Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'write' too often and try to link your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of listing types of writing separately, you can combine them and explain why you enjoy writing.

Example: Yes, I write quite a lot, including scientific essays, blogs, and posts. Writing helps me express my creativity, which I really enjoy.

Suggestion: Try to improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific. For example, explain what kind of knowledge and how it helps people.

Example: I enjoy writing blogs about new scientific discoveries because I believe sharing this knowledge helps people stay informed and make better decisions.

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation sounds like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Also, correct 'failed' to 'field'. Make your answer more fluent and clear.

Example: I don't think my writing topics will change because I am passionate about scientific writing and want to contribute to education in this field.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more concise.

Example: I generally prefer handwriting because it allows me to jot down ideas anytime and anywhere. Also, I always carry a notebook and pencil with me.

Suggestion: Complete your sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and explain why you keep diaries.

Example: I always keep my diary with me wherever I go because it helps me record my thoughts and daily experiences.

Suggestion: Correct spelling errors like 'zernal' to 'journal' and complete your sentences. Use linking words and be specific about digital methods.

Example: Besides my diary, I maintain a daily journal and also store memories digitally, such as photos and notes on my phone.

× I write scientific essays, blogs, posts.

✓ I write scientific essays, blogs, and posts.

In English, when listing three or more items, it is standard to use commas and include 'and' before the last item to clarify the list. This improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× I love to write blogs about new finding in scientific world because I believe that people should be aware of every knowledge and ideas that are generating which ultimately helps them.

✓ I love to write blogs about new findings in the scientific world because I believe that people should be aware of all the knowledge and ideas that are being generated, which ultimately helps them.

The phrase 'new finding' should be plural 'new findings' to match the context (plural). 'In scientific world' requires the definite article 'the' before 'scientific world'. 'Every knowledge and ideas' is incorrect; 'all the knowledge and ideas' is appropriate because 'knowledge' is uncountable and 'ideas' is plural. 'That are generating' should be 'that are being generated' to use the correct passive form.

× I would, uh, love to contribute, uh, to this failed where I can make an impact on education.

✓ I would love to contribute to this field where I can make an impact on education.

The word 'failed' is a typo and should be 'field'. 'Contribute to' is the correct prepositional phrase. This correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× I generally prefer handwriting because, uh, it uh, allows me the flex, flexibility of umm, jotting down my ideas wherever or whenever I I want as I, uh, in addition to that, I carry a notebook and pencil.

✓ I generally prefer handwriting because it allows me the flexibility of jotting down my ideas wherever or whenever I want. In addition to that, I carry a notebook and pencil.

The phrase 'allows me the flex, flexibility of' is awkward; 'allows me the flexibility of' is correct. The sentence was run-on and unclear; splitting into two sentences improves clarity. Removing filler words and repeated words also improves grammar and fluency.

× I keep my Diaries all the time with me.

✓ I keep my diary with me all the time.

The word 'Diaries' is plural but the context suggests a singular 'diary' is meant. Also, 'all the time with me' is better phrased as 'with me all the time' for natural English word order.

× I bring it everywhere wherever I go.

✓ I bring it everywhere I go.

The phrase 'everywhere wherever' is redundant. Using either 'everywhere' or 'wherever' alone is sufficient. 'Everywhere I go' is a natural and correct expression.

× I am diary kind of person so it allows me to have.

✓ I am the diary kind of person, so it allows me to keep track of my thoughts.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'the' before 'diary kind of person' and completing the sentence with a clear object improves sentence structure and meaning.

× I maintain a daily zernal and else and also I keep. Memory of everything in the digital format.

✓ I maintain a daily journal and also keep a memory of everything in digital format.

'Zernal' is a misspelling of 'journal'. The phrase 'and else' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Memory of everything' is vague; 'keep a memory' is acceptable but could be improved. 'In the digital format' should be 'in digital format' without 'the' for natural usage.