Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
To be honest, I didn't like to write a lot whenever I have to send messages and making notes. So that time I have to write because it's helped me to remember everything. I I didn't miss any point. If I write anything then it also kind of reminder.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
Ladies on situation when I was in class, that time I have to write, uh, for example, I have to make my notes. So that time I have preferred to write on my notebook as well as whenever I have to send text messages to my husband and my loved ones. So that time I prefer to write a big notes.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Yes, I think with the advancement of technology, nowadays many people prefer to send voice messages as well as there are so many kinds of device which will help to stay connected with our loved ones. For example, video calls, audio calls, voice messages and so on. So according to me, there are so much change in the future.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
At present, I prefer to typing because uh, I have known about the words and I am very fast in typing because I am my own phone so whenever I have to send text messages or making any notes in my phone. So I usually prefer typing instead of handwriting.
Examiner
How often do you keep diaries?
Candidate
I often keep Diaries on my daily basis because I'm very introvert, uh, through diary I can easily express my emotions, my secrets whenever I'm sad, happy and cheer. So that time I usually prefer to write, umm, my feelings on my diary. And it's uh, kind of secret diary. I have also my bucket list.
Examiner
What other methods do you use to record your life?
Candidate
With the advancement of technology there are so many methods which I used to record my life. First of all I have own camera at my home so usually whenever I did any important work or also any type of video so that I might prefer to making blogs so which capture memory which helps to capture our memories.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words for coherence.
Example: I don't write a lot, but I do make notes when necessary because it helps me remember important points. For example, I write reminders to ensure I don't forget tasks.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and ensure your sentences are complete and natural.
Example: I like to write notes during class to help me study, and I also enjoy sending long text messages to my husband and loved ones to stay connected.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.
Example: Yes, I believe writing habits will change due to technology. Nowadays, people prefer voice messages and video calls, which make communication faster and more personal.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid filler words and ensure your answer directly addresses the question with supporting details and linking words.
Example: I prefer typing because I am fast at it and I usually use my phone to send messages or take notes, which is more convenient than handwriting.
How often do you keep diaries?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent by reducing hesitation and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for keeping a diary.
Example: I keep a diary daily because, as an introvert, it helps me express my emotions and secrets. I also write my bucket list in it to stay motivated.
What other methods do you use to record your life?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and improve grammar. Use linking words to organize your answer logically and provide specific examples of methods you use to record your life.
Example: I use technology to record my life, such as my home camera to take photos and videos. I also create blogs to capture and share important memories.
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