Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to be more concise and organise your ideas clearly. Start with a direct response, then add one or two supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I write a lot because I have loved it since childhood. For example, I often participate in writing competitions and have even received a trophy for my good handwriting.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: I like to write poems because they help me express my feelings and thoughts. Also, reading books inspires me to write and learn new perspectives.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to explain your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I think my writing can change over time. For instance, when I write about global warming, I hope to raise awareness so people stop cutting down too many trees.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use linking words to compare typing and handwriting.

Example: I prefer handwriting when writing essays or poems because it helps improve my skills. However, I have more experience with typing, but I tend to make more mistakes that way.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct answer and support it with clear reasons, using linking words for coherence.

Example: I keep my diary with me every day, especially when I go to my school. This helps me record my thoughts and experiences wherever I am.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and unclear. Try to be concise and organise your ideas logically with linking words.

Example: I use several methods to record my life, but mainly I write daily in my diary, which I call 'My Life Notes'. I usually write in it every night.

× since my childhood there is a competition of writing

✓ since my childhood there has been a writing competition

The phrase 'there is a competition' is incorrect when referring to a continuous event from the past to present. The correct form is 'there has been' to indicate the existence of the competition since childhood.

× I always score 100% marks in writing and I got a trophy given by my principal

✓ I always scored 100% marks in writing and I got a trophy from my principal

The verb 'score' should be in past tense 'scored' to match the past event. Also, 'given by my principal' is better expressed as 'from my principal' for clarity.

× as writing is my passion and I will follow it very significant

✓ as writing is my passion and I will follow it very seriously

The word 'significant' is an adjective and does not fit here. The correct adverb is 'seriously' to describe how the passion will be followed.

× I like to write poems because poem makes me more open towards the books

✓ I like to write poems because poems make me more open towards books

The subject 'poem' should be plural 'poems' to agree with the plural verb 'make'. Also, 'the books' should be 'books' as a general reference.

× I will acquire knowledge from books and write my thinking and perspectives to the paper

✓ I acquire knowledge from books and write my thoughts and perspectives on paper

The phrase 'write my thinking' is better as 'write my thoughts'. Also, 'to the paper' should be 'on paper' as the correct preposition.

× as these are not paper piece of paper, it's my feelings towards someone

✓ as these are not just pieces of paper, they are my feelings towards someone

The phrase 'paper piece of paper' is incorrect. It should be 'pieces of paper' in plural. Also, 'it's' should be 'they are' to agree with plural subject.

× When I write I obviously things the the writing that I have done will always change

✓ When I write, I obviously think that the writing I have done will always change

The sentence has word repetition and incorrect word usage. 'things' should be 'think', and the sentence needs commas for clarity.

× Then during my writing the people will get aware and stop being cutting the trees in a large quantity

✓ Then during my writing, people will become aware and stop cutting trees in large quantities

'The people' should be 'people' as a general group. 'Get aware' is incorrect; 'become aware' is correct. 'Stop being cutting' is incorrect; 'stop cutting' is correct. 'In a large quantity' should be 'in large quantities'.

× I prefer handwriting while writing the essay, poem or any paragraph because writing by my hand will enhance my writing skills whereas I got experience while typing

✓ I prefer handwriting while writing essays, poems, or any paragraphs because writing by hand enhances my writing skills, whereas I have more experience typing

The sentence needs plural forms for 'essay' and 'poem' to match 'any paragraph'. 'Writing by my hand' should be 'writing by hand'. 'Whereas I got experience' should be 'whereas I have more experience' for correct tense and clarity.

× There will be more mistakes than my writing I choose

✓ There will be more mistakes than in the writing I choose

The sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. Adding 'in the writing' clarifies the comparison.

× I often keep my Diaries with me daily as when I go to the institution where I study I keep it with my in my bag as where I move another city then the diary will be in my bag

✓ I often keep my diary with me daily; when I go to the institution where I study, I keep it in my bag. Even when I move to another city, the diary stays in my bag

'Diaries' should be singular 'diary' for consistency. The sentence is run-on and confusing; breaking it into smaller sentences improves clarity. 'Keep it with my in my bag' is incorrect; it should be 'keep it in my bag'.

× So I keep my diary with me daily without

✓ So I keep my diary with me daily without fail

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'fail' completes the phrase and makes the sentence meaningful.

× There are umpteen methods that can record my life as one of the most important method is writing daily on my diary

✓ There are many methods to record my life, and one of the most important methods is writing daily in my diary

'Umpteen' is informal and less appropriate here; 'many' is better. 'Method' should be plural 'methods' to agree with 'one of the most important'. 'On my diary' should be 'in my diary'.

× as I have given the name of my diary is my life notes whereas I preferably write everything at night in my diary

✓ I have named my diary 'My Life Notes', and I usually write everything at night in it

The sentence is awkward and incorrectly uses 'whereas'. Rephrasing improves clarity and correctness.