Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and grammatical errors, such as "it it" and awkward phrasing like "practicing writing for taking preparation." Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I wrote a lot when I was younger because it helped me prepare for job-related exams. Now, I am practicing writing to prepare for the IELTS exam, and I hope to continue improving this skill since it helps me express my ideas clearly.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting tense consistency and avoiding vague phrases like "daily life related things." Use more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I enjoy writing, especially when I was a student because I used to write my schedule to prepare for exams in an organized way. Nowadays, I write various things such as shopping lists, work schedules, and notes about my daily activities.

Suggestion: Your answer has many fillers like "uh" and "umm," which affect fluency. Also, there are grammatical errors such as "have write down" and "preference very overtime." Try to speak more fluently and use correct grammar. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly.

Example: The things I write depend on my current needs and interests, which often change. For example, when I make a shopping list, the items may vary over time because my preferences change.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains many fillers and some awkward phrasing like "write down in an exam paper more frequently and promptly." Try to reduce fillers and use clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer both typing and handwriting depending on the situation. When I have free time, I like typing because it improves my skills. However, when preparing for exams, I prefer handwriting since it helps me write faster and more accurately on exam papers.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes like "passing very busy schedule" and inconsistent capitalization of "Diaries." Try to use correct expressions and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I don't keep diaries very often nowadays because I have a busy schedule. However, when I was a student, I used to keep a diary where I wrote my schedules to prepare in an organized way.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors such as "My ideas enjoy this" and awkward phrasing "apply it in the in later." Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, provide specific examples and use linking words for coherence.

Example: Now, I usually use a mobile notebook app to record my memories, shopping lists, schedules, and other important information. This helps me keep everything organized and easy to access later.

× Yes, I used to write a lot when I was a bit young because it it helped me to take preparation for my job related exams.

✓ Yes, I used to write a lot when I was a bit young because it helped me to prepare for my job-related exams.

The phrase 'take preparation' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'prepare for'. Also, 'job related' should be hyphenated as 'job-related' because it is a compound adjective modifying 'exams'. The repeated word 'it' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× And now I am also practicing writing for taking preparation for IELTS exam and I hope that I will continue this skill because it helps me to express my ideas clearly.

✓ And now I am also practicing writing to prepare for the IELTS exam, and I hope that I will continue this skill because it helps me to express my ideas clearly.

The phrase 'for taking preparation' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to prepare for'. Also, 'IELTS exam' should have the definite article 'the' before it because it refers to a specific exam.

× Well, the writing is really my cup of tea.

✓ Well, writing is really my cup of tea.

The article 'the' before 'writing' is unnecessary here because 'writing' is used in a general sense. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× So when I was a student, I like to write my schedule because it helped me to prepare for my exam in a organized way.

✓ So when I was a student, I liked to write my schedule because it helped me to prepare for my exams in an organized way.

The verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame 'when I was a student'. Also, 'a organized way' is incorrect; it should be 'an organized way' because 'organized' starts with a vowel sound. 'Exam' should be plural 'exams' if referring generally.

× And today I also write down many things like my shopping list and my working schedule and even my daily life related things.

✓ And today I also write down many things like my shopping list, my work schedule, and even my daily life-related things.

'Working schedule' is better expressed as 'work schedule'. Also, 'daily life related things' should be hyphenated as 'daily life-related things' because it is a compound adjective. Commas are added for clarity in the list.

× The things, uh, what I write down actually depends on my present needs and uh, interests, uh, which can change frequently.

✓ The things I write down actually depend on my present needs and interests, which can change frequently.

The phrase 'what I write down' is unnecessary and awkward; 'The things I write down' is correct. Also, 'depends' should be 'depend' to agree with the plural subject 'things'. Unnecessary filler words 'uh' are removed for clarity.

× Uh, for example, uh, when I make a shopping list, the items I have write down might, umm, might change because my preference very overtime.

✓ For example, when I make a shopping list, the items I have written down might change because my preferences vary over time.

The phrase 'I have write down' is incorrect; the past participle 'written' is needed after 'have'. 'Preference' should be plural 'preferences' to match context. 'Very overtime' is incorrect; it should be 'vary over time'. Unnecessary filler words are removed.

× I prefer both based on the situation and needs.

✓ I prefer both depending on the situation and needs.

The phrase 'based on' is acceptable but 'depending on' is more natural here. No major grammatical error, but slight improvement for naturalness.

× Umm, when I, uh, actually when I have free time.

✓ When I have free time,

The sentence is incomplete and contains filler words 'umm' and 'uh' which should be removed for clarity. The corrected sentence is a proper clause.

× I like typing because it improves my typing skills.

✓ I like typing because it improves my typing skills.

No grammatical error found in this sentence.

× But when I prepare myself for exam, I prefer to write by hand because it helps me to write down in an exam paper more frequently and promptly.

✓ But when I prepare myself for an exam, I prefer to write by hand because it helps me to write on exam papers more quickly and accurately.

The phrase 'prepare myself for exam' needs the article 'an' before 'exam'. 'Write down in an exam paper' is awkward; 'write on exam papers' is better. 'More frequently and promptly' is unclear; 'more quickly and accurately' fits better in this context.

× Not very often to be honest, because these days I'm passing very busy schedule, but back when I was a student I used to keep Diaries and I wrote down my schedules in it so that I could take preparation in the organized way.

✓ Not very often, to be honest, because these days I have a very busy schedule, but back when I was a student, I used to keep diaries and wrote down my schedules in them so that I could prepare in an organized way.

'I'm passing very busy schedule' is incorrect; it should be 'I have a very busy schedule'. 'Diaries' should not be capitalized. 'I wrote down my schedules in it' should be 'in them' because 'diaries' is plural. 'Take preparation' is incorrect; 'prepare' is correct. 'In the organized way' should be 'in an organized way'.

× Well, now I normally use my mobile notebook where I can write down my memories and some recorded items like shopping list, schedule and other.

✓ Well, now I normally use my mobile notebook where I can write down my memories and some recorded items like shopping lists, schedules, and others.

'Shopping list' and 'schedule' should be plural to match 'items'. 'Other' should be 'others' to refer to additional items. Commas are added for clarity.

× My ideas enjoy this so that I can apply it in the in later and in organized way.

✓ I enjoy this because I can apply it later in an organized way.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'My ideas enjoy this' is incorrect; the subject should be 'I'. 'Apply it in the in later' is incorrect; corrected to 'apply it later'. 'In organized way' needs the article 'an' before 'organized'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.