Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'this is my hobby to write a lot' and use simpler expressions such as 'I enjoy writing a lot in my free time.' Also, try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences for clarity.

Example: Yes, I enjoy writing a lot in my free time. I usually write about different topics depending on my mood and interests. Over time, my writing style has evolved as I learn new things.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons. Avoid vague phrases like 'make variation in my thinking style.' Instead, explain why you choose environmental topics and what impact you hope to have.

Example: I like to write about environmental problems because I care about nature and want to raise awareness. Writing on these topics helps me think critically and share important information with others.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains errors like 'grammatical arrows.' Use simple, clear language to express your ideas. Explain how your writing might improve or change over time with practice or new knowledge.

Example: Yes, I believe my writing will change in the future as I learn more and improve my skills. For example, I plan to use better grammar and vocabulary to express my ideas more clearly.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be more natural and concise. Use correct tense and smoother expressions. For example, say 'It has been my favourite hobby since childhood' instead of 'it become my favorite hobby.'

Example: I mostly prefer handwriting when I write because it has been my favourite hobby since childhood. I enjoy writing in notebooks more than typing on a computer.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by correcting minor grammar mistakes and using more natural phrases. For example, say 'I rarely keep diaries, maybe only a few times a year.'

Example: I rarely keep diaries, maybe only a few times a year. It's hard to maintain the habit because of my busy schedule, but when I do write, it helps me reflect on my thoughts and experiences.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Avoid vague phrases like 'routines also make variation.' Instead, clearly list the methods you use and explain briefly how they help you record your life.

Example: Besides diaries, I use my smartphone to take photos and notes. I also keep a schedule to organise my daily activities, which helps me remember important events in my life.

× Yes, this is my hobby to write a lot.

✓ Yes, writing a lot is my hobby.

The phrase 'my hobby to write a lot' is incorrect because 'hobby' is usually followed by a gerund (verb+ing) form, not an infinitive. So, 'writing a lot' is the correct form to express the hobby.

× Mainly I like to give preference to writing whenever I have a leisure time and I make variation in my writing with the change of time.

✓ Mainly, I like to give preference to writing whenever I have leisure time, and I make variations in my writing as time changes.

The phrase 'a leisure time' is incorrect; 'leisure time' is uncountable and does not need an article. Also, 'make variation' should be plural 'make variations' to indicate multiple changes. 'With the change of time' is better expressed as 'as time changes' for naturalness.

× I like to write about some critical situations like environment problems.

✓ I like to write about some critical situations like environmental problems.

The phrase 'environment problems' is incorrect; the adjective form 'environmental' should be used to modify 'problems'.

× In this way, I like to make variation in my thinking style and also provide some informative message to others along with my writing skills.

✓ In this way, I like to make variations in my thinking style and also provide some informative messages to others along with my writing skills.

'Make variation' should be plural 'make variations' to indicate multiple changes. 'Some informative message' should be plural 'some informative messages' because 'some' implies plural countable nouns.

× I think the writing would change with the change of time in the future.

✓ I think the writing will change as time changes in the future.

Using 'would' here is incorrect because the sentence expresses a future prediction. 'Will' is the correct modal verb for future certainty. Also, 'with the change of time' is better expressed as 'as time changes'.

× My writing will definitely change because I decided to add some new grammatical arrows in my writing.

✓ My writing will definitely change because I have decided to add some new grammatical errors in my writing.

The past tense 'decided' is acceptable but 'have decided' is better to connect past decision with future change. Also, 'grammatical arrows' is likely a typo; it should be 'grammatical errors'.

× Since my childhood it become my favorite hobby to write notebooks.

✓ Since my childhood, it has become my favorite hobby to write in notebooks.

The verb 'become' should be in present perfect tense 'has become' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'write notebooks' is incorrect; it should be 'write in notebooks'.

× That is why usually I give preference to handwriting instead of typing.

✓ That is why I usually give preference to handwriting instead of typing.

The adverb 'usually' is better placed after the subject 'I' for natural word order.

× I really rarely keep Diaries, maybe only a few time a year.

✓ I really rarely keep diaries, maybe only a few times a year.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. 'A few time' is incorrect; it should be 'a few times' because 'times' is plural when referring to occurrences.

× Some other methods I usually use to record my life including using smartphones, Diaries, schedule.

✓ Some other methods I usually use to record my life include using smartphones, diaries, and schedules.

The verb 'including' is incorrect here; it should be 'include' to agree with the plural subject 'methods'. Also, 'Diaries' and 'schedule' should be lowercase and pluralized as appropriate.

× Moreover, routines also make variation in order to record my life that become a main part of my life.

✓ Moreover, routines also make variations in order to record my life that become a main part of my life.

'Make variation' should be plural 'make variations' to indicate multiple changes.