Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb tenses, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: Yes, I used to write a lot by hand in the past, but now I write less often and mostly use my tablet for typing.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct response, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence clarity.

Example: I like to take notes during meetings because they help me summarize the main points and remember important information.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Respond directly to the question, clarify your ideas, and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically. Avoid unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, the things I write do change over time because my knowledge and understanding improve as I learn new information.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: Currently, I prefer typing because it is faster, and I can even use voice recognition software to convert my speech into text automatically.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons, linking your ideas smoothly.

Example: I never keep a diary because I don't like to record my past experiences; it's just not my style.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details to enrich your response.

Example: I like to take pictures when I visit new places, and sometimes I post them on my personal social media account to keep a record of my experiences.

× I do like a lot back then I like with the pen but did they?

✓ I did like writing a lot back then; I liked using a pen, but did they?

The sentence has issues with verb tense and plural forms. 'I do like a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'I did like writing a lot' to indicate past habit. 'I like with the pen' should be 'I liked using a pen' to correctly express past preference and verb usage.

× but did they?

✓ but did I?

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to themselves. It should be 'I' to maintain subject consistency.

× Sometime I lie with my finger in the tablet but I like less than previous.

✓ Sometimes I write with my finger on the tablet, but I like it less than before.

The word 'Sometime' should be plural 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'lie with my finger' is incorrect; it should be 'write with my finger'. 'in the tablet' should be 'on the tablet' due to preposition use. 'I like less than previous' is awkward; 'I like it less than before' is correct.

× I do take notes when I have a meeting, making a short note that make me summarize the point what I listen.

✓ I do take notes when I have a meeting, making short notes that help me summarize the points I listen to.

'making a short note' should be plural 'making short notes' to match the context. 'make me summarize' should be 'help me summarize' for correct verb usage. 'the point what I listen' is incorrect; it should be 'the points I listen to' with correct relative clause and preposition.

× What I write will change.

✓ What I write changes.

The sentence 'What I write will change' mixes tenses awkwardly. Since the question is about general change, present simple 'changes' is more appropriate.

× If you mean about the taking note, yes it can change the knowledge, the theory and when I write it daily, it's shame every day.

✓ If you mean taking notes, yes, it can change knowledge and theory, and when I write daily, it's a shame every day.

'the taking note' should be 'taking notes' for correct noun form. 'change the knowledge, the theory' should be 'change knowledge and theory' without articles. 'it's shame every day' is incorrect; it should be 'it's a shame every day' with the article 'a'.

× Right now I prefer typing and as well as we can typing without type.

✓ Right now I prefer typing, and we can also type without typing manually.

'as well as we can typing without type' is incorrect. It should be 'we can also type without typing manually' to correctly use modal and verb forms.

× You can like speak and then they automatically type.

✓ You can speak, and then it automatically types.

'You can like speak' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary. 'they automatically type' is incorrect pronoun usage; 'it automatically types' refers to the device or software.

× I'm not the person that write it daily.

✓ I'm not the person who writes it daily.

'that write' should be 'who writes' to agree with singular subject 'person' and correct relative pronoun.

× I just don't memorize the past.

✓ I just don't remember the past.

'memorize the past' is incorrect; 'remember the past' is the correct expression for recalling past events.

× I do like take a picture when I visit the new place sometime I pause in my social media and keep it on the my personal account.

✓ I like to take pictures when I visit new places; sometimes I pause on my social media and keep them on my personal account.

'do like take a picture' should be 'like to take pictures' for correct verb form and plural. 'the new place' should be 'new places' for generalization. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'pause in my social media' should be 'pause on my social media' for correct preposition. 'keep it on the my personal account' should be 'keep them on my personal account' for pronoun agreement and article use.