Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

Example: To be honest, I don't write very often. I prefer reading or listening because I usually write only when it's necessary.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý dùng từ đúng ngữ pháp như 'freedom' thay vì 'freedoms' và câu nên mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I like to write novels because they give me the freedom to be creative and explore different ideas. For example, I can create unique characters and exciting plots, which makes writing enjoyable.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời giải thích rõ hơn ý kiến của mình.

Example: I don't hope my writing will be changed because I believe my original words best express my opinions. Changing them might alter the meaning unintentionally.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu hơi dài và có lỗi nhỏ. Nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh từ thừa và chú ý ngữ pháp.

Example: I prefer typing because my handwriting is bad and hard to read. Also, typing is more convenient and familiar to me.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì đúng và câu rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I don't write diaries now, but when I was younger, I used to write about three or four times a week because I didn't have many stories to record.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu hơi dài. Nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, chú ý chia động từ và dùng từ phù hợp.

Example: I'm not sure about other methods, but I prefer diaries to record my life. Writing helps me reflect on my daily experiences and feelings. I usually write in my diary every evening to keep track of my day.

× I'm not interesting writing umm

✓ I'm not interested in writing umm

The verb 'interesting' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the adjective 'interested' to express the speaker's feeling about writing. Use 'interested in' + verb-ing to indicate interest.

× I only write when I have the essential in uh.

✓ I only write when I have the essentials to write about.

The phrase 'the essential in uh' is unclear and uses incorrect preposition. It should be 'the essentials to write about' to indicate the necessary topics or reasons for writing.

× I would like to write the novels because they give me freedoms

✓ I would like to write novels because they give me freedom

'Novels' is plural, so 'the' is unnecessary here. Also, 'freedoms' should be singular 'freedom' as it is an uncountable noun in this context.

× which makes writing process very enjoyable and fulfilling.

✓ which makes the writing process very enjoyable and fulfilling.

The noun phrase 'writing process' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific process.

× I'm not really hope that's because I don't like anyone change my writing

✓ I don't really hope so because I don't like anyone changing my writing

'Hope' is not used with 'I'm not'; instead, 'I don't really hope so' is correct. Also, 'anyone change' should be 'anyone changing' to use the gerund after 'like'.

× this is the way to writing is the optimal way to express my opinion.

✓ this way of writing is the optimal way to express my opinion.

The phrase 'way to writing' is incorrect; it should be 'way of writing' to indicate the method or style.

× So if the changes they can inadvertently change my opinion.

✓ So if there are changes, they can inadvertently change my opinion.

The sentence lacks the correct subject 'there are' to introduce 'changes'. 'The changes they' is incorrect; it should be 'there are changes, they'.

× typing when is is really convenient and familiar to me.

✓ typing is really convenient and familiar to me.

The phrase 'typing when is is' is incorrect and redundant. It should be simply 'typing is'.

× Well, I'm not write Diaries, but uh, when I was wrong, I used to uh, about 3 or 4 times a week.

✓ Well, I don't write diaries now, but when I was young, I used to write about 3 or 4 times a week.

'I'm not write' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't write'. 'When I was wrong' is a mistake for 'when I was young'. Also, the verb 'write' is missing after 'used to'.

× because there's not much stories to take note in that.

✓ because there aren't many stories to take note of.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'stories' is countable, so 'many' is correct. Also, 'take note in that' should be 'take note of'.

× Writing help me reflect on my daily experience and feeling and I think it's the optimal way to capture memories I look back on later.

✓ Writing helps me reflect on my daily experiences and feelings, and I think it's the optimal way to capture memories I can look back on later.

'Writing help me' should be 'Writing helps me' for subject-verb agreement. 'Experience and feeling' should be plural. Also, 'memories I look back on later' needs 'can' for clarity.

× I usually write in my diary every evening to keep check on.

✓ I usually write in my diary every evening to keep track of things.

The phrase 'keep check on' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep track of'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without an object after 'keep check on'.