Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is quite detailed but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct verb tenses. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

Example: Yes, I write quite often. Every month, I summarize important events and people I've met in a report. On special days, I keep a daily journal to record memorable experiences. Writing like this helps me appreciate my youth.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them. Also, clarify your meaning, especially the last sentence, to make your answer more effective.

Example: I like to write simple daily stories. First, I jot down notes and keywords, then I write full stories to describe my experiences. This process helps me reflect on my life and appreciate special moments.

Suggestion: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has some hesitations and unclear phrasing. Try to avoid filler words and use clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: In the future, I would like to write more about my adventures and trips because I love exploring the world. I hope to become a travel blogger and share my personal experiences to inspire others.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Try to combine short sentences and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid informal expressions like 'OK' in formal speaking.

Example: It depends on the purpose. For writing stories or blogging, I prefer typing because it's faster and easier to save and share online. However, for special occasions like birthday cards, I always use my own handwriting.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words to connect sentences. Also, avoid vague expressions and be specific about your diary-keeping habits.

Example: I believe every day is worth writing about, but I usually note down highlights once a week. After a month, I have four diary entries. This helps me track my progress and remember important moments.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but contains unclear and awkward phrases. Try to use clearer vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, avoid irrelevant or confusing details to keep your answer focused and natural.

Example: Besides writing, I use photography to record my life. I enjoy taking photos of every corner of my city and even my small garden. I upload these pictures to my social media profiles to share my memories.

× what was the most impression thing was on my mind

✓ what was the most impressive thing on my mind

The adjective 'impression' is incorrect here; the correct adjective form is 'impressive' to describe the thing that left a strong effect on the mind.

× I jot everything down and and outline and I will add keywords

✓ I jot everything down and outline and I will add keywords

The repeated conjunction 'and' is redundant and should be used only once to connect the phrases properly.

× what event I'd have joined

✓ what event I had joined

The phrase 'I'd have joined' is incorrect in this context; the past perfect 'I had joined' correctly refers to an event that occurred before another past time.

× I cannot create a reflection to see how wonderful my love was

✓ I cannot create a reflection to see how wonderful my life was

The word 'love' is likely a typo or incorrect word choice; 'life' fits the context of reflecting on personal experiences.

× the trips that I have yet because I I I have a passion for exploring the world

✓ the trips that I have yet to take because I have a passion for exploring the world

The phrase 'have yet' is incomplete; it should be 'have yet to take' to indicate trips not yet experienced. Also, repeated 'I' is a speech filler and should be omitted in writing.

× I will use my own personal experiences in my trips yet to tell people how that life would be

✓ I will use my own personal experiences in my future trips to tell people what that life would be like

The word 'yet' is misplaced; 'future trips' clarifies the intended meaning. Also, 'how that life would be' should be 'what that life would be like' for correct expression.

× I hope that I will that will come true

✓ I hope that will come true

The phrase 'I will that will' is redundant and incorrect; removing the extra 'I will' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× typing much faster and it much easier for me to save the files

✓ typing is much faster and it is much easier for me to save the files

The verbs 'is' are missing before 'much faster' and 'much easier'; these are necessary for correct sentence structure.

× Their every day is worth wise being written

✓ Every day is worth wisely being written

'Their' is incorrect possessive pronoun here; 'Every day' is the correct subject. Also, 'wise' should be the adverb 'wisely' to modify 'being written'.

× I see a week in

✓ I see a week in it

The phrase 'I see a week in' is incomplete; adding 'it' completes the expression meaningfully.

× I see it's a really good way for me to keep track of my progress

✓ I see it is a really good way for me to keep track of my progress

The contraction 'it's' is acceptable but expanding to 'it is' is clearer in formal writing.

× I have to say I'm a photo foodie and I can take every photo in every nook and cranny of this city and even live in my bank

✓ I have to say I'm a photo foodie and I can take photos in every nook and cranny of this city and even live in my building

The phrase 'live in my bank' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'live in my building' or 'apartment' fits better. Also, 'every photo' is awkward; 'photos' is more natural.