Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer clearly by starting with a direct response and then adding supporting details.

Example: I don't write very often. Usually, I type messages or notes on my phone to remind myself of important things.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Be more specific about how writing helps you.

Example: I like to write about my feelings and ideas because it helps me organize my thoughts and reduce stress when I overthink.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, clarify your points with specific examples or explanations.

Example: Not always, but sometimes my thoughts change after writing because it helps me see things more clearly and make better decisions.

Suggestion: Reduce filler words and improve sentence flow by using linking phrases. Also, try to add a reason or example to support your preference.

Example: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can easily edit my texts on my phone or computer.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating the same information and filler words. Give a clear and concise answer with a reason or explanation.

Example: I don't keep diaries because I prefer to remember my experiences without writing them down.

Suggestion: Try to complete your sentences and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear explanation.

Example: I don't usually record my life through photos or videos. Instead, I prefer to keep memories in my mind.

× I'm not the kind of person that, uh, pick up a pen and writes out whatever is in his mind on the papers.

✓ I'm not the kind of person that, uh, picks up a pen and writes out whatever is in his mind on the papers.

The subject 'person' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'picks up' instead of 'pick up'. Also, 'writes' is correct for third person singular. This ensures subject-verb agreement.

× I do write some kind of texts on my phone or maybe some notes, uh, or maybe a couple of things that I should remember.

✓ I do write some kinds of texts on my phone or maybe some notes, uh, or maybe a couple of things that I should remember.

The phrase 'some kind of texts' is incorrect because 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' when referring to multiple types of texts. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× there are times that I just pick up a pen and write. Write what? Whatever is going on on my mind on some papers.

✓ There are times that I just pick up a pen and write. Write what? Whatever is going on in my mind on some papers.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'my mind'. The correct preposition is 'in' to indicate thoughts inside the mind.

× So, uh, scenarios would change in that cases.

✓ So, uh, scenarios would change in those cases.

The phrase 'in that cases' is incorrect because 'cases' is plural and should be preceded by 'those' instead of 'that' which is singular.

× everyone is typing all kind of texts.

✓ everyone is typing all kinds of texts.

The phrase 'all kind of texts' is incorrect because 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' when referring to multiple types.

× you barely can find anyone that is writing down with pens and papers, Uh, and I'm not a special one.

✓ you can barely find anyone who is writing with pens and paper, uh, and I'm not a special one.

The phrase 'writing down with pens and papers' is awkward; 'writing with pens and paper' is more natural. Also, 'papers' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'paper' is preferred.

× Well, I don't keep Diaries.

✓ Well, I don't keep diaries.

The word 'Diaries' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'diaries' is plural and should be lowercase.

× I don't keep Diaries. I don't write those kind of things down and I don't keep them in my library or somewhere else.

✓ I don't keep diaries. I don't write those kinds of things down and I don't keep them in my library or somewhere else.

The phrase 'those kind of things' is incorrect because 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' when referring to multiple things.

× I'm, I'm not the kind of person that, uh, try to save memories or capture them in all kind of forms.

✓ I'm, I'm not the kind of person that, uh, tries to save memories or capture them in all kinds of forms.

The subject 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'tries' instead of 'try'. Also, 'all kind of forms' should be 'all kinds of forms' to match plural.

× I like to memories stay in.

✓ I like memories to stay in.

The phrase 'I like to memories stay in' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'I like memories to stay in' to express preference.