatical; use 'over the years'. 'Changed to writing' is correct pattern; use gerund 'writing' after 'changed to'. 'Task to do' should be 'tasks I had to do' or 'tasks to do'. Maintain past tense 'had to do' if referring to earlier changes. Remove filler words and reorder for clarity.

× I prefer a typing because it is more faster than the writing on with the pen and also it is really convenient to bring out and carry with me.

✓ I prefer typing because it is faster than writing with a pen and it is convenient to carry with me.

Use no article before uncountable noun 'typing'. 'More faster' is redundant; use 'faster'. 'The writing on with the pen' is incorrect — use 'writing with a pen'. 'Bring out and carry with me' is redundant; use 'carry with me' or 'take with me'. Improve by removing unnecessary articles, avoiding double comparatives, and simplifying phrasing.

× So I think it's it. I think typing is more, uh, easier for me.

✓ I think typing is easier for me.

'More easier' is a double comparative; use 'easier' only. Remove disfluencies like 'it's it' and filler 'uh'. Keep present simple 'is' to state preference.

× Almost every day I write down, uh, write, write down diet, diet every day, which is really uh good routine for me because it uh, I can re review my whole day.

✓ Almost every day I write things down about my day, which is a really good routine for me because I can review my whole day.

Phrase 'write down diet, diet' is unclear; likely intended 'write things down about my day' or 'keep a diary'. Use 'review' not 're review'. Maintain present simple for habitual action and remove repetitions and fillers. Use 'a really good routine' with article.

× So which is really important to improving myself.

✓ So that is really important for improving myself.

Use 'important for' or 'important to' + base verb; 'important to improving' is awkward. Better: 'important for improving myself' or 'important to my self-improvement'. Correct use of demonstrative 'that' instead of 'which' for a main clause. Suggestion: when summarizing, use 'that' + verb or 'This is important for...'.

× Umm, other methods to uh, other method I record in my life is one of the YouTube I usually let go.

✓ Another method I use to record my life is YouTube; I usually upload videos.

Sentence has misplaced phrases and incorrect pronouns. 'Other methods... other method' is redundant; use 'another method'. 'One of the YouTube I usually let go' is ungrammatical; likely meaning 'I usually upload videos to YouTube'. Use clear subject-verb-object order and the verb 'upload' for posting videos.

× I usually take a video for YouTube which is which I show daily routine.

✓ I usually take videos for YouTube in which I show my daily routine.

Use plural 'videos' if regularly creating content. 'Which is which I show' is ungrammatical; use 'in which I show'. Include possessive 'my' before 'daily routine'. Use correct relative clause placement.

× My subscriber is 1,000,000 so I think it's really good way to show my lifestyle.

✓ I have 1,000,000 subscribers, so I think it's a really good way to show my lifestyle.

Use plural 'subscribers' for count >1 and the verb 'have' to indicate possession. Add article 'a' before 'really good way'. Maintain present simple for current fact. Improved structure: 'I have 1,000,000 subscribers'.