Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I don't write a lot, but I do make notes when necessary because it helps me remember important points. For example, I write reminders to ensure I don't forget tasks.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and coherence by organizing your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I like to write notes during class to help me study later. Also, I often send long text messages to my husband and loved ones to keep in touch.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases. Provide a clear prediction or opinion with examples.

Example: Yes, I believe writing habits will change because technology offers many alternatives like voice messages and video calls, which make communication easier and faster.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making sentences clearer. Start with a direct response, then explain your preference with specific reasons.

Example: I prefer typing because I am fast at it and find it more convenient to write notes or send messages on my phone.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent by reducing hesitation and using linking words. Provide clear reasons and examples to support your answer.

Example: I keep a diary daily because I am introverted and it helps me express my emotions and secrets. I also write my bucket list in it.

Suggestion: Clarify your answer by organizing it logically and correcting grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of methods you use.

Example: I use technology to record my life, such as taking photos and videos with my camera. Sometimes, I create blogs to capture and share my memories.

× I didn't like to write a lot whenever I have to send messages and making notes.

✓ I didn't like to write a lot whenever I had to send messages and make notes.

The sentence mixes past tense ('didn't like') with present tense ('have to send') and gerund form ('making'). To maintain past tense consistency, 'have' should be changed to 'had' and 'making' to 'make'.

× So that time I have to write because it's helped me to remember everything.

✓ So at that time I had to write because it helped me to remember everything.

The phrase 'have to write' is present tense and should be past tense 'had to write' to match the past context. Also, 'it's helped' should be 'it helped' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I I didn't miss any point.

✓ I didn't miss any point.

The repetition of 'I' is unnecessary and should be removed for grammatical correctness.

× If I write anything then it also kind of reminder.

✓ If I write anything, then it also serves as a kind of reminder.

The sentence lacks a verb after 'it' to complete the meaning. Adding 'serves as' clarifies the sentence structure and meaning.

× Ladies on situation when I was in class, that time I have to write, uh, for example, I have to make my notes.

✓ In situations when I was in class, I had to write; for example, I had to make my notes.

'Ladies on situation' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'In situations'. Also, 'have to' should be past tense 'had to' to match the past context.

× So that time I have preferred to write on my notebook as well as whenever I have to send text messages to my husband and my loved ones.

✓ At that time, I preferred to write in my notebook as well as whenever I had to send text messages to my husband and my loved ones.

'Have preferred' and 'have to' are present perfect and present tense forms, respectively, which should be changed to simple past 'preferred' and 'had to' to maintain past tense consistency.

× So that time I prefer to write a big notes.

✓ So at that time, I preferred to write big notes.

'A big notes' is incorrect because 'notes' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. The article 'a' should be removed and 'prefer' changed to past tense 'preferred'.

× Yes, I think with the advancement of technology, nowadays many people prefer to send voice messages as well as there are so many kinds of device which will help to stay connected with our loved ones.

✓ Yes, I think with the advancement of technology, nowadays many people prefer to send voice messages, and there are many kinds of devices which help us stay connected with our loved ones.

'Device' should be plural 'devices' to agree with 'many kinds'. Also, 'will help to stay' is better as 'help us stay' for clarity and correctness.

× So according to me, there are so much change in the future.

✓ So according to me, there will be so much change in the future.

The sentence talks about future change, so 'are' should be changed to future tense 'will be'. Also, 'so much change' is correct as 'change' is uncountable.

× At present, I prefer to typing because uh, I have known about the words and I am very fast in typing because I am my own phone so whenever I have to send text messages or making any notes in my phone.

✓ At present, I prefer typing because I know the words and I am very fast at typing since I use my own phone whenever I have to send text messages or make any notes on my phone.

'Prefer to typing' should be 'prefer typing' as 'prefer' is followed by gerund. 'I have known about the words' is incorrect; 'I know the words' is better. 'I am my own phone' is unclear and corrected to 'I use my own phone'. 'Making' should be 'make' to parallel 'send'. Prepositions 'at typing' and 'on my phone' are correct.

× I often keep Diaries on my daily basis because I'm very introvert, uh, through diary I can easily express my emotions, my secrets whenever I'm sad, happy and cheer.

✓ I often keep diaries on a daily basis because I'm very introverted; through my diary, I can easily express my emotions and secrets whenever I'm sad, happy, or cheerful.

'Diaries' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. 'On my daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. 'Introvert' is a noun; 'introverted' is the adjective needed here. 'Cheer' should be 'cheerful' to describe emotion.

× So that time I usually prefer to write, umm, my feelings on my diary.

✓ So at that time, I usually preferred to write my feelings in my diary.

'Prefer to write' should be past tense 'preferred to write' to match past context. 'On my diary' should be 'in my diary' as feelings are written inside a diary.

× And it's uh, kind of secret diary. I have also my bucket list.

✓ And it's a kind of secret diary. I also have my bucket list.

'Kind of secret diary' needs an article 'a'. 'I have also my bucket list' is better as 'I also have my bucket list' for natural word order.

× With the advancement of technology there are so many methods which I used to record my life.

✓ With the advancement of technology, there are many methods that I use to record my life.

'Used to' implies past habit; here present tense 'use' is appropriate. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory phrase.

× First of all I have own camera at my home so usually whenever I did any important work or also any type of video so that I might prefer to making blogs so which capture memory which helps to capture our memories.

✓ First of all, I have my own camera at home, so usually whenever I do any important work or record any type of video, I prefer to make blogs which capture memories and help to preserve them.

'I have own camera' needs possessive 'my own camera'. 'Did' should be 'do' for present habitual action. 'Might prefer to making' is incorrect; should be 'prefer to make'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.