Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I write a lot of essays to prepare for my school exams. Additionally, I practice writing to improve my skills for future opportunities.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Example: I like to write romantic fiction because I enjoy stories about love between couples. Writing these stories helps me improve my imagination and develop my writing skills.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Cố gắng cung cấp ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Example: Yes, I believe my writing will change in the future because I will learn new knowledge and experience different cultures. These changes will influence my perspective and improve the way I write essays.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn cho sự lựa chọn của bạn.

Example: I prefer typing because it is more convenient. I can use my phone or laptop anywhere, which makes typing easier than handwriting on paper.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

Example: I keep a diary only a few times a year because I am usually busy. However, when I write, it helps me reflect on my experiences. For example, I sometimes jot down important events or feelings during significant moments in my life.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về các phương pháp bạn sử dụng để ghi lại cuộc sống.

Example: I usually use my phone to record my life because it is easy to carry everywhere. I take photos, record my voice, and shoot videos to capture important moments.

× Yes I do, I write a lot of essay to preparing for my exam at school and also I have to uh practical for the writing IO exams to get a higher scores of my uh from my ability to preparing for my future.

✓ Yes I do, I write a lot of essays to prepare for my exam at school and also I have to do practical work for the writing IO exams to get higher scores from my ability to prepare for my future.

The word 'essay' should be plural 'essays' because 'a lot of' refers to multiple items. Also, 'scores' should be plural to match 'higher scores'. Additionally, 'to preparing' is incorrect; it should be 'to prepare' because after 'to' we use the base form of the verb.

× Yes I do, I write a lot of essay to preparing for my exam at school and also I have to uh practical for the writing IO exams to get a higher scores of my uh from my ability to preparing for my future.

✓ Yes I do, I write a lot of essays to prepare for my exam at school and also I have to do practical work for the writing IO exams to get higher scores from my ability to prepare for my future.

The phrase 'to preparing' is incorrect because after 'to' (a preposition or part of an infinitive) the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So 'to preparing' should be 'to prepare'. Also, 'have to practical' is incorrect; it should be 'have to do practical work'.

× Well, I would like to write a romantic fix because I I love something uh, romantic and sweet between a couple.

✓ Well, I would like to write a romantic fiction because I love something romantic and sweet between a couple.

The word 'fix' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'fiction'. Also, 'something romantic and sweet between a couple' is correct, but 'I I' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'I'.

× Well, I would like to write a romantic fix because I I love something uh, romantic and sweet between a couple.

✓ Well, I would like to write a romantic fiction because I love something romantic and sweet between a couple.

The repeated pronoun 'I I' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'I' to maintain proper sentence structure.

× So I think when I write a romantic essay, it's helped me to uh, improve my imagines and help me improve my writing skill.

✓ So I think when I write a romantic essay, it helps me to improve my imagination and helps me improve my writing skills.

The pronoun 'it's' (it is) is incorrect here; the present tense 'it helps' fits better. Also, 'imagines' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'imagination'. 'Help me improve my writing skill' should be plural 'skills' to match common usage.

× Yes, of course we got anything in the future, I will, uh, approve of new knowledge and new cultural.

✓ Yes, of course, we will get new things in the future, and I will acquire new knowledge and new culture.

The phrase 'we got anything' is incorrect; 'we will get new things' is appropriate for future tense. 'Approve of' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'acquire' or 'gain'. Also, 'new cultural' should be 'new culture'.

× And is this impact on me in my, uh, in my perspective and it's uh, effect in my, in the way I write an essay.

✓ And this impacts me in my perspective and it affects the way I write an essay.

'Is this impact on me' is incorrect; it should be 'this impacts me'. Also, 'it's effect in my' should be 'it affects' to correctly use the verb form. Prepositions 'on' and 'in' are misused here.

× So I think it's reaching in the future.

✓ So I think it will change in the future.

The phrase 'it's reaching' is incorrect; likely the intended meaning is 'it will change'. 'Reaching' is not appropriate here as a verb in this context.

× Well, in my opinion, I think typing is more convenient than handwriting because, uh, I can bring my phone, my laptop, uh, to anywhere I go to.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I think typing is more convenient than handwriting because I can bring my phone and my laptop anywhere I go.

The phrase 'to anywhere I go to' is incorrect; 'anywhere I go' is sufficient. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary and redundant.

× So it's easy to type in on the, uh, technology details more than like handwriting in the paper.

✓ So it's easier to type on technology than to write by hand on paper.

The phrase 'type in on the technology details' is awkward and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on technology'. Also, 'handwriting in the paper' should be 'write by hand on paper'.

× I really keep Diaries maybe just a few times a year.

✓ I really keep diaries maybe just a few times a year.

The word 'Diaries' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'diaries' is plural and should be lowercase.

× I find it hard to maintain their hobbies because I'm usually busy.

✓ I find it hard to maintain my hobbies because I'm usually busy.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect here because the subject is 'I'. The correct possessive pronoun is 'my'.

× But when I do write, it help me to reflect on my through experience.

✓ But when I do write, it helps me to reflect on my life experiences.

'It help' should be 'it helps' to agree with the singular subject. 'Through experience' is incorrect; likely intended is 'life experiences' or 'past experiences'.

× For example, I sometime jot down important events or feeling during significant moment in my life.

✓ For example, I sometimes jot down important events or feelings during significant moments in my life.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match 'events'. 'Moment' should be plural 'moments'.

× Uh, I usually use my phone to record my life because I think it's easy to recall, like taking a photo, record my voice, take a video.

✓ I usually use my phone to record my life because I think it's easy to recall, like taking photos, recording my voice, and taking videos.

The verbs should be parallel in form: 'taking photos', 'recording my voice', 'taking videos'. Also, 'a photo' should be plural 'photos' to match the general activity.

× So it's easy to, because, uh, I think we, we bring the phone to anywhere we go, So it's easy to take a record alive.

✓ So it's easy because I think we bring the phone anywhere we go, so it's easy to record life.

The phrase 'take a record alive' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'record life'. Also, 'to anywhere' should be 'anywhere' without 'to'.